LocalMeltzer
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Post by LocalMeltzer on Feb 12, 2016 0:51:22 GMT -5
Hi all, I have been watching your diaries, and I was pleasantly surprised by the booking of your show, now it's time to try yourself in this field. I am from Ukraine, so I apologize in advance if you will observe grammatical errors.
 Die or prove Balor Club what you're worth!
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Post by LocalMeltzer on Feb 12, 2016 0:51:48 GMT -5
 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________PART-TIME-PLAYERS
Triple H, The Undertaker, The Rock, Sting, Chris Jericho
MAIN EVENT
John Cena, Roman Reigns, Brock Lesnar, Bray Wyatt, Dean Ambrose, Seth Rollins
UPPER MIDCARD
Sheamus, Alberto Del Rio, AJ Styles, Big Show, Kane, Dolph Ziggler, Kevin Owens, Rusev, Сesaro
MIDCARD
Ryback, The Miz, Kofi Kingston, Big E, Luke Harper, Braun Strowman, Kalisto, Stardust, Neville, Xavier Woods, Erick Rowan, D-Von Dudley, Bubba Ray Dudley, Mark Henry, Tyler Breeze, Jey Uso, Jimmy Uso, Tyson Kid
LOWER MIDCARD
Konnor, Viktor, R-Truth, Titus O'Neil, Jack Swagger, Goldust, Darren Young, Sin Cara
JOBBER
Damien Sandow, Curtis Axel, Zack Ryder, Heath Slater, Adam Rose, Bo Dallas___________________________________________________________________________________________________ |
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Post by LocalMeltzer on Feb 12, 2016 0:52:00 GMT -5
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Post by LocalMeltzer on Feb 12, 2016 2:06:11 GMT -5
 BALOR DEBUT ON RAW! AND DESTROY DANIEL BRYAN!!!
Last Monday, Daniel Bryan announced the end of the career of professional wrestling, he spoke words of encouragement to people in Seattle. People shouted, "Yes! Yes! Yes!" Daniel was going to leave the ring with tears in his eyes, he examines the arena. Suddenly, the lights go out in the arena, red smoke covers the ramp, the smoke cleared and we can see the writing on titantrone "Welcome to the Balor Club!" The light goes out again! When turned on, it is the back of Daniel! It is he! It's a demon! He knocks Bryan down and then begins to beat the chair! He stuck his head in Daniel's chair! And it fulfilled Coup De Grâche ! The crowd is buzzing annoyance, but Balor closing his eyes enjoying the moment!
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Post by The Kevstaaa on Feb 12, 2016 7:45:10 GMT -5
Interesting starting choice. A heel Finn Balor debuting on the main roster is different. I like teh graphics and the link to the Coup de Grace gif. Looking forward to this.
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Post by tg11 on Feb 12, 2016 8:07:28 GMT -5
Finn Balor jumping from NXT over on to the main roster making his main roster debut and in a shocker he debuts as a heel debuting by taking out Daniel Bryan right after he announces his retirement from WWE I mean no greater way to get heat than by Balor doing that
Seeing Balor as a heel will definitely be interesting to say the least
If The Bullet Club starts up here in WWE but under The Balor Club label then it should be interesting to see who joins
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Post by DTP. on Feb 12, 2016 13:38:52 GMT -5
Not a bad start. I'd re-categorise your roster so it's not essentially listing certain guys as "jobbers" or "lower midcarders" - it could affect how the reader foresees match results (i.e. being really f'n predictable). I'd also date for context the little report you did. I wouldn't have debuted Finn by attacking the retiring Daniel Bryan if Bryan isn't going to come back because then it raises expectations that he will. Other than that, I'm anticipating your next step.
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Post by Red Dragon on Feb 12, 2016 15:11:28 GMT -5
I'm a big Balor fan. So seeing a diary focus on him is great. Good way to have him debut something very different, I like it. Although the picture should have been of the Demon. Good luck, keep it up and keep it unpredictable.
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Post by Planktung on Feb 12, 2016 18:30:56 GMT -5
Interesting start. Be creative and have fun.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 13, 2016 5:57:49 GMT -5
I like the creativity here. It's different, fresh, and new. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
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Post by LocalMeltzer on Feb 13, 2016 8:37:14 GMT -5
Thank you for your feedback, I will try as soon as possible publish a new edition of RAW
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