Dr. Mantis Toboggan MD
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I need a monster condom for my magnum sized dong.
Joined on: Nov 25, 2011 16:25:54 GMT -5
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Post by Dr. Mantis Toboggan MD on Mar 10, 2017 13:50:42 GMT -5
The camera zooms in on Mantis Toboggan. He seems to have lost a considerable amount of weight and used a lot of Rogaine.
Toboggan: Charles, I need to get ready for my match, especially after what happened last time. Charles: But that goes against everything you stand for. Toboggan: It doesn’t matter, I am tired of being a joke. Charles: Alright, then let's get to work. Toboggan: Not just yet, we must research the opponent. Charles: Okay… Toboggan: Shut up and get to work.
Charles goes off to research Toboggan’s opponent, Scarlett Quinn.
Charles: So she’s a former WFWF Champion. Toboggan: Perfect, taking out a former champ will launch me sky high. Charles: Then we are going to have to get you ready. Toboggan: Let’s do THIS!!!!!
They work out strenuously for a few days for hours on end. Toboggan has made a lot of progress.
Charles: You’ve done great. Toboggan: I know. I am going to dominate WFWF until they recognize me as the talent I am. They shall know my……
You see a clapperboard go off in front of the camera. We also see Toboggan being shoed off with a Broom by…… Dr. Mantis Toboggan?
Toboggan: This isn’t working out, skedaddle you donkey brained dick. “Toboggan”: I thought this was going really well…… Toboggan: WRONGUH!!!!!!
The fake Toboggan leaves as Charles and the real Toboggan talk.
Charles: So what’s the plan now? Toboggan: I will take a nap and wing it. Charles: That’s all? Toboggan: Yep.
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Post by Rated R on Mar 11, 2017 6:35:48 GMT -5
To be honest I probably enjoyed this way more than I should have, purely because of the reveal at the end. The biggest issue I had is that it's just so barebones, the premise is actually pretty fun but there's no meat to it, the whole thing is over and done with way too quickly. You need to read a few RP's and see how people use a single theme throughout a number of scenes and how that helps to develop and deepen a character. I get that Toboggan is at heart a joke character but the only way you'll get more out of it is by working at it and developing parts of your game rather than coasting through with a fun premise and not much else.
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