WF: HardCore Heaven III | Match I

Well this the only match I can vote on...

spirit: Nice animation you have here dude. I must say that I really like the way you animate. Like, just the overall style of your videos. This animation was smooth overall but I think one thing you need to work on is fidgetiness. Maybe you can watch Angus's tutorial on how to avoid it. I liked your build up to the move although I felt that in some areas you could have deleted some frames for a better flow. I didn't see any string at all but the shadows were bothersome. The move itself was good although a bit stiff. I feel you could have moved the joints more considering the fact that they are elite figures. The table break was kinda abrupt to me and I think slater could've have more of a reaction. I forgot to mention, the camera pan was good also.

eff see double you: Imma be honest and say that this wasn't your best. I can see your effort, but it just wasn't as good as your usual animations. I would've liked a lift up like spirit did but whatever. The move was pretty stiff, as was spirit's. Once again, I think you should've taken advantage of the DA's wide range of joints. The string was visible and the lighting changes were kinda annoying; just me being picky. Their reactions were okay, but like I said, not your best.

Ace: Dude, I'm not gonna sugarcoat it when I say that this wasn't very good at all. I'm sorry but it's just so average and stiff and..idk. It was smooth I guess but it, idk how to explain it just feels "small". That's the best word I can think of. The explosion was a cool touch but it covered up the reaction so I didn't see anything really. Not your best at all, it just doesn't seem like you.

dub dub ee lezlee: Not bad. I like how you included a lift up. The move overall was pretty stiff and there wasn't a reaction at all really. There were a lot of pics in the lift up but there wasn't enough in the transition to the hold so it was kinda weird. Also, I would recommend a sturdier tripod. Oh and try to keep your ring steady with blue tac or something because it was really shaky. Also try working on animating in an unbothered area because the person in the backround was distracting from the animation. Maybe get some longer string so your arm won't be in the shot too. Not bad but try to work on those things I told you about.

jay kay dub: Good job, I liked the idea of the animation. I think you should take more pictures in your future animations for a smoother result because it's pretty choppy. It would've been nice to see a lift up, or different leg movements from Miz as they were the same for the whole ladder run. The move was okay, but the movements were awkward in my opinion. I suggest watching the move over and over while animating it so you can see how to perfectly position the figures. Miz's reaction was pretty good but it was somewhat stiff, as was the animation overall. not bad.

VOTE - SPIRITJD33

uh, you do realize you were in the match right? You also voted on your own animation as if you werent yourself lol. I'm sorry but you cannot vote in matches you are in and this vote doesn't count.