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Post by Robert69 on May 5, 2015 13:09:43 GMT -5
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Post by The Champ is Here! on May 5, 2015 13:44:32 GMT -5
Great show, advanced the tourney, and hogan and zeb are not messing around
Im liking the stories you are telling, and i am liking the direction of your fed
Lighting is a bit dark, there were a few wonky poses, and you had a pic out of place. Tyson kidd being interviewed came in mid match
I like that you are making your own finishers too
Good work!
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2015 14:13:27 GMT -5
Opening confrontation was pretty good. Orton being interviewed was decent. Still not sure how I feel about those light panels...they do their job well, but it'd be sick if you could make an actual entrance stage out of those things. As a whole the arena feels really empty. Posing's decent so far, and you repeated frames with Morrison stomping on Orton. You turned 2 into 6. Never do that, it's lazy....unless I'm mistaken, but I saw both links for both pictures were the same. You started turning Randy's waist for the punches, that's a good sign. Didn't see that earlier in the match. I like how on one of the punches it shows Morrison's face tilted sideways and the camera isn't showing the other side of it. Adds a fair amount of realism when it's a technique designed to hide the fact the punches aren't actually making impact in real life. And you repeat frames again, stop doing that. I'm not entirely sure what you were going for with the clothesline....Randy goes for it, shows his arm going out but then Morrison's feet are on the top rope. I'm not entirely sure what the subsequent move was supposed to be either, a suplex? Good finish.
Not sure what to think about this match. Decent length, okay posing, only things that dragged it down for me were repeating frames and the occasional meh pose. Every pose still has a lot of room for improvement, but this was decent.
"I'm going to win, because that's what I do"
It doesn't start off like a typical Brock match does in everyone's shows nowadays so I'll give you that. You repeat frames once again to show Harper being tossed into the turnbuckle. I'd say STOP again but I'm sure you do it a couple more times throughout the show. This match didn't run into my problems with Brock nowadays, mostly because of its length. No "suplex city" shtick which doesn't bug me, but a quick squash. eh...
A couple screwy antics later and Tyson Kidd beats Cena. No clue why he's with Fandingo. A little irritating, but only really because I see there's not much of the show left.
The Ryback match starts off good and then you repeat frames AGAIN for him punching Punk in the corner. It'd be excusable if they were just similar pictures, or even if they were the same pose in a different camera angle, but all you're doing is repeating the same picture mixed with another of the same picture 3 times. More frame repeating as Punk lays the knees to Ryback and they're back in the ring. Match was a little short.
Okay, um
STOP REPEATING FRAMES
Add a couple more storybuilding segments...seems like you're only really building the Hogan/Colter feud when you could be doing more in the way of storyline developement through in ring segments. It'd certainly help this feel more like a complete show, as one of the matches was a good length and the rest were either squashes or rather short.
I'm not entirely sure to say about the posing. The basic posing here wasn't that good but I know how tricky basics are, and not even I know how to get the most out of them so I'll leave that criticism for someone else.
Other then that I had no problems with the show.
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Post by Robert69 on May 5, 2015 14:37:15 GMT -5
Great show, advanced the tourney, and hogan and zeb are not messing around Thanks. And no, they're not. Zeb ain't no push over!Im liking the stories you are telling, and i am liking the direction of your fed ThanksLighting is a bit dark, there were a few wonky poses, and you had a pic out of place. Tyson kidd being interviewed came in mid match I still haven't gotten the lighting 100% the way I want it, but it's considerably brighter this episode than it was the first. I'll go back and fix that pic out of place when I'm done here.I like that you are making your own finishers too There are some I just think work for certain stars.Good work! Thanks! |
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Post by Robert69 on May 5, 2015 14:43:57 GMT -5
Opening confrontation was pretty good. Orton being interviewed was decent. Still not sure how I feel about those light panels...they do their job well, but it'd be sick if you could make an actual entrance stage out of those things. As a whole the arena feels really empty. Posing's decent so far, and you repeated frames with Morrison stomping on Orton. You turned 2 into 6. Never do that, it's lazy....unless I'm mistaken, but I saw both links for both pictures were the same. You started turning Randy's waist for the punches, that's a good sign. Didn't see that earlier in the match. I like how on one of the punches it shows Morrison's face tilted sideways and the camera isn't showing the other side of it. Adds a fair amount of realism when it's a technique designed to hide the fact the punches aren't actually making impact in real life. And you repeat frames again, stop doing that. I'm not entirely sure what you were going for with the clothesline....Randy goes for it, shows his arm going out but then Morrison's feet are on the top rope. I'm not entirely sure what the subsequent move was supposed to be either, a suplex? Good finish. Not sure what to think about this match. Decent length, okay posing, only things that dragged it down for me were repeating frames and the occasional meh pose. Every pose still has a lot of room for improvement, but this was decent. Indeed, the poses still need work, for sure."I'm going to win, because that's what I do" Harper's not one for words.It doesn't start off like a typical Brock match does in everyone's shows nowadays so I'll give you that. You repeat frames once again to show Harper being tossed into the turnbuckle. I'd say STOP again but I'm sure you do it a couple more times throughout the show. This match didn't run into my problems with Brock nowadays, mostly because of its length. No "suplex city" shtick which doesn't bug me, but a quick squash. eh... Brock is a monster. But I don't want him to just be the same monster he was in WWE.A couple screwy antics later and Tyson Kidd beats Cena. No clue why he's with Fandingo. A little irritating, but only really because I see there's not much of the show left. Soon.The Ryback match starts off good and then you repeat frames AGAIN for him punching Punk in the corner. It'd be excusable if they were just similar pictures, or even if they were the same pose in a different camera angle, but all you're doing is repeating the same picture mixed with another of the same picture 3 times. More frame repeating as Punk lays the knees to Ryback and they're back in the ring. Match was a little short. Okay, um STOP REPEATING FRAMES Will take that into advisement.Add a couple more storybuilding segments...seems like you're only really building the Hogan/Colter feud when you could be doing more in the way of storyline developement through in ring segments. It'd certainly help this feel more like a complete show, as one of the matches was a good length and the rest were either squashes or rather short. There's build up for Hogan/Colter, Brock, Kidd/Fandango/Cena, and to a lesser extent Orton here. Planting seeds. Long-term payoff stuff.I'm not entirely sure to say about the posing. The basic posing here wasn't that good but I know how tricky basics are, and not even I know how to get the most out of them so I'll leave that criticism for someone else. Other then that I had no problems with the show. Well, you seemed more complimentary this time, than with the first episode so -- I'll take that as improvement. Thanks for checking it out! |
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Post by The Champ is Here! on May 5, 2015 14:53:35 GMT -5
Everyone repeats pics, not that big a deal
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on May 5, 2015 15:48:50 GMT -5
Let me start by saying that this was a great second effort! I'm already seeing improvements in your posing. As always, your presentation and commentary are on point. I love how clean, crisp, and minimal the setup is. Like I always say, I am an absolute sucker for presentation and you've got it.
Orton versus Morrison was a good match. I could really see their move sets throughout the contest. It was evident in your posing. Glad to see Orton come out with the win though.
Brock has been plowing his way through the competition! And he really did some damage to his opponent. Enough for him to win by count out! He's a beast... Incarnate!
Kidd defeats Cena! The WWE Universe goes crazy! Although Kidd took the cheap way out, it was a great way to develop this feud.
I'm glad that Punk took the W over Ryback. I'm not a fan of that guy at all, but I think he fits in your fed.
Overall, this was another great effort. I'm looking forward to the next one, buddy. Take care!
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Post by Robert69 on May 5, 2015 16:04:04 GMT -5
Let me start by saying that this was a great second effort! I'm already seeing improvements in your posing. As always, your presentation and commentary are on point. I love how clean, crisp, and minimal the setup is. Like I always say, I am an absolute sucker for presentation and you've got it. Glad you dig!Orton versus Morrison was a good match. I could really see their move sets throughout the contest. It was evident in your posing. Glad to see Orton come out with the win though. Thanks. Glad you're seeing improvements.Brock has been plowing his way through the competition! And he really did some damage to his opponent. Enough for him to win by count out! He's a beast... Incarnate! He IS a beast. It's true.Kidd defeats Cena! The WWE Universe goes crazy! Although Kidd took the cheap way out, it was a great way to develop this feud. Sometimes you do what you gotta do. There's more development to come on the next episode of Fallout...I'm glad that Punk took the W over Ryback. I'm not a fan of that guy at all, but I think he fits in your fed. There will be further developments for Ryback.Overall, this was another great effort. I'm looking forward to the next one, buddy. Take care! Appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for checking it out. Hopefully by the time I get that Title shot, I'll have improved enough to be a challenge  |
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Post by attitudesback on May 5, 2015 16:32:13 GMT -5
Huge improvement from the last one in my opinion. The poses were off in some places but for the most part they definitely looked OK to me. The whole "repeating" shots thing isn't that big of a deal, but I did notice it a little as the show went on. I'm looking forward to a lot of things from your fed, especially with the developments you have planned. Particularly what you do with Ryback as the whole "Big Guy" thing would be an easy route to take it. Kidd/Cena was a great Main Event and probably my match of the night. Would like to see you edit string out at some point in the future too.  |
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Post by Robert69 on May 5, 2015 16:54:23 GMT -5
Huge improvement from the last one in my opinion. Glad you feel it's improved. I think so too.The poses were off in some places but for the most part they definitely looked OK to me. The whole "repeating" shots thing isn't that big of a deal, but I did notice it a little as the show went on. Yeah, I'm going to continue to work on the poses, but glad there's been some improvement. I'm looking forward to a lot of things from your fed, especially with the developments you have planned. I think most everyone will be pleased with the eventual pay off for various stories being set up.Particularly what you do with Ryback as the whole "Big Guy" thing would be an easy route to take it. We'll see where Ryback goes from here.Kidd/Cena was a great Main Event and probably my match of the night. I'm glad you enjoyed their match, and I was excited to include Fandango. This will be built on in Fallout, and moving forward.Would like to see you edit string out at some point in the future too. I think I got most of the shots edited out, but I did miss a few of them. Glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2015 17:42:16 GMT -5
I've been looking forward to this! -Zeb calls out Hogan to kick things off, dis gon' be good! -Hogan hates the kids now? 4 Life brother, 4 Life. -Another stacked card for this episode! -Don't lie Orton, you're not fine, you never will be again. Brock practically killed you on Raucous. -I like what you've done with the ring canvas. Simple, but effective. -Orton vs Morrison was a decent match, glad Orton got the win. -I know Harper only had the one line, but it just didn't seem like something he would say. Minor nitpick, that's all. -Well, R.I.P. Luke. You're about to get murdered. -Not sure about that finish, to be honest. I knew Brock was going to win, but that finish seemed a bit off. -Cena vs Kidd was cool. Glad Kidd won, I liked Fandango's involvement. -Ryback vs Punk was a good match as well, I was expecting Ryback to go over, but I'm happy enough with Punk advancing. -Orton vs Kidd and Punk vs Lesnar should be good. I get the feeling that it'll be Lesnar vs Orton for the final. All in all, I liked the show. The posing still needs a lot of work, there were a lot of noticeable stiif poses in Harper/Lesnar. The writing is A-1, can't fault you on that. Looking forward to seeing how AWE develops over the next few shows. Good work Robert69! |
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Post by Robert69 on May 5, 2015 17:59:45 GMT -5
I've been looking forward to this! -Zeb calls out Hogan to kick things off, dis gon' be good! -Hogan hates the kids now? 4 Life brother, 4 Life. I wouldn't say he hates em...they bring him a lot of money.-Another stacked card for this episode! Glad ya dig it.-Don't lie Orton, you're not fine, you never will be again. Brock practically killed you on Raucous. It showed a bit here, but -- he's tough in his own right.-I like what you've done with the ring canvas. Simple, but effective. -Orton vs Morrison was a decent match, glad Orton got the win. Thanks. And indeed. Morrison wont be fading away just yet, though.-I know Harper only had the one line, but it just didn't seem like something he would say. Minor nitpick, that's all. I'll work on that.-Well, R.I.P. Luke. You're about to get murdered. Brock's gonna kill you.-Not sure about that finish, to be honest. I knew Brock was going to win, but that finish seemed a bit off. Gotta change up Lesnar's tactics. Don't wanna just do "suplex city" again and aagain.-Cena vs Kidd was cool. Glad Kidd won, I liked Fandango's involvement. More shall be explained on Fallout about Fandango's involvement.-Ryback vs Punk was a good match as well, I was expecting Ryback to go over, but I'm happy enough with Punk advancing. Got other plans for Ryback-Orton vs Kidd and Punk vs Lesnar should be good. I get the feeling that it'll be Lesnar vs Orton for the final. Well now I'm going to go Kidd/Punk All in all, I liked the show. The posing still needs a lot of work, there were a lot of noticeable stiif poses in Harper/Lesnar. Yeah, gotta work on that.The writing is A-1, can't fault you on that. Looking forward to seeing how AWE develops over the next few shows. Good work Robert69! Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. |
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Post by Wicked on May 6, 2015 17:08:28 GMT -5
Everyone repeats pics, not that big a deal I am going to try to leave you a review soon but I just gotta ask Champ who is everyone? Who actually re-uses pictures a lot??? I've never, I guess I never noticed people do that.. |
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Post by deskjet on May 6, 2015 17:14:02 GMT -5
Here we go. Really enjoying the storyline with zeb and hogan. Posing has improved throughout. Lighting as always is top notch and commentary is solid too. Definately invest in some elites and get the posing better, also the interviews were a nice touch maybe another backstage segment to set up for the final four woulda been a better ending? Just my opinion. Just coming off a tournament myself I can understand the focus on the in ring action side of production so not too harsh on that:). All in all you've done a real nice job distinguishing your fed, making the matches purposeful, and building things up to what should be an entertaining payoff and something that I anticiapte will push your fed to the next level! Keep up the good work my man:)
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Post by Robert69 on May 6, 2015 17:30:26 GMT -5
Here we go. Really enjoying the storyline with zeb and hogan. Hoping for a lot of payoff beyond Hogan/Zeb, but I will say this for everyone...don't expect immediate payoff. I'm a fan of drawn out storylines.Posing has improved throughout. Glad to hear that.Lighting as always is top notch and commentary is solid too. Definately invest in some elites and get the posing better, Yeah, as soon as some of these guys get Elites, I'll be upgrading. Kidd is #1 on that list.also the interviews were a nice touch maybe another backstage segment to set up for the final four woulda been a better ending? Just my opinion. I considered it, but I wanted something to give Fallout purpose, and there will be more ring promos etc in the next ep of Raucous.Just coming off a tournament myself I can understand the focus on the in ring action side of production so not too harsh on that:). All in all you've done a real nice job distinguishing your fed, making the matches purposeful, and building things up to what should be an entertaining payoff and something that I anticiapte will push your fed to the next level! Keep up the good work my man:) Glad to hear you enjoyed it, and I'll hopefully continue to improve! |
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Post by Woods on May 8, 2015 15:02:38 GMT -5
First off, I like the Fierce logo it's awesome. also i'm loving the green them with the show logos as it's my favourite colour haha. Liked the matches more in this episode than your first as i liked the pair ups, Harper & Brock, always wanted to see that happen. Your posing has definitely improved since show 1. so credit to you for that. Only issue with the posing is the use of basics, i'm not a fan of basics as obviously the articulation is nothing compared to that of the elites.& although i understand why you've taken the knee pads off some of the superstars, it looks odd. perhaps try the smaller mattel ones or jakks elbow pads? I like the fed logo in the ring but would love it more if the ring was a scale ring. I guess i just hate all the basic stuff they bring out haha,
The show itself was good and enhanced the tourney into the semi final stage and my pick to win is probably going to be Orton, but in time we'll see if i called it right. Also glad some new stories started with the fandango appearance, interested to see where that leads. Looking forward to Raucous ep 2. this show gets a 7/10 from me. Good work.
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Post by Robert69 on May 8, 2015 15:43:29 GMT -5
First off, I like the Fierce logo it's awesome. deskjet made it for me. He did do great work.also i'm loving the green them with the show logos as it's my favourite colour haha. Liked the matches more in this episode than your first as i liked the pair ups, Harper & Brock, always wanted to see that happen. As have I.Your posing has definitely improved since show 1. so credit to you for that. Thanks.Only issue with the posing is the use of basics, i'm not a fan of basics as obviously the articulation is nothing compared to that of the elites.& although i understand why you've taken the knee pads off some of the superstars, it looks odd. perhaps try the smaller mattel ones or jakks elbow pads? I'm going to look into pads for em. And gotta work with what I have. Sadly, Kidd doesn't have any Elites coming up. He's my #1 to replace right now.I like the fed logo in the ring but would love it more if the ring was a scale ring. I guess i just hate all the basic stuff they bring out haha, Eventually I want to upgrade. It's going to be difficult to have a quality Rumble down the road.The show itself was good and enhanced the tourney into the semi final stage and my pick to win is probably going to be Orton, but in time we'll see if i called it right. Also glad some new stories started with the fandango appearance, interested to see where that leads. Looking forward to Raucous ep 2. this show gets a 7/10 from me. Good work. Be sure to check out...forum.wrestlingfigs.com/thread/319026/awe-fallout-1-2-updatedThe story progresses a bit further. Thanks for watching. Glad you enjoyed, overall. |
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Post by T on May 10, 2015 4:16:26 GMT -5
-Lighting looks better already -Just a grammar thing, as it's popped up twice so far - it should be "couldn't care less/couldn't give a damn", rather than "could" -Nice bit of GM rivalry to open the show -Liked that you bandaged Orton's ribs -Wasn't a fan of the overhead camera shots, it looks so much better from the normal view -RKO pose was a touch off, but a cool spot nonetheless. Orton gained a little bit of his reputation back after the Lesnar match -Liking the interviews with competitors. Nice touch -Random Tyson Kidd picture before Lesnar's match started  -The F5 on the ringpost was a cool way to finish it -Liked that Cena got screwed over, as it keeps him strong, but also pushes Kidd and Fandango -Good win from Punk in a solid main event A good show to say it's still in a tournament stage, a few storylines being built up, too. Looking forward to the tournament being over and the two shows being separated to see how the rivalry plays out from there. I'd say Lesnar is my pick for the champion, but hopefully you throw us a curve ball somewhere along the line. |
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Post by Robert69 on May 10, 2015 10:17:21 GMT -5
-Lighting looks better already Thanks. -Just a grammar thing, as it's popped up twice so far - it should be "couldn't care less/couldn't give a damn", rather than "could" Gotcha. -Nice bit of GM rivalry to open the show It's going to build over time. -Liked that you bandaged Orton's ribs Lesnar nearly killed him. -Wasn't a fan of the overhead camera shots, it looks so much better from the normal view Will try to keep that in mind. -RKO pose was a touch off, but a cool spot nonetheless. Orton gained a little bit of his reputation back after the Lesnar match Yeah, need to work on posing more still -Liking the interviews with competitors. Nice touch Thanks. -Random Tyson Kidd picture before Lesnar's match started I thought I fixed that. Hrm. I'll take a look. -The F5 on the ringpost was a cool way to finish it Trying to mix it up. -Liked that Cena got screwed over, as it keeps him strong, but also pushes Kidd and Fandango Check out Fallout if you haven't -Good win from Punk in a solid main event Thanks. A good show to say it's still in a tournament stage, a few storylines being built up, too. Looking forward to the tournament being over and the two shows being separated to see how the rivalry plays out from there. I'd say Lesnar is my pick for the champion, but hopefully you throw us a curve ball somewhere along the line. There will be a couple surprises along the way, for sure. Glad you enjoyed! |
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Post by RBW on Jun 1, 2015 6:16:32 GMT -5
seriously, I LOVE your camera work. The lighting, the close-ups, the different angles, (this is just based on the first 5 images of Seb and Hogan) Background is dark, inring is light, spot on contrast, brings the focus to the ring nicely. (Some are a little dark, and shadows on the faces, but I'm getting picky now ) anyway, nice startoff calling hogan out, I always like a good story to start off a show. I like Hogan, but Seb has some good points and morals. Interesting altercation... oooh a tourney is always fun! IThe 4 Id like to see advance would be - Morrison, Punk, Cena.... and not sure if Harper or Lesnar... I like them both.... ideally I'd like the final 4 to be Morrison,Punk,Harper,Lesnar Awesome backlit lights for the entrance poses!! Let's go JoMo!! liked the closeup shot of Knee to the gut, highlighting the tactical turning point of control in the match well, that was a sick finish... RKo outta nowhere nice format to the show so far, I like segments, matches, segments, keeps a nice balance and fresh flow to follow wow, harper and lesnar should be main event. I wish this match was the Tourney finals! HARPER TO WIN IT ALLL! (But I see a Lesnar pic in your sig, so I'm assuming he's winning)... lol, tyson kid is backstage to be interviewed.. but there's a match going on dummy! cracking banter - F5 to ringside would kill anyone, Harper bless your soul.... I'm convinced lesnar will win this tourney now! Kid's been waiting all match to finally speak. I hope Cena woops his fake canadian cracker jacks! ...Cheap shot at the start!!! AND Fandangus helped Kidd bully Cena! FU would've won if Fandango didn't help Kidd cheat.... bunch of cowards... Karma will eventually catch up when Kidd has to face Lesnar anyway Main EVEnt, glad Punk won. Ryback seemed a little stiffly posed when he was on his back a few times. Then again, punk did say Ryback is a Stiff and clumsy oaf. Punk and Lesnar will be a great encounter! niiiice show. Look forward to more |
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