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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2008 8:03:43 GMT -5
Dear Family & Freinds i have gone to pursuit my dream, not like you care. You know the funny thing is that as a kid i dreamt i could be a wrestling star and here i am sitting writing this with a bottle next to me. The worst thing i feared happend to me, because as soon as i got into wrestling i lost connection to you and the other people i know. Dad I hope that your proud of beating me as a kid every day and smacking my mother in front of me. Because that made me become exactly what you didnt want me to be. With that being said as soon as i get my hands on you i will murder you in cold blood you mother*****. You think that i ruined my life, no i didnt you did. I found out that it either was my way or the highway and im happy that i choose my way because im soon going to climb to the top and become an icon. And Ise and you other son of a bit** dont think for a second that your stepping in with a rookie, your stepping in the ring with someone that knows you more than you do yourself! And for my tag partner....you know what i dont need one. I `ve fought my whole life and i have done it alone
Peace & Love
Jay
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Post by Wez on Jan 11, 2008 13:19:01 GMT -5
11 lines! wow.
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Post by kingofgoreobo on Jan 11, 2008 14:01:14 GMT -5
this read like a suicide note turned into angry teenager turned into a wrestling promo.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2008 14:03:00 GMT -5
Turned into garbage.
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Post by sonstuds on Jan 11, 2008 14:08:43 GMT -5
this read like a suicide note turned into angry teenager turned into a wrestling promo. Up until he mentioned Ise I seriously thought this was OOC.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2008 14:18:06 GMT -5
So good or bad?
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Post by Wez on Jan 11, 2008 14:23:30 GMT -5
bad, very bad.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2008 15:00:52 GMT -5
There are a lot of variables that would go into making the decision of whether it was good or bad.
Things that were bad, regardless: format.
I understand this was some sort of letter . . . and that could be an interesting way to portray your character if you did a little bit more to it. You need to set-up the scene (reference Wayne McGurk and Reverand Shadow [if you can find his stuff] for details).
Things that were bad if you are actually experienced like you say you are: former fed judges.
For letting you get away with this. If you've roleplayed before and been successful in any way shape or form . . . someone steered you in the wrong direction. This type of product will get you into a House Show dark match quicker than you can say Jake Slash.
Things that were bad if you're as experienced as you say you are but good if you're actually not: dialogue.
You definitely understand the concept of rolplaying . . . to bash your opponent and explain why you're here and why you're better. You get that, which is a plus . . . but if you've done this before, again . . . someone set you up for failure letting you go by thinking this is acceptable.
The basics (read: foundation) are there . . . but you really need to work on your delivery.
Suggestions: Read Obo's sticky on the House Show forum about what roleplaying is all about. Read works of people that have success here . . . the easiest way to do that is to find out who has title belts and look at their work.
A good thing to remember for an acceptable RP are the follwing:
Character Development Appropriate Setting WFWF Opponent Reference
You want to start some sort of story with your character. Based on the above . . . we really know nothing about you. Bring in other characters from your character's life if necessary. For great character interaction I would reference Thunder and Kurt Burton.
Get some dialogue going. Take a look at EBR's work to see how character dialogue really enhances an RP.
You're not going to get great overnight . . . but I'm making it a personal priority to make sure you "get it". Feel free to PM me with RP ideas and I'll give you some pointers, if you want to.
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Post by Calvin on Jan 11, 2008 15:30:02 GMT -5
This is a MUST. Or it appears to be..
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Post by matthardy on Jan 11, 2008 23:00:36 GMT -5
Who gave you permission to use me in your rp? Umm.. I didn't, that's for sure.. you have to get permission, ya know. (I mean yea opponent reference is good, but you didn't ask for permission) I guess you can slide this but ask next time. I don't think I'm facing a rookie, but really I did not give you permission!!
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Post by kingofgoreobo on Jan 11, 2008 23:16:57 GMT -5
Who gave you permission to use me in your rp? Umm.. I didn't, that's for sure.. you have to get permission, ya know. (I mean yea opponent reference is good, but you didn't ask for permission) I guess you can slide this but ask next time. I don't think I'm facing a rookie, but really I did not give you permission!! there's a difference in mentioning someone and actually having them appear. it's perfectly sensible to mention your opponent and not ask them..
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Post by Thunder on Jan 11, 2008 23:19:17 GMT -5
Who gave you permission to use me in your rp? Umm.. I didn't, that's for sure.. you have to get permission, ya know. (I mean yea opponent reference is good, but you didn't ask for permission) I guess you can slide this but ask next time. I don't think I'm facing a rookie, but really I did not give you permission!! That post is funny coming from you since you used Flamez in an RP without permission and purposely spelled his name wrong in it.
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Post by matthardy on Jan 11, 2008 23:58:13 GMT -5
Who gave you permission to use me in your rp? Umm.. I didn't, that's for sure.. you have to get permission, ya know. (I mean yea opponent reference is good, but you didn't ask for permission) I guess you can slide this but ask next time. I don't think I'm facing a rookie, but really I did not give you permission!! That post is funny coming from you since you used Flamez in an RP without permission and purposely spelled his name wrong in it. I had permission.... And I didn't purposely mis-spell his name, I just used that as an excuse.
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Post by kingofgoreobo on Jan 12, 2008 0:01:34 GMT -5
That post is funny coming from you since you used Flamez in an RP without permission and purposely spelled his name wrong in it. I had permission.... And I didn't purposely mis-spell his name, I just used that as an excuse. because everyone has been harassing you so much?
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Post by sonstuds on Jan 12, 2008 13:17:51 GMT -5
Who gave you permission to use me in your rp? Umm.. I didn't, that's for sure.. you have to get permission, ya know. (I mean yea opponent reference is good, but you didn't ask for permission) I guess you can slide this but ask next time. I don't think I'm facing a rookie, but really I did not give you permission!! Maybe you should stop giving people advice on what they can and can't do in RP's because that above statement was completely wrong. Explain why he can't mention your name in a RP.
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Post by kingofgoreobo on Jan 12, 2008 15:37:03 GMT -5
sarcasm?? what is sarcasm???
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Post by Calvin on Jan 12, 2008 20:25:23 GMT -5
That post is funny coming from you since you used Flamez in an RP without permission and purposely spelled his name wrong in it. I had permission.... And I didn't purposely mis-spell his name, I just used that as an excuse. leaving the fed for months and returning doesn't really mean you have permission. That's like saying oh, EBR said I could use him in rps two years ago, so I am going to use him in rps now and use that as an excuse. See how stupid it sounds?
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