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Post by deskjet on Apr 16, 2015 11:40:15 GMT -5
Was good to see that you made some improvements in posing from the first match. Pic quality is top notch and the storylines with all the draft picks has been a solid on going theme that's pulled in the social media aspect. Smart booking:). Good use of backstage and interviews to carry storylines as well. Posing and editing string still needs work but seems you have the desire to want to improve so I'm sure we'll see some strides in that direction. Seems like in just a short time you've garnered a lot of interest in your brand, now looking forward to seeing you build it:)
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Post by Robert69 on Apr 16, 2015 12:04:50 GMT -5
Was good to see that you made some improvements in posing from the first match. Glad you feel that way.Pic quality is top notch and the storylines with all the draft picks has been a solid on going theme that's pulled in the social media aspect. Smart booking:). Good use of backstage and interviews to carry storylines as well. Thank youPosing and editing string still needs work but seems you have the desire to want to improve so I'm sure we'll see some strides in that direction. Indeed. A lot of the string thing was basically just being in a hurry. removing string in After Effects is simple enough. I just passed on doing it after the first match. I wont be doing that moving forward.Seems like in just a short time you've garnered a lot of interest in your brand, now looking forward to seeing you build it:) Appreciate it. I look forward to seeing it grow as well. Can't wait to get the storylines out there for others to enjoy! |
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Post by CWE OWNER on Apr 16, 2015 12:15:05 GMT -5
Good fed mate. You have great lighting and good quality pic taking.
Love the LED light thingy acting as the Entrance. Reminds me of TNA.
Few stiff poses but no biggy.
Nice to see Brock Lesnar standing tall !!!
Just a word of advice i use forum page for my fed. Try and cut it up in
parts people with not a lot of memory on the computer it goes slow for.
Other than that nice job
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Post by Robert69 on Apr 16, 2015 13:21:55 GMT -5
Good fed mate. You have great lighting and good quality pic taking. Love the LED light thingy acting as the Entrance. Reminds me of TNA. Appreciate it!Few stiff poses but no biggy. Definitely working on it.Nice to see Brock Lesnar standing tall !!! Indeed.Just a word of advice i use forum page for my fed. Try and cut it up in parts people with not a lot of memory on the computer it goes slow for. I hadn't thought of that. Good call. I will see what I can do. Can anyone else verify if this is, indeed, a problem for them?Other than that nice job Thank you!Glad you enjoyed it! I think things are about to start picking up in a big way. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 16, 2015 16:24:18 GMT -5
Will reply soon. Looking good so far.
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Post by Woods on Apr 16, 2015 17:42:27 GMT -5
Overall, i found this to be a good show. Some storylines have started off, so it will be interesting to see where they go. I think the image quality is fantastic and it gives the show a real modern feel to it which, I imagine, is what you're going for with the way you have produced the show. I think a lot of the poses were stiff, however, with basics theres not much to be done with them, and as you said you will improve as you go on. I hope when my Fed begins, it will be as successful as your show has started out to be, as whats shown from the comments, seems to have attracted a lot of interest early on. Things I liked: -The image quality -Production -2 brands brawling at the end -The use of different match finishes (Ryback's clothesline instead over the shellshock) Things i didn't like: -the stiffness in a lot of the poses -CM Punk's creepiness! (Weird), however, It will be interesting to see how his character grows throughout the episodes. -The order in which you're card was booked, i understand the reason for it. But, it still comes across bizarre that Kidd/Ryback & Harper/JoMo would be classed as main events over the opening two matches. However, i found the posing to be better in the final two matches. All in all a good start to a fed that has all the tools and potential to be a really great piece of work. Also, a little side note. This is the first 'response to the feds i've watched so congrats, haha! (i will be replying to all that i have viewed shortly)  |
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Post by Robert69 on Apr 16, 2015 19:33:43 GMT -5
Overall, i found this to be a good show. Some storylines have started off, so it will be interesting to see where they go. Thanks!I think the image quality is fantastic and it gives the show a real modern feel to it which, I imagine, is what you're going for with the way you have produced the show. Indeed.I think a lot of the poses were stiff, however, with basics theres not much to be done with them, and as you said you will improve as you go on. It's just a matter of finding a balance, at the end of the day. Finding the spot between realistic, and able to still stand lol I hope when my Fed begins, it will be as successful as your show has started out to be, as whats shown from the comments, seems to have attracted a lot of interest early on. Just be active on the board, be polite and as helpful as possible, take criticism as if it's all constructive (not personal) -- and have dedication in bringing your vision to life for others to see. The effort alone goes really, REALLY far.Things I liked: -The image quality -Production -2 brands brawling at the end -The use of different match finishes (Ryback's clothesline instead over the shellshock) RIghteous.Things i didn't like: -the stiffness in a lot of the poses -CM Punk's creepiness! (Weird), however, It will be interesting to see how his character grows throughout the episodes. There are plans  -The order in which you're card was booked, i understand the reason for it. But, it still comes across bizarre that Kidd/Ryback & Harper/JoMo would be classed as main events over the opening two matches. However, i found the posing to be better in the final two matches. Yep. Only played out because of the draft order that way. There will definitely be a low/mid/upper card established, though they may not be all who we've come to expect in the spots they've been in, in other promotions.All in all a good start to a fed that has all the tools and potential to be a really great piece of work. Also, a little side note. This is the first 'response to the feds i've watched so congrats, haha! (i will be replying to all that i have viewed shortly) Sweet! Thanks for that. There are plenty of great Feds on here. Definitely check em out. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 19, 2015 19:01:20 GMT -5
Finally got around to viewing this. And for a first show, I am very impressed.
Lesnar looked like a beast in his match against Orton. Hitting him with some brutal clotheslines that turned him inside out. Showing his brute strength with some body presses. And finally asserting his dominance by stepping on Orton's chest for the cover. Good work with that match.
I think that the Colter and Hogan segments would have been better off filmed in front of a black background than photoshopped. Is it photoshopped or did you film it in front of a computer screen or something? I like the dialogue between them though.
I love that light you're using for your entrances. So cool and clean looking. That's a really cool Cena figure if you ask me. The Pun one is great too. Some good back and forth action in this match. I like how you're scaffolding this one. You've got some cool camera work going on in this one as well. Interesting angles! Haha Punk pulled an Eddie move. Dirty rat. Smart rat but a dirty one.
There was some great action in the Kidd versus Ryback contest. I would've liked to see Tyson's high flying moves done with string though. Still a fun contest.
All hell broke loose during that Luke/Morrison match! Haha no one wants to step to Lesnar? I thought it was a bit strange at first, but it played very very well! Especially after what Brock did to Orton. Really cool ending with Dana laying down the law. This tournament is shaping up to be very good!
Overall, I enjoyed this and it was a great way to start your fed. Some of the posing needs a bit of work, but that is something that improves with time and practice. You're doing a great job and being a very active member of this board. Welcome to pic fedding buddy! Hope you stick around for a long while.
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Post by Robert69 on Apr 19, 2015 21:45:27 GMT -5
Finally got around to viewing this. And for a first show, I am very impressed. Sweet!Lesnar looked like a beast in his match against Orton. Hitting him with some brutal clotheslines that turned him inside out. Showing his brute strength with some body presses. And finally asserting his dominance by stepping on Orton's chest for the cover. Good work with that match. Thanks. Was really wanting to set up a few different things here, and think I accomplished that.I think that the Colter and Hogan segments would have been better off filmed in front of a black background than photoshopped. Is it photoshopped or did you film it in front of a computer screen or something? I like the dialogue between them though. I green screened them, then used After Effects. I thought I got a better image in-camera than I actually did, and when I tried to pull the green well, it just didn't come out well. I've switched them to a black background for now.I love that light you're using for your entrances. So cool and clean looking. Thanks. I think it's unique, at least for a fed just starting out before having an entrance stage etc.That's a really cool Cena figure if you ask me. The Pun one is great too. Some good back and forth action in this match. I like how you're scaffolding this one. You've got some cool camera work going on in this one as well. Interesting angles! Haha Punk pulled an Eddie move. Dirty rat. Smart rat but a dirty one. There was some great action in the Kidd versus Ryback contest. I would've liked to see Tyson's high flying moves done with string though. Still a fun contest. Yeah, I'm still working to improve my string work, along with posing.All hell broke loose during that Luke/Morrison match! Haha no one wants to step to Lesnar? I thought it was a bit strange at first, but it played very very well! Especially after what Brock did to Orton. Really cool ending with Dana laying down the law. This tournament is shaping up to be very good! Yeah, wanted to establish some stuff here with everyone involved that carried over to Fallout, and into Fierce.Overall, I enjoyed this and it was a great way to start your fed. Some of the posing needs a bit of work, but that is something that improves with time and practice. You're doing a great job and being a very active member of this board. Welcome to pic fedding buddy! Hope you stick around for a long while. Glad you enjoyed it. I think what I've done of my next ep is already better, so I'm hoping others see improvements. And definitely working to improve those certain things. And I enjoy being a part of it so far. As long as it doesn't do a 180 and become all negative, and boring -- and it doesn't become a task to take part...I'll be here. |
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