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WWE 2014- Post Summerslam
 
| Roster -Adam Rose - AJ Lee - Big E - Big Show - Bo Dallas - Bray Wyatt - Brie Belle - Brock Lesnar - Cameron - Cesaro - Chris Jericho - Curtis Axel - Daniel Bryan - David Otunga - Dean Ambrose - Diego - Dolph Ziggler - El Torito - Emma - Erick Rowan - Fandango - Fernando - Jack Swagger - John Cena - Kane - Kofi Kingston - Luke Harper - The Miz - Naomi - Nikki Bella - Paige - R-Truth - Randy Orton - Rey Mysterio - Rob Van Dam - Roman Reigns - Rusev - Ryback - Santino Marella - Seth Rollins - Summer Rae - Xavier Woods - Zack Ryder - Sin Cara - Sheamus - Jey Uso - Jimmy Uso - Wade Barrett - Alicia Fox - Eva Marie
- Christian - Damien Sandow - Darren Young - Heath Slater - The Great Khali - Goldust - Stardust
- Jack Swagger - Mark Henry - Natayla - Rosa Mendes
Personnel
- Alex Riley (On air personality) - Booker T (On air personality) - Jason Albert (On air personality) - JBL (Color Commentator)
- Jerry Lawler (Color Commentator) - Michael Cole (Color Commentator) - Justin Roberts (Announcer) - Lillian Garcia (Announcer)
- Tony Chimel (Announcer) - Paul Heyman (Managing Brock Lesnar) - Renee Young (Interviewer) - Scott Stanford (Interviewer)
- Tom Phillips (Interviewer) - Zeb Colter (Managing Jack Swagger) - Lana (Managing Rusev)
Champions
WWE World Heavyweight Championship- Brock Lesnar
Intercontinental Championship- Dolph Ziggler
United States Championship- Sheamus
Tag Team Championship- The Usos
Divas Championship- Paige
Money in The Bank- Seth Rollins
Alliances
Jimmy & Jey Uso
Stardust & Goldust
Bray Wyatt, Luker Harper, Erick Rowan
Triple H, Stephanie McMahon, Randy Orton, Kane, Seth Rollins
Stables
The Authority- Triple H, Stephanie McMahon, Randy Orton, Kane, Seth Rollins
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Hell in a Cell
Survivor Series
TLC
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Post by underjohngrohs on Aug 18, 2014 15:27:40 GMT -5
good luck with this. I hope you have some storylines round the corner.
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Post by underjohngrohs on Aug 18, 2014 15:28:05 GMT -5
Note: Survivor Series on My WWF 1994 Diary is up.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2014 16:50:15 GMT -5
Note: Survivor Series on My WWF 1994 Diary is up. Going to check it out soon man.  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2014 19:31:48 GMT -5
Well you've picked about as interesting a period as any in WWE history to pick up from. It's gonna be fun to see where you go from last night's show.
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Monday Night Raw in Las, Vegas Nevada Live!
| The Monday Night Raw intro blared throughout the arena, surprising fans new and old reverting to the Across the Nation Theme. The pyrotechnics received a huge applause as we cut straight to a recap of last night's WWE Summerslam in Los Angeles. The vignette started with Brock's brutal assault, it then led up to Seth Rollins defeating Dean Ambrose, and Dolph's title victory. The camera pans over to the commentators desk where they speak about last night's shocking victory, hyping up Brock Lesnar. "Brock defeated the greatest champion in the modern era, he's possibly the biggest force the WWE has ever seen. And know that he's champion, who knows when he'll be defeated?" "Tonight we kick off a new era, sporting new logos and intro, the era of John Cena appears to be looming in the past. We're now in the era of Lesnar. The most dominant wrestler of this generation. Defeating Undertaker and John Cena back to back. No one is stopping him." Dean Ambrose's theme begins to blast throughout the arena, he's greeted with a huge pop, following his near victory over Mister Money in The Bank. "Dean Ambrose lost to Seth Rollins. Dean Ambrose lost due to Kane, and an illegal weapon shot to the back of my head. Seth didn't win cleanly. And even then I still nearly kicked out of his weak shot. Rollins is nothing to me. I'm better, I should be where he's at right at this very moment. I've beaten his ass time and time again, and I will not let this opportunity pass me by. You see. I love to fight. I love to wreck, destroy, and completely let my anger loose. I want Seth Rollins tonight. For that briefcase. So Seth, why don't you come down here with your little buddy Kane and we can arrange something huh?" Seth Rollin's theme begins to play, he's walking down the aisle alone in a suit, with briefcase in hand. The fans begin the "you sold out chant" as Seth slides in the ring, he's given a microphone by a staff member. "I sold out, I did this I did that. But little ole Dean Ambrose didn't do a damn thing? Ambrose has been assaulting and attacking me this entire team, on my own turf, I was not going to lose to this chump. And I didn't. Ambrose, I can beat you clean. I wanted you to taste your own medicine, because tonight in the main-event, the tides will turn. And I will beat you, fair and square." "Really, you're going to beat me Seth? Put the briefcase on the line if you're so confident. If you even dare to mess around, it's mine. How about that pretty boy?" "The main-event. Dean vs. Seth for the briefcase. That sounds just about right Ambrose, I'll do it. I'll cripple you, and I'll maim you right here in Las Vegas. Freaks like you belong to live and die in this craphole of a town, and Ambrose, tonight will be the final chapter in the crappy book of Ambrose. I'm the future. You're just an unstable freak-show wearing a wife beater!" Dean smiles and throws the first blow at Seth. Seth sliding out of the ring taking his briefcase. The crowd is hot for Ambrose; a graphic is shown on the titantron hyping up the main-event. We go to commercial break.. | | The camera pans to Triple H, who is in the ring with Stephanie McMahon. The two are basking in boo's as Triple H is about to speak. "Tonight marks the debut of a new logo, a new apron, a new presentation, and most of all, a new era. The era of idiocy and ignorance is gone, this is wrestling. And tonight we're going to kick off this show with a bang. Stephanie, you take the microphone please and announce this match for me." "With great pleasure honey. In our first match of the night, we will have Brie Bella take on Paige right now, right here. Brie are you still there after my win over you, and your own sister betrayed you. My heart goes out to you. You've been through a lot. You lossed your hubby to Megan, you're hubby is a terrible performer anyways, you lost your sister, and you're about to taste the grandest beating you will ever taste in your little insignificant life. Please welcome to the ring, your new diva's champion, Paige! Paige's theme plays as she does her standard entrance with her Diva's championship won from AJ Lee last night at Summerslam. Paige slides into the ring, shaking the hands of Stephanie and Hunter. "And introducing next, brie bella..." Brie Bella comes out to no theme. She walks down the aisle wearing her "Brie Mode" t-shirt and red pants. She stays mid aisle talking to the WWE universe. "I'm not in the condition to face Paige here tonight. I'm not ready.." Stephanie responds. "Oh you're not ready? I haven't wrestled in ten years and I still beat you fresh off the frying pan. After all of this ensued, you still dare to question my authority? You're facing Paige. Right now, whether you want to or not." Brie shakes her head in disgust as Nikki comes down the aisle wearing a business suit. Nikki strikes the back of Brie's head by surprise, knocking her down to the ground. Nikki begins to speak. "Brie, after everything you've put me through, i'm going to make sure you recognize your mistake. I'm tired of being in your shadows. I'm in the Authority and i'm going to be everything you'll never be." Nikki continues to stomp Brie as the audience is in disgust, giving her major heat. She screams "YOU MADE ME DO IT BRIE!" Stephanie grabs the microphone again. "That's enough Nikki. I'm glad you've come around. Security, get Brie out of here. She's no longer employed by the WWE. She's fired!" The standard security officers restrain Brie and take her out backstage and out of the arena. The camera pans back to the ring. "And Paige's alternate opponent, will be the former diva's champion, AJ Lee!" AJ's theme blasts as the fans go insane, they begin to chant "CM Punk" per usual, but her usual spunky self ignores the chants. Triple H and Stephanie clear the ring, as the heated rivalry between AJ and Paige commences. >Paige defeats AJ Lee in 7:38 by pinfall. The match begins and is highly contested with lots of strikes and false finishes. Paige ultimately constantly got the better of AJ, putting her through tough submission holds and a wide array of grappling moves as well. Paige defeated AJ with her foot on the rope, but the Referee ignored it and didn't see it. The audience was in roar at the finish and Paige quickly escaped the ring as fast as possible. AJ Lee was angered, punching the mat and arguing with the referee. The camera's pan back to the commentator's desk. "Paige defeated AJ Lee once more. Has AJ finally met her match against the now 2 time Diva's champion? We'll be back with another match-up following this commercial break. | | The camera pans back to the ring where we see Ryback taking on Kofi Kingston. A "feed me more" and "goldberg" chant's resonate throughout the arena as this match kicks off. >Ryback defeats Kofi Kingston in 12:23 by pinfall. The match is very fast paced, with Kofi's speed giving him the advantage throughout. Ryback looked very strong throughout this match-up, and used his strength to really pop the crowd. The main spot of this match-up was a missed "Trouble in Paradise" that was soon reversed by an impressive "Shellshock." Following that, Ryback rolled Kofi up for the pin and the Referee gave him a three count. The match was fun and popped the crowd up. Following the match Ryback revved up the "feed me more chants" by doing the taunt and screaming it in the ring. It instantly caught on and Ryback is starting to grow as a face once more. Seth Rollins and Randy Orton are seen backstage conversing with one another. "Listen, Randy, I know we aren't the best of friends, but we need to start looking out for each other. That Brock Lesnar guy is more than a hand-full. Did you see how he mauled Cena? We need to take him out, it's best for business." "So you want to use me to cash in that little briefcase of yours. Listen Seth, Brock is mine, and that title is as good as mine. I've been in the Authority longer than you, I get the first blow." "That's not what this is about Orton. We need to get rid of him for the sake of this industry." "Heh. Good luck in your match tonight Seth, I've got bigger things to worry about then your complaints. Brock is best for business." The screen fades to black signaling a commercial break. | | The shows returns back to the commentator's desk where they hype up another big match-up for tonight, Roman Reigns is going to be taking on Sheamus in our second main event of the night. The commentators rave over the fact the Reigns defeated Orton last night at Summerslam. A graphic plays on the titantron revealing that Brock Lesnar & Paul Heyman will speak out later tonight regarding their match against John Cena.The Miz's theme begins to play as he walks down the aisle angered. "Last night. I lost to Dolph Ziggler. A freak, a phony, a spaghetti haired loser. Sure he beat me. But last night I had a chip on my shoulder, an ego. I wanted to make Ziggler look strong, I wanted to give the people of LA a good act. You see, I went easy on Ziggler. I want a match right here, right now, for that title. So Ziggler, why don't you come out here and show them why i'm better than you in every single way possible. Come out. COME ON! I WANT MY TITLE SHOT NOW!" Dolph's theme explodes through the arena as he holds the Intercontinental belt high in the sky, getting huge applause from the fans. "Miz. Miz. Miz. You lost. You didn't go easy on me. I know how egotistical you are, you'd probably rather die than lose this belt to me. Miz, i'm better than you, anyday of the week. That's why i'm champion. That's why your own fans in LA were chanting my name while you were on the floor. Miz, nobody likes you. And you've got to earn this title shot. And to do that, you'll have a number one contender match right here right now. Kane told me that he's tired of your constant whining. That's why your opponent right now will be, CESARO!" Miz begins to scream "WHAT?! I WASN'T READY!" as he strips of his suit and reveals his in-ring gear. Cesaro's theme plays, as Ziggler turns his attention to Cesaro. Cesaro looks at Ziggler, chuckling, then clotheslining him down to the ramp. The fans are booing the once fan favorite as he slides into the ring. >Cesaro defeats The Miz in 13:47 by pinfall The match solidified Cesaro as a dominant in-ring worker. A lot of the match saw The Miz on the defensive while Cesaro brutally assaulted The Miz, using his super strength to get a clear cut advantage over the former champion. The match saw Cesaro target The Miz's "moneymaker" multiple times, Cesaro appeared to be the bigger heel than The Miz. The final spot was a Swiss Death that left The Miz lifeless. Cesaro rolled The Miz for the pin and he got the win. Dolph Ziggler was watching the match ringside the entire time. Following the result Ziggler came sliding in the ring, attempting to hit Cesaro with the title, but Cesaro ducked and sent Ziggler out of the ring with a kick to the head. Cesaro looked very strong and like a formidable threat to both the champion and the former champion. We go to commercial break. | | The camera pans to Triple H who is in the ring with a microphone, about to make an announcement regarding the future of the WWE. "Tonight is the dawn of a new era, a new day. But the past shouldn't be forgotten. And exclusively on the WWE Network, you will be able to watch, every single episode of Smackdown. We have also added tons of Raw episodes, and we are continuing to add more pay per view content to the network. You can subscribe for only $9.99. My second announcement of the night is that we have reached a partnership with the USA network. WWE Raw will no longer be 3 hours long. We will have an exclusive 1 hour pre-show on the network, which will substitue the first hour. In terms of business our ratings have been declining, so to give the best content possible, Raw will be two hours long. With a full 1 hour pre-show on the WWE network. The pre-show will contain matches and analysis's from our good commentators. Not only that, but I am please to announce that tonight, we will debut our new WWE championship. And my final announcement, is that Smackdown this Friday, will be featuring three new debuts to the roster. Tune in and find out. We thank you, our fanbase, for supporting us into this new era. Tonight we've revamped everything, and we hope to bring the best product possible. And to draw excitement, Stone Cold Steve Austin will be hosting Raw next week, he will also be on the network pre-show with the commentating crew. Thank you. And enjoy the rest of the night and our product going forward. The WWE network is only, you guessed it, $9.99. But tonight we are offering a special, subscribe in the next hour and you can get it for $7.99 a month, with a six month commitment. For tonight only. Thank you." We cut to commercial break. | | The show opens up with Roman Reigns and Sheamus in the ring. The two square up for a match. >Roman Reigns defeats Sheamus in 15:26 by pinfall The match was good, and the audience was split between the United States Champion, Sheamus and Roman Reigns. Roman Reigns was pretty over, but the two had a solid back and forth match. There were many false finishes and a ton of cool spots, including a missed Brogue kick that was ultimately reversed into a Superman punch. Roman was granted the microphone following the match. "Tonight I beat a former WWE champion. Last night I beat a former multi-night champion in Randy Orton. So where's my title-shot H? Or are you busy kissing Brock's ass and shining Paul's head? The fans want to see me, they know that i'm the most dominant man in this company, not Lesnar, no Roman Reigns. The Roman Empire is just getting started baby, when do I get a shot at the gold?" The fans boo as no one comes out to respond to Reigns, but almost thirty seconds later, Stephanie McMahon comes out with a microphone in hand. "Roman. You'll get your shot in due time. Because on Smackdown, we will be having a battle royal to determine the number one contender to the title, as Cena is injured. After your performance tonight, you will be in it. And so will every big player in this company. And Triple H isn't kneeling down to anyone, Brock kneels down to us! Roman, don't you dare cross The Authority. We are the WWE." Roman responds. "Does it look like I care about your Authority and positions in the WWE? No. I don't. I'm not apart of any of that backstage mess, i'm only here to knock a few heads back and forth. And at Smackdown, I'll win. Then I'll beat Brock. Then I'll main-event Wrestlemania. That's what's going to happen Steph. Ya got that?" Roman drops the microphone and leaves the ring. "You really think it's going to be that easy Roman? Haha. You're in for a surprise then!" We cut to commercial break. | | We're back from commercial break. The show introduces us back into the ring where Ambrose and Rollins are about to have a highly contested match-up. If Ambrose wins, he's entitled to a match for the briefcase at NOC. >Dean Ambrose defeats Seth Rollins in 6:23 by a surprise schoolboy pin. The match was very back and forth and featured a lot of brawling and outside the ring interaction. Ultimately what made Seth Rollins lose the match was Roman Reigns, who came to ringside, distracting Rollins, letting Ambrose get the quick schoolboy pin. Corporate Kane was rushing down the aisle but he was ultimately brought down by a Superman punch. Roman Reigns and Dean Ambrose were celebrating in the ring together, showing that their allegiance still stands. We cut to a highlight video showcasing Brock's win over Cena. The camera then pans back into the ring as Brock Lesnar accompanied by Paul Heyman are in the ring with Triple H. "It is my honor to introduce the new WWE Champion, Brock Lesnar. Not only will Lesnar be sporting a new title belt in a new era, but he will be the first to do so. Any words Paul before we crown Brock?" Paul is handed the microphone. "I'M PROUD TO BE HERE TONIGHT. TO ANNOUNCE MY CLIENT AS THE WORLD CHAMPION. YOU SEE, I BELIEVED IN BROCK LESNAR, BEFORE BROCK BELIEVED IN HIMSELF. I'VE BEEN COACHING HIM SINCE THE DAWN OF 2000'S, AND IT IS MY HONOR TO SERVE THIS GREAT TALENT. HE IS THE BEAST INCARNATE. THE BRAWLER, BROCKKK LESNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAR!" Triple H reveals the new WWE Championship and hands it to Lesnar. Lesnar smiles, raising it in the air. Raw closes with Lesnar holding the belt. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 20, 2014 16:52:06 GMT -5
Steve Austin to host 8/25 Raw WWE kicked off a new era last night, debuting a new logo and championship belt. One of the main announcements announced by the on screen COO, Triple H, is that Stone Cold Steve Austin will indeed host Raw on the 25th. Rumors are circulating that Stone Cold may start a program with the Authority, instead of in the ring, but as a possible Raw GM that opposes the Authority. The announcement was met with lots of cheers and next weeks Raw is highly anticipated.Raw slated to 2 hours + 1 hour pre-show on the WWE Network Triple H also announced that Raw will now become a two-hour show again, saying that the ratings were declining and that he wants to make sure that the fans get the best product available. A one hour pre-show will be live on the WWE Network exclusively. He also noted that following Raw for last night only, fans could receive the WWE Network for a sale price of $7.99 instead of the already cheap $9.99 price. The WWE is trying their hardest to turn a profit with the WWE Network as always.Roman Reigns will win the Smackdown ten man battle royal
Roman Reigns has been booked strongly, the WWE continues to force him down our throats. Yet he's the likely challenger to Brock Lesnar as John Cena has appeared to have been written off following his loss. WWE higher-ups love Roman Reigns and want to create the next megastar for the company. It's also worth noting that both Rollins and Ambrose have been booked strongly in a feud against one another. The speculation is that Reigns will take the place of Cena in the coming months.Three new workers to debut on Smackdown
One of Triple H's main announcements last night was that we will be getting three new members to the WWE roster. Rumors are circulating that those three are indeed going to be The Ascension, to strengthen the tag team division, as well as Sami Zayn. We're predicting that those three men will indeed be Adrian Neville, Sami Zayn, and Kalisto. |
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Post by ✖ AJ on Aug 22, 2014 10:22:15 GMT -5
Ouch. This layout really hurts to read, honestly. I'm not going to judge your writing off of it yet, though, but first look it is just a cluster that is going to be difficult to get through. Needs more seperation. Anyway, moving forward. A solid opening promo between Dean Ambrose and Seth Rollins, setting the stage for the main event between Ambrose and Rollins in a rematch from Summerslam. Some grammar problems in the following promo, which is really awkward coming after one promo already to start the show. Heh. Decent progression between the feud between The Bellas, but I just don't care for it at all. Paige defeating AJ Lee is okay, with the cheating involved. I'm not sure where this is going in reality, nor here. Hopefully not TOO long. So, are we just completely getting rid of RybAxel out of nowhere? I'm cool with Ryback going singles but just random like this? Confusing backstage stuff with Orton and Rollins. So, Miz wasn't ready but had called out Ziggler for the match? Cesaro beating him is cool, though. I'd rather see him be successful at this point, even though I don't dislike The Miz. Another Triple H promo? A lot of announcements coming in like holy hell. $7.99? JUST $7.99!? BAH GAWD. Stone Cold hosting next week should be good and three debuts on Smackdown will be interesting... Roman Reigns winning was for the best over Sheamus, although Sheamus really has nothing going on as champion. Just making the United States Championship not matter like Ambrose did, sadly. Dean Ambrose winning with a schoolboy was okay, short as hell match though that would be disappointing. Even with the involvement of Kane and Reigns, really short. Finally, a promo that seemed very short and rushed with Lesnar being given the new WWE Championship. I dunno how to feel. I don't want to judge you off this one show and I will give you more opportunities, but I really think the format needs to be changed up to clear things up, because right now it is just a giant cluster that is hard to read. I started my diary with poor writing and a bad format and now it has become 104 pages and in my view -a huge success. We'll see what comes of this, I hope you can improve. Good luck.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2014 11:54:00 GMT -5
Ouch. This layout really hurts to read, honestly. I'm not going to judge your writing off of it yet, though, but first look it is just a cluster that is going to be difficult to get through. Needs more seperation. Anyway, moving forward. A solid opening promo between Dean Ambrose and Seth Rollins, setting the stage for the main event between Ambrose and Rollins in a rematch from Summerslam. Some grammar problems in the following promo, which is really awkward coming after one promo already to start the show. Heh. Decent progression between the feud between The Bellas, but I just don't care for it at all. Paige defeating AJ Lee is okay, with the cheating involved. I'm not sure where this is going in reality, nor here. Hopefully not TOO long. So, are we just completely getting rid of RybAxel out of nowhere? I'm cool with Ryback going singles but just random like this? Confusing backstage stuff with Orton and Rollins. So, Miz wasn't ready but had called out Ziggler for the match? Cesaro beating him is cool, though. I'd rather see him be successful at this point, even though I don't dislike The Miz. Another Triple H promo? A lot of announcements coming in like holy hell. $7.99? JUST $7.99!? BAH GAWD. Stone Cold hosting next week should be good and three debuts on Smackdown will be interesting... Roman Reigns winning was for the best over Sheamus, although Sheamus really has nothing going on as champion. Just making the United States Championship not matter like Ambrose did, sadly. Dean Ambrose winning with a schoolboy was okay, short as hell match though that would be disappointing. Even with the involvement of Kane and Reigns, really short. Finally, a promo that seemed very short and rushed with Lesnar being given the new WWE Championship. I dunno how to feel. I don't want to judge you off this one show and I will give you more opportunities, but I really think the format needs to be changed up to clear things up, because right now it is just a giant cluster that is hard to read. I started my diary with poor writing and a bad format and now it has become 104 pages and in my view -a huge success. We'll see what comes of this, I hope you can improve. Good luck. Thank you for the comment. I'm used to writing more detailed work, so it's tough to write some of the summaries. I'll make sure to further deliver. Thanks for the read. |
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Post by The Kevstaaa on Aug 23, 2014 12:08:13 GMT -5
I don't dislike the layout as much as AJ does. I will admit that less italics and more spacing would help though. I am a fan of you putting the results in big, bold letters. Ah, the old clickable links to the titantron. I used to use this but got lazy. Well putting the briefcase on the line is a big deal for the main event, I like it. A bit strange to have a promo following the opening promo. Paige/Brie is a wise choice to open but I see she's not ready. Steph's dig about not having competed in ten years but still beating her was cool. I'm curious about where the Nikki heel turn takes her. Paige defeating AJ with her foot on the ropes creates controversy and I see them meeting again at Night of Champions. Ryback beating Kofi Kingston eh? Not sure what purpose the match served unless you're going with a Ryback solo run. Plus, I doubt it would get twelve minutes. Cesaro over Miz is strange unless Cesaro is about to go on a face run. Technically, Miz doesn't have to "earn" his title shot since he gets a rematch. $7.99? Not keen on Triple H coming out yet again but these are big announcements. I don't like how he admitted the ratings are declining, but I'm all for two hour Raws. Austin hosting is a big deal and three debuts? Please, if you're taking from NXT, use them right. Roman Reigns over Sheamus is a big match and I would've put it on in the middle of the show as the first hour main event instead of before the main event. Speaking of main events, Rollins/Ambrose was very short. I guess the briefcase wasn't on the line? The final promo felt a bit rushed but it got its point across. Overall, not bad. It seemed very short for three hours so I guess the switch to two hours is perfect for you. Some odd booking decisions but you seem to have an idea in place with all of the changes you're making so I'll be reading.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2014 13:26:26 GMT -5
I don't dislike the layout as much as AJ does. I will admit that less italics and more spacing would help though. I am a fan of you putting the results in big, bold letters. Ah, the old clickable links to the titantron. I used to use this but got lazy. Well putting the briefcase on the line is a big deal for the main event, I like it. A bit strange to have a promo following the opening promo. Paige/Brie is a wise choice to open but I see she's not ready. Steph's dig about not having competed in ten years but still beating her was cool. I'm curious about where the Nikki heel turn takes her. Paige defeating AJ with her foot on the ropes creates controversy and I see them meeting again at Night of Champions. Ryback beating Kofi Kingston eh? Not sure what purpose the match served unless you're going with a Ryback solo run. Plus, I doubt it would get twelve minutes. Cesaro over Miz is strange unless Cesaro is about to go on a face run. Technically, Miz doesn't have to "earn" his title shot since he gets a rematch. $7.99? Not keen on Triple H coming out yet again but these are big announcements. I don't like how he admitted the ratings are declining, but I'm all for two hour Raws. Austin hosting is a big deal and three debuts? Please, if you're taking from NXT, use them right. Roman Reigns over Sheamus is a big match and I would've put it on in the middle of the show as the first hour main event instead of before the main event. Speaking of main events, Rollins/Ambrose was very short. I guess the briefcase wasn't on the line? The final promo felt a bit rushed but it got its point across. Overall, not bad. It seemed very short for three hours so I guess the switch to two hours is perfect for you. Some odd booking decisions but you seem to have an idea in place with all of the changes you're making so I'll be reading. No the briefcase isn't on the line. If Dean won, which he did, he would face Seth at NOC for the briefcase. |
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Post by snickelodeon on Aug 25, 2014 3:15:12 GMT -5
Raw feedback and a couple of other thoughts...
Similar to some of the others not a fan of the text with no breaks makes it hard to read, which is doing yourself no favours as there is some promise stuff in there.
Very promo heavy Raw I found.
Don't rush Reigns and Lesnar, maybe it's just a tease but if that's the direction your going in Reigns needs more work. Sheamus shouldn't have been used here doesn't do anything for Sheamus or the belt.
Rollins/Ambrose got half the time of Ryback/Kofi I understand not wanting to give away to much Rollins/Ambrose but a 12 minute Ryback match is too much especially when neither guy are hot at the minute.
You probably are suited more to 2 hours so that's a wise call but again don't mention the ratings don't want to be highlighting that no one is watching your show.
Overall you show a lot of promise and with a couple of tweaks you'll make a good addition to the board, you've already got the graphics on point.
Check out TNA 02-03 when you get the chance.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 21:12:29 GMT -5
Raw feedback and a couple of other thoughts... Similar to some of the others not a fan of the text with no breaks makes it hard to read, which is doing yourself no favours as there is some promise stuff in there. Very promo heavy Raw I found. Don't rush Reigns and Lesnar, maybe it's just a tease but if that's the direction your going in Reigns needs more work. Sheamus shouldn't have been used here doesn't do anything for Sheamus or the belt. Rollins/Ambrose got half the time of Ryback/Kofi I understand not wanting to give away to much Rollins/Ambrose but a 12 minute Ryback match is too much especially when neither guy are hot at the minute. You probably are suited more to 2 hours so that's a wise call but again don't mention the ratings don't want to be highlighting that no one is watching your show. Overall you show a lot of promise and with a couple of tweaks you'll make a good addition to the board, you've already got the graphics on point. Check out TNA 02-03 when you get the chance. Yeah I'll be checking it out man. This is going to be on hiatus for a little while, I just don't have the time for it. But it'll return stronger than ever eventually. |
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