BAoW Presents 'Possible Redemption'

This and TWA. Ah crap

-Oooo nice layout, this dvd thing should be interesting
-Battle royal, whoop!
-god, benoit and regal are going for it
-woah! Shawn Micheals turned up
-Holy mother of Tafty lmao
-what a move from Haas!
-Attack of the ghetto!
-Haas wins! yay

-uh oh Dead Cell have arrived!

-JHurricane vs London. Yay
-choking him out with the cape!
-Shining wizard! No, missed
-ref bumpage, zomfg
-Dead cell invasion! whoop
-Damn hurricane was screwed

-Kimo vs Noble. Should be good
-yowch, Face wash
-phew, noble reverses!
-EWA Screw over again!
-Glad Noble won

-Styles vs london. <3
-slapping! cocky git
-Pele!
-Shelton!
-Brock!
-F5!
-foot on the rope,. christ
-Styles clash and a miss!
-good ol' styles

-Regal and ebnoit still going at it!?
-Headbutt!

-Haas vs Angle. Booyah!
-face slam. Ouch?
-thrown off the top rope with a belly to belly!
-Ref bumpage again! dayum
-I smell interference
-Damn i have a good nose
-Sharpshoooooooottttttttttttttaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
-Roll up!
-No!
-Haas got the 3 Holy !
--WTF!
-CHRISTOPHER MOTHER ING DANIELS!
-wtf was that about with the ghetto!?

Great show mallett. Wuved it <333

Yey, tis finally on!

- F'n Bret shouldn't have a title shot. lol

- Battle Royal - Edge with the spear! Yey, HBK! ;D lolz. Haas wins!

- NYC and DC just owned the BAoW!

- London vs Hurricane - C'mon London. Shining Wizard! Your damn right, Dead Cell are owning tonight, lol

- Gibson vs Kimo - EWA again! Ha, Gibson won!

- Kenta Kobashi! Matt Hardy! Good gwad!

- London vs Styles - Man, I'm loving this action. Thank you NYC! Ah balls, Styles wins!

- Benoit and Regal must be dead!

- Haas vs Angle - I'm gunning for Angle. Man, this match is going great! I marked out! Damn Hart! Haas won the belt, must change the thread then, lol. Christopher Daniels! Nice work on that Mikey. F'n Ghetto

Loved the show Mallett, your best yet. Keep it up.

9/10

Alright first off i have to say i like the DVD format....awesome idea. One thing i don't like is the way you did the scrollbars i hate how you have two of them it just annoys me to be honest. I like your crowd, it really helps that they have shirts on. Good opening segment i enjoyed it overall...rather simple but good and well put together...Nice next links to.

Bret's position in his entrance pic looked sloppy and not so good...kinda lazy looking. Ha Earl Hefner as security nice...A battle royal it should be good. Charlie Haas's entrance also looked a little lazy to me, not a big deal but still. Benoit's entrance looked nice....no name plates though? Nice uh rolling around and such....the chair shot was weird a chair just suddenly appeared in Benoit's hands...you should have had a pic of him getting it or yea. Pretty nice elbows by Cena, nothing wrong with them. Benoit's third chair shot, looked a little bit weird it didn't really seem like he was holding the chair at all. You added a mid air pic on the german suplex!!....i guess you do listen to me sometimes anyways it looked great. Wheres the mid air pic for the german to Benoit <__<. Alright looking elbow by Haas could have had a wind up pic to use show some more force behind it. Well the spear was weird...i don't know if it was the camera angle or what but edge like teleports to one end of the ring and than to the other side for the spear....Cool idea for the pose though i really like the landing into the turnbuckle, a mid air contact pic would have been great. Uh all of a sudden Kennedy ends up on his back at the other side of the ring and Shawn Michaels comes in? Oh it would have helped if i read the commentary....none the less the dropkick could have used a mid air pic, its a easy enough string hold. The sweet chins music was alright though you should have had Michaels actually kicking Kennedy near his head rather than in his chest. I love how you made Kennedy flip over the ropes looked great and awesome idea behind it. The low blow looked terrible in all honesty....They are hard to do but it looked like Cena was just kinda crawling around, try yo like turn his torso and have him on the side of his legs sorda.....ask me on MSN for a pic cause that made no sense. Benoit gets eliminated he was my pick to, nice elimination though. Nice looking dropkick by Haas, it would have helped if his feet were touching cenas back...nice either way. "Jack: OH MY GAWD, it has the 'E' logo" hahahahahahahah nice. Hmm for Benoit's spine buster? you could have made the chair like collapse when Regal hits it maybe....just a suggestion. Nice pile driver, could have had a mid air pic but not really needed. "Steven: Benoit's back, bounces of the ring mat" that should say Cena's back if i am correct? Very nice inverted death valley driver by Hass...i think thats what it is anyways....Nice beat down by the ghetto. Darn i wanted to see the FU through the table...though i want Haas to win. I don't really understand what Haas did to put Cena through the table, was it like a flap jack or just a trip thing, another pic would have helped it. Haas throwing everyone out just looked weird to me, i don't know why just didn't look right. Haas's one taunt at the end looks bad, not the one where he is on his knee's his other one, the left arm is positioned rather poorly in my opinion. OK well it was a good match it had a few problems with poses not having enough pics, but it had great action and a rather nice flow to it.


Good backstage segment, i got slightly confused but after i looked over it once it made sense, good job.

Nice entrance gear for London. One thing i notice is you have one of London's knee pads rather high and the other one not so high, just looks a little weird. The ducked tie up could have had another pic, it was a little confusing at first. The roll up looks alright about the best you can do with Ra's in reality. I like that you have London ducking under the ropes it gives it a nice reality feel or something like that. I got really confused at the last two pics of the page, first Hurricane is arguing with Heb, and than all of a sudden he is one his side and London is at the outside of the ring. Hurricanes headlock just about seemed like it was more a neck breaker or a neck wrench of some sort, to me at least. The London flip over the ropes was nice though it was confusing to me, the "flippy dippy" looked incredibly sloppy to be the positions and everything, on the plus side at least you used string. For some reason i ing love the looking of the shining wizard, great positioning on Hurricane. I am glad hurricane kicked out, the match would have been to short if it ended there. I really liked the Hurricanes roll up it just looked great. Dropkick by London looked pretty alright, a little stiff but again you get points for using string. The spinning DDT had a pretty bad flow to it in all honestly, just didn't fit together right. The modified exploder looked like a back drop to me but you used string so nice job. Nice counter into the Randy Orton back/neck breaker it looked and flowed really nicely. Neat looking roll up counter thing, i really like the creativity used in it. The standing moonsault was nice though it could have used easily one more pic if not two just to help out the flow of it abit. The shining wizard wasn't close to as good as your first. The super kick pic had rather poor lighting and didn't look like the super kick connected. Oh wait that was supposed to happen Eh the shooting star press needed a bunch more pics, no flow what so ever, i like storm making Heb count the pin. good match, some rough poses but the match had a great flow, i am not a fan of the interference.

Time for another bit of my reply : ).Another pretty good backstage segment i understood it alot better than the last one. Simple but good.

Honestly i would hate to use the Yoko fig or rosey in my fed at all, their playability is so poor it must make everything hard. The lariat looked nice though, i can't see Gibson knocking kimo down this early in the match with a move like that....it might have been better to start him with a chop block or maybe even a toe drag of sorts. Gibson's dropkick to Yoko was really quite stiff and needed a contact shot...in my opinion anyways. Kimo's kick to Gibson was pretty good looking. When Gibson hung up Kimo on the ropes it just about looked like Kimo was doing a spear or shoulder block to Gib's. You sure took the easy way out on the Yakuza, i can't say i like the look of it, maybe if you had the angle from behind Kimo's head or something. I guess you got your new cam right about here? i would have at least finished the match with the old cam or tried to keep the lighting more similar....great quality though. I have no idea what Kimo did to Gibson after Gibson came off the ropes i thought it was a clothesline but the commentary was contrarily to that thought. The mud hole stomps or whatever you want to call them were pretty nice. Pretty nice boot to the outside of the ring, a little stiff but thats probably the best you can do with Kimo. Gibson arm dragging Kimo looked great but would be pretty dang hard to do in reality, great pose though. The forearm to Yoko looked a little funny in all honestly he turned abit to fast for my liking another pic could have helped. I have no idea what happened when Batista came in, i am guessing you were going for a spine buster, the main problem was Tista ended up on the other side of Yoko then when he first started.HOLY ....my team scored a touchdown and are in the lead sorry back to the reply. The RKO needs some work you have Orton on the ground with Kimo way up in the air, if you flipped it around it would look much better. Gibson wins, twas a good match i enjoyed it, again not enjoying the interference but meh the great flow to the match made up for it....work on your poses though.

Nice little informative segment, Kenta should be good.

First off lower AJ's elbow pad, it servers no purpose as is : P.London again? why? owell he is good so i won't complain. The headlock take down could have used work mainly with AJ's positioning on the second pic of it should shouldn't be lying flat on his face. The first head lock pic of the next page could also use some work, have London sitting more to show some for kinda, again ask me on msn for a better description of what i mean. Hmm lighting change, this lighting give it more of a Indy feel in a way i suppose...i like it. All the tie ups and counters and such got me all confused for awhile so i am just skipping by them...Okay i am back with London's second slap i believe. The lighting has a sorda strange effect in this one pic, i really like it.....it kinda looks like the sun or something.....yea....I don't understand why London bailed from the ring when he was in control, shouldn't AJ do that? Pele kick looked great, editing was shaky but I'm not one to talk about editing. When AJ was setting up for the suplex it looked more like London was because London had AJ's tights and AJ's arm was just dangaling...The neckbreaker could have use a pic of AJ flipping over. I am glad London kicked out, the match would have been far to short. The lift up of the powerbomb looked funny but hey its the RA leg joints about the best you can do with them really. The editing on the hurricanrana was pretty bad, but you should get better as you get used to your cam, the hurricanrana could have used a pic of london countering the power bomb. I like the landing for the hurricanrana. Great spring board legdrop nice flow pretty nice postionings yea. Aj kicks out and than all of a sudden London is at the outside of the ring....confusing if you ask me. You could have had AJ's forearm actually hit London in the face but not a big deal. I guess that was a Top rope DDT? or something to that effect, it could have used a mid air pic. London getting his foot on the rope was nice, it showed that the DDT thing was a powerful move. Another interference?! this is starting to get annoring....Nice drop kick though it looked like more of a enzunguri to me. No midair pic on the F5 disapointed me. I got a little sidetracked talking to you on MSN about miz so i am at the styles clash thing yea...Aj won, yay...The interference bugged me the rest of the match was good i love the new cam....

Very nice backstage brawl, the poses were alright for the most part, i loved the pose of regal gettin pushed off. The daving headbutt wasn't so good benoit was to vertical.

Yay i get to see angle, he entrance looked great very well done. This mach should be great, it better live up the my
expectations...You sure do a lot of ducked tie ups that is like four or five this show. The hip toss looked just like a wrestling take down by hass to me, either way i like that you are starting this match off very technical. Nice looking front headlock by Haas though it kinda doesn't look like he has a hold of Angles head. Editing on the body drop to the outside was shaky but its a bitch to edit on skin tone's so i understand. Pretty decent paseball slide nothing really wrong with it, though it was a tad bland, you could have also had a pic of Haas getting falling on the the ground. I like angle just streching Haas's neck back, it shows angles brutalty? well. The face slam looked good aswell. The suplex was fairly nice though it also could have used a landing shot. The backdrop to the turnbuckle looked sotra strange to me, but pretty nice. The baseball slide needed more of a contact and more of a landing shot i think anyways. Nice job making Haas going for a pin, it really fit in properly. The spear shoulder block thing to Angle looked quite painful, nice. Nice forearm, the running flip thing flowed weird, hass would have landed on the turnbuckle or on the floor but you had him land on his feet inside the ring. Belly to belly suplex off the top rope, awesome pose there. Nice counter with the elbow to break out of the german it looked nice. You could have had a actual pic of Angle ducking the lariat but thats what commentary is for i suppose. I like the german though i think you could have had angles legs arched back a slight bit more, a small detail though i think it would look better. I like the sequence of the suplex to the gut drop though you should have had a pic of Haas lifting Angle up over the ropes before you had Angle hung up. The elbow looked funny, like Haas didn't even hit Angle. Nice counter of the tourture rack by Angle it looked good for what is was. Swinging neck breaker could have easily used another pic, though i like the idea for the move. Another interference Wheres the mid air pic for the tiwst of fate...owell. Sharpshooter, nice. Angle putting his hand out for a handshake and Bret punches him.....darn. Nice roll up, i am glad Angle kicked out. Interesting counter to the german suplex. Nice knee to angle, looked about as good as you can do it with RA's. Haas wins well that sucks. Great match my favourite of the night, had some pretty decent poses and a nice flow and feel to it good job. Christopher Daniels....the custom looks interesting, i will have to see it better, it can't be any worse than my Danielson. Nice ghetto interview i liked it.

Hey, I'll give you a bigger reply later, but just a few quick notes.

Good:
-I like the DVD style presentation.
-Good action in matches.

Bad:
-The commentary was really really bad. You do not say 'lol'. Ever. Some of it didn't make sense
-Poses. Need alot of work.
-Try not to change the light. There was one that used daylight, whcih looked really good, then it went dull again.

So yeah.

LOVE IT

Hey Mallet I have a name you know!

anyway here we go BAoW....

- Lovin the dvd format ;D

- Nice opening seg with Bisch/Hart, a little short though

- "We're indy we don't have comercial breaks" lol

#1 Contender battle royal
- Great way to kick of the show, nice to see Benoit/Regal continue their fued. Also great idea of making Hass overcoming the odds.

- Uh the backstage segment was kinda confusing

BAoW Lightweight title match: The Hurricane vs. Paul London (C)
- lol at London's entrance gear
- This was a good fast paced match which I really enjoyed, the shining wizard poses were the best I've seen. Too bad Hurricane lost, Oh Damn you EWA!

James Gibson vs. Kimo
- good match, I was rootin for the underdog, I loved the fashwash poses. WTF!? EWA AGAIN!!!!!

BAow Internet title match: Paul London vs. AJ Styles (C)
- I think you need a new AJ the headis good, but I don't like the long tights.
- Damn this was match of the night no doubt! Thank you NYC! And Styles picks up the W.

- Damn Benoit and Regal are still going at it!

BAow title match: Charlie Hass vs. Kurt Angle (C)

- O.K It's main event time, I'm rooting for Hass
- Good match up, didn't like the EWA interference for the third time, but anyway GLAD AS HELL Hass won. Wait lights out.......OMFG!! Dainels!


Overall nice show, but there are some flaws. It looked like you changed camera's during the match. And your commentary was very entertaining but don't say lol and stuff like that. But once again BAow puts on a great show, 9/10

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