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Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2015 22:16:54 GMT -5
After lots and lots of tutorials here comes this.  I honestly think it came out stunning. But I would love to get your guys feedback. |
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MiniFigChamp28
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Post by MiniFigChamp28 on Sept 24, 2015 16:35:57 GMT -5
After lots and lots of tutorials here comes this. I honestly think it came out stunning. But I would love to get your guys feedback. I would have put in a SR logo but it is still great. |
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Sept 26, 2015 1:20:02 GMT -5
There's parts I like and parts I don't like. Example, the background images look kinda low-res compared to the main image. Also, the "The Future" text kinda blends in at parts making it hard to read. As a whole though I quite dig the layout of everything, the fonts used and so on.
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Post by The Gangsta on Sept 26, 2015 8:38:10 GMT -5
The layout is really nice. The major gripe I have about this is "the future" text. If there was some lighting done to the outline of the text, it would make it pop more and not fade into the background. Also, a Seth Rollins logo would've been pretty cool behind the text. But other than that, great job man.
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Post by Valbroski on Sept 28, 2015 12:44:26 GMT -5
The future text is hard to read. I'd avoid black on dark background for font. Maybe use a dark grey instead? I'd bring both lines of text up a bit so the 'Now' isn't across rollins head in the middle pic. Also if you're going to put a watermark on it I'd suggest keeping it away from the graphics font. I know it's subtle but it's still noticeable enough to draw attention away from the text.
but yeah, nothing major to change. keep reading tutorials man. you're off to a good start.
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Post by ¡Twist Of Cinnamon! on Oct 5, 2015 2:13:03 GMT -5
I really like it but there are little flaws here and there. The background images could have had a bit more done to them, even a few simple gradients to separate the colour scheme from the focal point. Maybe even a slight blur with the opacity lowered on the background too. And as mentioned previously, the text is a bit hard to read. I do like that you never went for anything over the top regarding text. Usually a simple font in white (or similar) is all you need.
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Post by HTMN on Oct 6, 2015 8:42:23 GMT -5
I like it. I think the background is too strong for the text though. I would have made the font slightly larger but not huge, don't want to overkill it. I would have also added a slight glow or lightened the background around the font to make it stand out more. Maybe added the SR logo too and used the image of him holding the belt up as the main image.
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Post by madness86 on Oct 18, 2015 20:05:35 GMT -5
Looks sweet
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Post by cmiller79 on Nov 2, 2015 2:51:10 GMT -5
I like it
I think it would look a lot better if THE FUTURE was in white tho
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Post by A-Rob on Nov 2, 2015 3:04:45 GMT -5
Looks awesome.
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