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Post by JL24FPS on Jul 27, 2014 11:24:27 GMT -5
Poster by JoshWF: IndyRiffic"Welcome to INDYRIFFIC 2014! Live from the local youth center! Official Theme for IndyRiffic 2014- Cannibal by Silversun Pickups"Let’s get to the action! The Opening Contest for INDYRIFFIC 2014 is for the Number One Contender’s Match for the Intercontinental Championship! It looks as if Brandon and Dane didn’t show up. I guess it’s a one on one match now! Intercontinental Title 1# Contender matchAc3 vs. Brandon vs. Marvyntaker vs. Dane-Stip: Huricanranna countered into a running Corner Powerbomb Ac3 Marvyntaker How to vote on matches No polls or bad replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. However you need to compare with the other animations in the match. Put thought into your votes, don't just say who you are voting and leave a sentence, put some effort in. 3) Forum status must be above Jobber If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10, but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2014 11:43:05 GMT -5
Ace: I really liked Aj Style's hurricanrana movements at the start, it had a really cool flow to it. But after that both Samoa and AJ became stiff. AJ's arm's kinda just fluctuated in the same position and Samoa's back was almost in the exact same position. The animation really dipped once the two reached the turnbuckle. It was really nothing like the actual move which was simply a powerbomb thrown near the lower turnbuckles. The animation was pretty smooth but it did have fidgets as well.
Marvyn: Definitely not as smooth as Ace's but I really liked how it was realistic to the actual stip. Rey Mysterio was a bit stiff after his jump onto Sheamus' shoulders and I really think you nailed Sheamus' throw. Of course the running wasn't the best, it was fidgety and overall wonky looking, but the animation did have a better flow than Ace's and it is more realistic to the actual move.
Vote: Marvyn
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Post by el torro on Jul 27, 2014 12:07:20 GMT -5
Ace: Right from the start the failed hurricanrana looked odd. You almost can't tell that AJ was attempting the move. You should have had a slight pause to show that Joe has him caught. The running after that was not done well and both men were kinda leaning forward which looked awkward. The powerbomb didn't have much impact and really did not like how Joe did not let go of AJ AT ALL. He fell with AJ still on his shoulders, balls on his face. Seemed weaked. Other nitpicks were shadows and string visible. Also, the figures have such awkward positions with their arms looking all crazy. Really have no idea why you prefer to animate with those figures.
Marvyn: The jump/bend from Rey was really slow and hardly bent his knees and for such height that Rey got, you have to bend the knees man. Sheamus was stiff throughout while catching Rey. Like Ace, there should have been a little pause when Rey is upside down, however you at least had it at a slower speed so it wasn't as fast and sloppy as Ace. The running was a tad slow and I appreciate how you at least attempted to move the joints much more than Ace during the steps. Impact however was meh. It wasn't really a powerbomb seeing that Rey landing face first and not on his back. Did not like the dead reaction or the sudden stop of movement on both men.
Both had huge faults, but I'm gonna go with...
VOTE: MARVYNTAKER
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Post by Jack on Jul 27, 2014 13:55:27 GMT -5
Ace - Huricanranrana looked pretty weird too me, I could barely recognise it. Running was pretty weak, both men felt like they were leaning in the wrong direction. I felt Joe should have let go from the powerbomb more, that would have given it more impact. Shadows and String visible.
Marvyn - Jump was very slow, looked like he put no effort into it. Sheamus was stiff throughout. Running also looked weird, but you made more effort with the joint movements and realism. Reaction was dead, and the impact was pretty meh.
Both pretty weak, but Marvyn probably put more effort into it, so I vote him.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2014 5:04:15 GMT -5
Ace: The animation was fairly smooth, it had a good flow but overall seemed a bit slow paced. Joint movement was a major problem during the whole animation, AJ barely moved at all and Samoa Joe didn't move his joints at all during the whole thing. Impact was completely non-existent which was annoying, no rope bounce, no reaction to the landing of the buckle bomb, really lazy stuff there. Reaction wise it was again severely lacking, nether guys really reacted to the move, AJ only had a small arm movement then it was over. Otherwise the lighting was good and I only saw strings in the frames you used it, not one of your best to say the least. 2.5/10 Marvyntaker: The animation wasn't as smooth as Ace's and it seemed to be slower than his aswell. Joint movement wise it was better because you actually moved the joints in the opening part, a bit more during the running powerbomb would've made it better though. Impact was severely lacking and I would say largely non-existent, the ropes shaked a tiny bit but that was it, I liked that you actually had the victim landing on the mat not just having the guy doing the move falling with him, it shows that you weren't as lazy as Ace was. Reaction wise it was again non-existent, Rey landed onto his front and then just lay there until the end, he should've at least held his in pain or something like that. Lighting was pretty good and the pan was alright, I didn't see string. 3/10 Vote: Marvyntaker
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Post by ncw on Jul 28, 2014 6:26:21 GMT -5
Ac3 - You should have bent Joe's knees and torso in the middle of the struggle with AJ Styles. I think that the struggle didn't really look like one at all. AJ should have kicked his legs and wiggled a bit, if you were going for a battle. Joe to have run to the turnbuckle would have made this look more impactful. It was stiff. It was smooth. AJ not being hurled off from Joe made the move look botched. More so, Styles' collapsing on Joe, looked elderly and poor.
Rating: 4.0/10
Marvyntaker - It was quite lagging. It wasn't massively stiff, but more of the time, the joints ought to have been utilised more. A reaction from Rey getting thrown to the canvas would have done this move more justice in believability in recreation. I liked that you tried to have Sheamus run by making him leap for a bit. I thought that the transitions were unnatural and contrived. I would have liked Shemaus to have shown his stabilising when forcing against Rey's force, in getting him into the powerbomb position - yes Rey's far too light to pose a heaviness problem, but it would have shown more of your awareness on how a wrestler would function in Shemaus' shoes: taking a squatted stance.
Rating: 5.3/10
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Post by Colter on Jul 28, 2014 14:23:50 GMT -5
Ac3 - While smooth, I felt your animation wasn't exactly up to snuff. The Rana was basically non-existent, and it was stiff as a cardboard box. Joe ran/walked like a drunk college frat boy throughout the ani, and Styles was like his dumb buddy. The impact itself was majorly lacking and the reaction wasn't too great. Not your best, man.
Maryvn - It wasn't as smooth and it was stiff (not as stiff as Ace's). Joint movement wasn't great, but it was def better than Ac3's. Reaction was also lacking, but not as bad.
I'm voting Maryvn.
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Post by Scotty on Jul 28, 2014 14:55:54 GMT -5
Note to both of you: Sticky tack is incredibly bothering to see, try to make it not so visible. Ac3: Little bit of string seen. I felt like the missed reversal in the beginning wasn't so well done. It wasn't anything close to a huricanrana. It didn't even look at though AJ was trying to reverse, just looked like Joe pushed him down for a sec. The animation was pretty smooth but could have had more pics when they were falling off the turnbuckles. Didn't like also how arched Joe's back was when walking. The running powerbomb didn't really look like a powerbomb either. Just looked like Joe pushed him into it. Joe holding onto AJ when falling was relly weird too. Seems like a really lazy attempt on your part. You've done so much better. Marvyntaker: The jump up into the rana wasn't exactly perfect, but I'm happy you included it unlike Ace. The running was pretty good. Wasn't a fan of the quick camera changed though. Would have liked a longer reaction as well. Vote: Marvyn, seemed like more effort was put into it judging by the actual lift into the rana and by the running.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 29, 2014 9:45:04 GMT -5
Ace: very nice lift up by joe and nice flow, but definitely not your best from the show 4/10
Marvyn taker: solid jump by Rey and nice transition from sheamus. Only con was the stiffness of sheamus's hands 4.5/10
Vote: marvyntaker
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Jul 29, 2014 11:24:38 GMT -5
Ace- This was a decent animation from you, but not your best. I wish you had AJ jump or at least show more that he was going for a hurricanranna rather than it look like Joe was going for a normal powerbomb, but stopping and hitting it in the corner. The running looked awkward. It was choppy. Also, the impact was just OK but I really didn't enjoy the way they both fell. It was super unrealistic. 4/10
Marvyntaker- I was glad to see you included the jump before. But like everyone said, you gotta bend the knees. The running was choppy. It just looked awkward. The powerbomb didn't hit the corner, which took away from the animation for me. It looked impactful, but it didn't look right. 5/10
Winner: Marvyntaker, because you included the jumping for the hurricanranna, and because it looks like you had more of a solid effort put forth.
also, both of you need to hide the tac.
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