madness1
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Post by madness1 on Jun 2, 2013 17:24:07 GMT -5
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DECAY
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"In the end we'll both rot together."
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Post by DECAY on Jun 3, 2013 5:21:26 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2013 16:59:36 GMT -5
Content currently unavailable? You have to log into facebook to view it lol. I really liked the art for sure, color would only add to the great universe you've created here. The lettering isnt too bad, its readable but hard to read at times. I liked how it was in 1st person you dont really see that much in comics today. The story was nice and it had a pretty good concept. At times it was kinda boring I think for future reference you should add a little more action since there wasnt much of a climax. In future issues it would be great to know who "you" really is. But not bad for the first issue. I think you actually have a good shot of getting it published I mean if it does, I'll support you man. (Sorry for being a little harsh lol)
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Post by Tye Hyll on Jun 4, 2013 1:35:04 GMT -5
Did you do the art work? Because it is phenomenal.
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madness1
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Post by madness1 on Jun 4, 2013 17:28:06 GMT -5
Did you do the art work? Because it is phenomenal. No I didn't, wish I was that talented
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madness1
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Post by madness1 on Jun 4, 2013 17:31:53 GMT -5
Content currently unavailable? You have to log into facebook to view it lol. I really liked the art for sure, color would only add to the great universe you've created here. The lettering isnt too bad, its readable but hard to read at times. I liked how it was in 1st person you dont really see that much in comics today. The story was nice and it had a pretty good concept. At times it was kinda boring I think for future reference you should add a little more action since there wasnt much of a climax. In future issues it would be great to know who "you" really is. But not bad for the first issue. I think you actually have a good shot of getting it published I mean if it does, I'll support you man. (Sorry for being a little harsh lol) Thanks for the critique. No not a lot of a action, was giving the audience the set up or exposition if you will. If I can get it published there will be plenty of action and romance...just kidding no romance.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 4, 2013 20:37:59 GMT -5
You have to log into facebook to view it lol. I really liked the art for sure, color would only add to the great universe you've created here. The lettering isnt too bad, its readable but hard to read at times. I liked how it was in 1st person you dont really see that much in comics today. The story was nice and it had a pretty good concept. At times it was kinda boring I think for future reference you should add a little more action since there wasnt much of a climax. In future issues it would be great to know who "you" really is. But not bad for the first issue. I think you actually have a good shot of getting it published I mean if it does, I'll support you man. (Sorry for being a little harsh lol) Thanks for the critique. No not a lot of a action, was giving the audience the set up or exposition if you will. If I can get it published there will be plenty of action and romance...just kidding no romance. Haha I hope it does man.
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Post by Tye Hyll on Jun 5, 2013 10:14:46 GMT -5
Did you do the art work? Because it is phenomenal. No I didn't, wish I was that talented Well you have a hell of an artist, good luck to you!
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