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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2016 9:20:38 GMT -5
Here it is everyone! Hatred! Be sure to let me know what you all think guys hope you enjoy it.
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 30, 2016 16:31:39 GMT -5
Describing the stipulation/history before Kane/Wyatt? Like it.
Crazy table spot with the power bomb.
Mad ending. Was that a Sister Abigail in mid air??
Not sure Umaga should've been pinned clean, especially off of that move. Made him look kinda weak honestly.
Every match has a story and a purpose. This is great. They're fighting for a reason.
Austin/Cena was great. Awesome posing on the stunner at the end, Hogan coming out? Dream match after dream match!!
Ambrose!? What the hell?! HBK takes the win. Another great match.
All the matches had purpose, felt like legitimate PPV contests and I can see a few routes where you will take the feuds. It's a shame you haven't got any replies yet honestly, you've got this down. Couple presentation issues for me (carpet, WWF logos on the stage and the VHS tapes not covered) but you've got a real solid fed here. Enjoyed this one.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2016 8:05:38 GMT -5
Great job at getting a big-time PPV feel here man! Love Austin vs Cena - not even sure it would be that good in reality. Looking forward to seeing what you do with Hogan. A very solid show!
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Post by slowgraffiti on Jul 31, 2016 10:16:13 GMT -5
Arena is already looking better than the last PPV, great to see the evolution of ECW. As attitudesback said, few things still need to be fixed before it is totally clean looking but those are easy fixes.
Kane vs Wyatt was insane, these type of matches are where you really shine imo. Table spot on the outside was insane, and the ending with Wyatt was just as cool as the previous show - I think we all know what those noises mean.
Ambrose vs Umaga was cool - glad to see DA get the win clean, good for building up his reign with the belt. Not much else to say, but I enjoyed it.
Cena vs Stone Cold was great - loved the recap for the buildup, and it had a real main event feel to it. Blood effects looked good, and the ending left it open for another "dream match" down the line, even if I could take or leave the Hulkster.
Pulling for Seth in the main event. Great action, reminded me of the brawls HHH and Shawn had in 2003/04, with Seth bringing it up to date. Thought the Nash interference was going to seal the deal for Seth, so I was shocked to see Ambrose interfere. Great ending in terms of storyline potential, curious to see where it goes next.
Another good show man - felt like it had a much better pace and flow. Each show is improving by leaps and bounds, and ECW is fast becoming one of my favourite shows on the board.
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Post by Gone. on Jul 31, 2016 11:12:50 GMT -5
I don't know what you use for editing, but I'd recommend using Premiere Pro, or something like that. Otherwise, try to add an outline to your font, so we can actually read all of it. And maybe don't pick bright yellow. Shots like this one are ruined by the amount of text on screen, and it's unreadability. For example. A slight boldness, combined with a dark outline creates an effect that makes it more readable to the viewer. //Your attention to detail and close shots really make this show come to life, just trying to help with a little advice. |
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Post by Woods on Aug 3, 2016 6:00:24 GMT -5
Thoroughly enjoyed this show, definitely had that PPV supercard feel that your fed is now going for.
Starting off with an exciting and hardcore opener, some epic spots in this one. I really regret selling that Kane, it was my favourite attire of his. Taker vs Wyatt coming up? Sounds good.
Ambrose vs Umaga is a fresh match up so I was looking forward to what it could bring to the table, and I did predict Ambrose winning from the start but didn't think he would've that easily.
The Cena vs Austin match was probably my favourite of the show. I loved the build up prior to the match, and the opening fist fight leading to Austin's lip being busted open (which was a neat spot, good job) was awesome. The match itself was excellent, really enjoyable. And Hogan coming out at the end there sets up another match for the ages.
The main event felt like a main event. And there was lots of awesome spots throughout, i loved Seths double curb stomp from the top rope, that was awesome. You've got the pedigree pose down to a tee, i need to work on that one desperately. Shocked to see Ambrose turn up at the end there, but if it means HBK keeps the title, I'm happy.
Your fed has come on leaps and bounds from when it started, your matches are always to a great standard. It seems you get better with each show you put out.
Noticeable changes in this show were the time frame of each shot, it made the matches flow much better than in previous episodes. A lot of the aerial shots were very blurry so that could do with some work, and the arena, although coming along, still could do with a few adjustments to take it to the next level. Looking forward to more!
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