BWR UNBREAKABLE Episode #3: INVASION USA BATTLE ROYAL!

Hardcore match was an absolute mess. Though I don't think anyone, including yourself even thought for a moment it wouldn't be. No pacing, posing was dreadful, but eh, it's realistic for a Kelly Kelly match.
Segment afterwards served its purpose perfectly, well it could've used a few more pics for the clash between E and Crimson but other then that just fine.
Recap of the instagram stuff is neat. Hope to see some of these guys (Zayn and the CAW, in particular) on the main show at some point.
Well, looks like they will be. I expected the battle royal to be chaotic at first and when the number of opponents went down for the action to become a little more focused, as in real life. This never really was the case, as most of the shots were people getting tossed over, in headlocks, or someone who just eliminated someone getting tossed out by someone else. Nice to see Zayn pick up the win.

A weird promo follows after ending with Woods, Daffney, and what appears to be a bunny ends the show.
There isn't a whole lot for me to review here, honestly.
From a booking standpoint, on paper:
E and Crimson getting into a fight = money.
Zayn winning a title, good.
Kelly vs Eva = ...
In execution, the Zayn match was severly lacking in competent posing and action. From a story standpoint, this episode sucked. You still don't have any angles besides Big E/Crimson and whatever Xavier's doing. It's unacceptable to only have 2 feuds after 3 episodes. You could've started some via in ring segments, backstage promos, etc. I might think Zack had something going with that muscle dude but they were involved in 6 or so pictures together. Maybe the CAW actually had beef with whoever eliminated him, but hey, 7 pictures isn't enough to tell a story.

I'm not going to comment on the length as you've already addressed this. That, and the criticism of the length is getting a bit redundant for me by now, considering your last two episodes weren't much longer either.

You need to do something about your story telling. You have 1 feud that's been running for a single episode. Maybe there were two feuds started here, but it's one episode before a PPV, which I'm sure you're planning on doing. You neglected to start anything until the second episode, and you only started one thing. The only other instance of storytelling here is the Woods thing, which is creative I guess but makes little sense.

No definitive comment.

Hardcore match was a little odd. Two divas going at it like that is not something we see often. The battle royal was good, although most of the shows were just superstars being thrown over. Super glad to see Zayn win a title, I like him in NXT and it's cool to see him in a fed so soon after being released by Mattel. Apart from that, the promos were ok. I thought the ending was great. The whole 'mad hatter' thing is pretty unique and I'm hoping leads to an interesting place. I think there definitely needs to be more story development/creation, I think it's kinda like NXT in that if this was on TV I could see it being an hour long show. Not bad. Still looking forward to where this is going because only 3 episodes in which isn't many and it still is getting off the ground.

will reply tonight or tomorrow buddy!

Awesome seeing the Divas go at it in the Hardcore match. And they went at it in no regret. Some stiff and nasty action in total. Some nice recap scenes. Really loved that Battle Royal. Bodies flying left and right. Zayn with the win OLE! OLE! OLE! As stated prior Riley and Woods is some great stuff your producing. Your fed is great with some great dynamics and great storylines. Just good work. Sorry for the shorter review but will give you a much longer one for the next Episode. Can't wait for more man your fed is very promising for the American wing of the BWR

-Like the new video intro
-Carlito is a good addition to let Heyman go backstage more
-Liked the way you started the hardcore match
-Was good to see that it wasn't ridiculously hardcore with over the top moves, as it added realism, a bit like the Ivory/Tori hardcore match from ages ago
-Recaps are always useful
-Wow, nice swerve with Big E getting the sack rather than a rematch. Interested to see who steps up as the new #1 Contender
-Battle Royal was enjoyable and I like that you put the belt on Zayn. Should get some good matches out of him
-Freaky segment with Woods, really want to see where you take his character and also Daffney now she's arrived

Another entertaining show. Now the titles are established, I hope we can see lots of storylines developing. Adam Rose is a good one to use, as he's unique to your fed at the moment. The Instagram Tour has gone down well on there, so more in the future would be cool.

Dude! This was ing awesome! Never once has a Divas match interested me in the real world or the pic fed world but this was awesome. Watching hot chicks....well hot chicks in figure form (ok this is just getting creepier)....anyway watching them hit each other with chains, chairs and rubbing a dirty mop in their face was not only awesome to see but hilarious! Its the simple things man. I loved this! Oh and anytime I see a girl get kicked "down there" Im gonna yell out she was kicked right in the chick pea!

Ill say the idea of mixing TNA DA figures with Mattel's doesnt sound too interesting but the way you're making Mercer come off as "larger then life" it works well. Lets be realistic here though, Drew McIntyre is the best guy in that ring Interesting to see where Big E goes after being suspended...Maybe come back as the Yellow Dog? Midnight Rider? LOL!

Its awesome to see custom guys being used like Mitch Muscle as well as uncommon guys like Curt Hawkins & Adam Rose...individuality is always a key to a good fed.

Here we go with the Battle Royal...Hoping that Dragon guy wins (sorry Im old I forgot his name already LOL)...damn JTG gone already? Al Sharpton will have something to say about this! Whoa, I didnt realize Sami was in there...Hope it comes down to Sami vs Dragon with Dragon winning...wtf, get that freak off Kelly! What? ...A rose bud eliminated Dragon? I officially hate you now. I need to book your crap from now on. Sami Wins!! Ok Ill take that for now...but damnit push DRAGON!Hey Kelly is tied up...nice...wait...MH Woods, ok old up dude its 15 till 1 and you're playin some creepy ass music...thanks I wont be sleeping tonight!

Awesome show man I really liked it...Ill need to work my way back to see your other shows as I work through the first page of shows on the board. Cant wait to see where this goes!

First of all
Great start to with the Divas Hardcore match. Let me just say i know how hard it is
to pose divas. But you nailed it !
Would of liked Eva to win though. Maybe cos am a redhead type person ha ha
Missed that show that you run back on Gutted.
Great combo of Tommy and Drew. Still don't think DA's and Mattel work together. I'd
suggest making a Tommy in Mattel. Should be easy use Christian's head.
Thats why i don't like the mix. As Big E looks like a dwarf at side of Tommy.
Poor Big E !
Invasion USA should be good
Backstage interactions are always a plus in my book. Liked the Adam Rose character
The battle royal had good poses. Hoping Adam Roses gets the duke.
Like the Crazy Women attacking Kelly Kelly. Must of missed something is Ary involved with K2 ?
Damn that Evan Bourne !!! He eliminated my pick
Come on Sammy !!!!
YAY he won !!!!
Backstage segment very weird but in a good way. nice inclusion of Brawler.
Underland sounds good.