►MrJerM◄
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Post by ►MrJerM◄ on Jul 19, 2015 14:49:10 GMT -5
Bored, tried another go at it:  |
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Jul 21, 2015 14:30:52 GMT -5
Well for starters its not too shabby. There are a few things that are bugging me about it but it is fairly smooth,and the spacing is...uhh unique I guess ? Lol but the first bit that bothered me was what in the  was with the guy like 10 feet across the ring lol ? That just makes everything so cartoony and will make spacing s bitch in the long run. Anyways its a fairly solid animation as I said but it gets a bit stiff towards the contact with the sticks.. I means there should bea sorta pause or at least small momentum build up lol ! So just work on those things for now and keep practicing:) |
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►MrJerM◄
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Post by ►MrJerM◄ on Jul 21, 2015 18:42:56 GMT -5
Well for starters its not too shabby. There are a few things that are bugging me about it but it is fairly smooth,and the spacing is...uhh unique I guess ? Lol but the first bit that bothered me was what in the was with the guy like 10 feet across the ring lol ? That just makes everything so cartoony and will make spacing s bitch in the long run. Anyways its a fairly solid animation as I said but it gets a bit stiff towards the contact with the sticks.. I means there should bea sorta pause or at least small momentum build up lol ! So just work on those things for now and keep practicing:) Yeah, thanks man, think I'm just a little bit rusty. Been animating recently though, I'll probably post some more later. But yeah, didn't know how I was gonna do it at first and kept repositioning the sticks, didn't realize how far apart they were til half way through lol. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2015 18:47:43 GMT -5
I think Cena should use the Springboard Tombstone to not win matches.
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Post by SE4NY on Jul 29, 2015 5:53:30 GMT -5
zick that was pretty cool, the style is awesome and the stciks are ing cool. The animation was kinda slow and floaty a bit and choppy at parts but it was nice, work on your spacing. |
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Mr.W²
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Post by Mr.W² on Aug 3, 2015 9:28:42 GMT -5
Long time since I've seen Alex's style !
Fairly simple animation here,
the movements are pretty basic and stuff.
But with that being said the animation flows quite well
and its easy on the eye.
Fairly nice job dude.
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Post by alexgg on Aug 4, 2015 8:03:59 GMT -5
Haha, love the sticks.
Nice animation, could have done with more frames though, the pacing was a little all over the place, it felt like it got faster.
The jump was nice but then it sped up, the air-time into the catch could do with more frames to slow it down, of if Kane was closer so the air-time didn't have to reach so far.
Seemed to flow pretty well though, maybe a bigger impact on the tombstone, more bounce perhaps.
Nice to see a wrestling pivot in 2015! haha.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2015 15:23:31 GMT -5
Bored, tried another go at it: Damn, huge improvement there Zick! I haven't commented on any animations in ages so I might be a bit rusty but I'll give it a go. Well first off this is actually pretty good and not so much of an eyesore, I really like the reactions at the end they look simple yet somewhat believable but you could have sold it off a bit better and I really like the stick figures even though it doesn't really make a difference in the animation haha.. Overall I'll give your animation a rating of 7.5/10 |
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