JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Jul 27, 2014 11:49:26 GMT -5
"The Intercontinental Championship is on the line! Here comes Alex Shepherd with the running knee! He’s taking too much time here, but wait! Tyrone Kidd picks him up with ease and… OH MAN! He’s DEAD. Intercontinental ChampionshipAndeh (c) vs. EXW vs. Jamie -Stip: Running Knee Countered into The Star Studded Slam Jamie Andeh How to vote on matches No polls or bad replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. However you need to compare with the other animations in the match. Put thought into your votes, don't just say who you are voting and leave a sentence, put some effort in. 3) Forum status must be above Jobber If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10, but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS
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Post by Slim on Jul 27, 2014 13:21:36 GMT -5
Jamie: The running wasn't that bad but it looked stiff in the arms. Then, the jump was choppy and a bit stiff also. CM Punk's taunt was a nice touch but again, it was choppy. Kane, during the move was stiff and it was really choppy. Put a reaction too. Not your best.
Andeh: Why there's no Running Knee??? Otherwise, I like it, it was smoother than Jamie. During the move, CM Punk's legs were fidgety. You should've put a reaction to make a great impact. I liked how Cesaro stood up and his taunt at the end.
Vote Andeh, it was smoother, and had better joints movements.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2014 13:42:28 GMT -5
God this is tough.
Jamie: The running was odd and it looked like Punk was ice skating, the joint movement wasn't too bad though. The jump was way too choppy and had zero build-up from the ground, he floated rather than actually jumping. The taunt was alright, but it ended way too abruptly and Kane's reversal was way too fast and choppy. The slam wasn't bad, it was stiff and choppy as well, and I didn't like Kane's reaction movements. Way too fast man.
Andeh: Again way too fast. It had a decent flow, but it was lacking one main part of the stip, which disappointed me. Punk was pretty stiff and only had joint movement every 2-3 frames which gave it a weird look. Punk had choppy movements in mid-air. The slam was alright but it lacked any impact in general, Punk was playing possum at the end. Cesaro getting back up was unneeded, as the time making the taunt should have been used making the knee.
Vote: Andeh Just way more fundamentally solid despite missing part of the stip.
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Post by ace on Jul 27, 2014 15:57:04 GMT -5
Jamie: Nice job, build up was nice, your improving on running. there were choppy parts but it had a nice flow throughout, seems like you were a bit lazy, even with rust you should know to take more than one picture during mid air, you can do better.
Andeh: Smoother than Jamie's but also had some slightly choppy parts, I feel it was a bit fast which doesn't help the parts where it is choppy, lighting as always was a minus, reaction was a bit choppy two. Disappointing you only did half of the stip, which really bugged me. If you really wanted to keep the title you would do the whole thing, not your best.
Vote: Tough one, Jamie - Animation needed some work, but the whole stip was completed and looks like a bit more effort was put into it.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jul 27, 2014 22:44:36 GMT -5
Andeh: Why there's no Running Knee??? Almost forgot to send my animation in Hoping I lose the IC title match, as I'm gunna take a break from competing for a bit. I'd rather someone beats me for the title than to vacate it. I'll still mod and hang around on here, just life has been keeping me busy and I'm struggling to find time to animate to the quality I'd like. I'll be gunning for Tag and WHC once things chill out abit. I think Andeh was thinking something like this..
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2014 5:51:27 GMT -5
Jamie: Could you please start making .gif's? It makes the whole voting experience far less tedious. The animation wasn't very smooth, your animations are always awkward with that as they're always a mix of slight smoothness and choppyness. Joint movement was severely lacking during the animation, Punk barely moved throughout the spam, same with during the running knee. Impact wasn't terribly bad but it was in a minimal amount and was only really a rope bounce. Reaction from Punk was non-existent, he should've bounced off the mat for impact and then held himself in pain, instead of just landing and stopping. Lighting was good but I noticed one or two minor shakes of the camera. 2/10 Andeh: The animation was smooth like always but I think it was missing a pic or two when Punk first landed after the move. Joint movement wise it was leaps and bounds ahead of Jamie because you actually attempted to move the joints during the animation, nothing to really complain about in that department thankfully. The impact was good but I wasn't a fan of the delayed little bounce from Punk, it should've been straight away instead of having a wait in between. I really liked the reaction from Cesaro and how he did the taunt after jumping up, I liked Punk's reactions too but like I said wasn't a fan of how they were spaced out. Lighting was really off, it went from good to bad in the space of the animation, I saw some string but nothing major. Overall it was a nicely done animation Andeh, I can't see you losing the title when you animate like the best in the mid card. 6.5/10 Vote: Andeh
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Post by Jack on Jul 28, 2014 11:28:41 GMT -5
Jamie - I mean, the attempted running was ok, sorta smooth, it just looked pretty weird and fast. The jump up was rushed and choppy. The animation then goes onto to get more and more choppy and just lacking in any good amount of frames and joint movements. Kanes legs were insanely stiff.
Andeh - Lighting was a bit less consistent in this one, I liked the flow to this though. I did see string throughout and felt the overall move was too fast. The impact was ok, and the smoothness of the bend back up by Cesaro was good.
Vote Andeh.
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Post by Colter on Jul 28, 2014 14:34:59 GMT -5
Jamie - Decent effort. I notice stiffness seems to be a problem for you, and that kinda detracts from the animation here. Jumping was choppy, and the slam itself was also lacking a lot in pictures and movement as Jack said. Kane was very stiff.
Andeh - Fine animation. Flow was better, string wasn't too distracting to me (I don't tend to mind it, unless it's painfully obvious), but it seemed a bit too fast in a spot or two. Impact was better and the smoothness that was lacking in Jamie's was found in yours. Only big gripe is the lighting.
My vote goes for..
Andeh.
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Post by Scotty on Jul 28, 2014 15:36:21 GMT -5
JWA: The running wasn't the best, but its fine. The knee seemed quick and lacked pics. The liftup needed a lot more pics too. Andeh: No knee? THe move was smooth and not ass stiff as JWA. Lighting was a little distracting as was string. Reaction was fidgety but nice. Vote: JWA losing would be a travesty considering he made the full stip unlike Andeh.
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Jul 29, 2014 11:48:54 GMT -5
Jamie- Good job here. Really glad to see you do the whole stip. The animation was kinda choppy. Needs more pictures. There wasn't much impact. But I liked the flow of it. Also liked Punk's taunt and Kane's situp. Solid job.
Andeh- Really disappointed with this man. Was really looking forward to seeing this specific animation from you. No knee killed this for me. It was smooth. But the reaction wasn't that great. Liked Cesaro's taunt at the end, but the lighting was really an eyesore.
Jamie gets my vote. Andeh didn't complete the required stip.
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