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Post by Colter on Oct 13, 2013 11:51:49 GMT -5
Pretty much my best animation to date.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Oct 14, 2013 10:02:10 GMT -5
At the beginning I wasn't entirely sure what the motion within the first couple frames was indicating, but it didn't seem to sync well in par with the rest of the ani imo. I really like the squat immediately after from the lime green stick although the stick could have brought it's arms back a tad more to build more momentum into the flip itself. You seem to have a well balanced understanding of fluency/smoothness, right now the only thing that is of utmost importance in your case is spacing and some stiffiness, the ani flow quite nicely but the spacing was very overshot and somewhat sloppy so i'd suggest taking as much time needed to coordinate air time as best as you can.
The lime green stick was very stiff in his pelvis and back so be sure to more the joints as consistently as possible. There wasn't much of a reaction at the end but you can worry about that later. For what it's worth, I really like this ani. An applaud for effort goes out to you Colter.
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