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Post by Slim on Jul 13, 2014 12:47:26 GMT -5
One of my best I think. A comment would be great!
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ncw
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Post by ncw on Jul 14, 2014 2:47:55 GMT -5
The fed, fidgeting loop is distracting. It would have been good for Cena to move as well as Edge at the wriggling bit. An extension of Cena's arms would have been welcomed. For Cena to have lifted off of the floor would have bolstered up the animation. Cena also shouldn't have remained as upright as he was. He should have bent at the knees. Maybe not so much an oversell, but a greater impacted bounce from Edge would have looked better.
It's smooth, the lighting is consistently average, it's speeded correctly and is not too stiff.
5.4/10
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Post by Slim on Jul 14, 2014 3:51:42 GMT -5
The fed, fidgeting loop is distracting. It would have been good for Cena to move as well as Edge at the wriggling bit. An extension of Cena's arms would have been welcomed. For Cena to have lifted off of the floor would have bolstered up the animation. Cena also shouldn't have remained as upright as he was. He should have bent at the knees. Maybe not so much an oversell, but a greater impacted bounce from Edge would have looked better. It's smooth, the lighting is consistently average, it's speeded correctly and is not too stiff. 5.4/10 Thanks, my Cena figure can't stand properly lol so I can't bend his knees. |
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Post by EGLEJOEF16 OG on Jul 14, 2014 17:02:47 GMT -5
THATS GREAT
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Post by SE4NY on Jul 15, 2014 17:57:15 GMT -5
Not a proper comment man. Its a good animation, its a little bit stiff, movements seemed a little weird in the air, but other than that it was smooth, reactions weren't bad, couldn't see much string, I think you need to work on using a few more frames as its a little choppy but you did great! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 22, 2014 20:21:50 GMT -5
How do I move up from a jobber to mid-card
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Post by Slim on Jul 23, 2014 4:41:28 GMT -5
How do I move up from a jobber to mid-card I don't know why you comment this here, whatever... To be a mid-carder, you need to have 50 posts. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2014 14:47:22 GMT -5
nice i'm loving the whole sound effect blend with these gif they have now
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