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Post by Deleted on Jun 29, 2013 21:12:32 GMT -5
I think it was alright, especially considering how long it's been since I've made one (probably 7 or 8 months) |
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jun 29, 2013 22:26:47 GMT -5
Nice to see another animation from you Josh. It's not bad considering the length since you last made a pivot ani. I think the front flip senton could have looked better if you added a slight squat and perhaps make the blue stick bend his back backwards and put his arms in the air to prevent stiffness and to make it portray the flip motion a little bit better. The flip itself was a bit choppy but the air time was ok and it didn't seem stiff so I don't see to many negatives in this ani tbh. The reaction lacked a bit of impact but other then pretty decent.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2013 14:07:09 GMT -5
This was very nice! The little set up was nice with the house and the sun. I think the blue stick figure was a bit stiff in the flip and in the reaction. The flip itself was good but it seemed to have a bit of choppiness turning into it which caused it to play fast in that part. The reaction from the pink stick figure was pretty good although it kinda seemed bland to me. I would've liked to see a pause at the beginning and end but other than that it was a solid animation.
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