Tylor
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
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Post by Tylor on Nov 7, 2014 0:36:56 GMT -5
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Nov 24, 2014 19:21:53 GMT -5
It's remarkable to see you indulge in pivot after the long period of undeniable cease Tylor. The first ani was a nice introduction, the movements overall was fairly smooth but their was a little bit of fidget during the first few steps at the very beginning. The senton off the steep cliff wasn't half bad, the flowed quite nicely but the movements could have been exaggerated a little better, it wasn't very stiff throughout however which is considerably surprising to say the least. The slightly eccentric front flip was good and the impact followed was dicey but with the style you used in this ani, it shapes up decent imo. The landing at the end was quite nice. Good ani here Tylor. The second ani was alright, the jump at the start had pretty good air time although the green stick could have used a arch in the back before the initial take off to establish good velocity during mid flight, in mid air I didn't notice any floatyness or fidget which is nice to see. The impact on the ground was ok, but it would have been nice to see a better reaction from both parties.
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