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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 2, 2006 13:52:48 GMT -5
Alright, here is the latest show from PHW, definitally our best show EVER. Music[/b] 1. Summer Shudder by AFI 2. Something More by Manic Drive 3. Borders and Shading by In Flames Card[/u/]
1. Corey Crimson VS Ace
2. Shawn Williams VS Gage
3.  VS - Finals
Enjoy and please leave some feedy! Woooo
Dawn Of Destiny - Part 1
Dawn Of Destiny - Part 2
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Kingpin288
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Post by Kingpin288 on Dec 3, 2006 9:26:48 GMT -5
Well im only going to watch the first video as that was enough for me, first match was just gay holding each other and cuddling, with no selling at all. Second was so much missed movies and OVER SELL! Just work on practicing more and learning how to do proper moves and selling must be worked on!
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Post by honeymustard on Dec 3, 2006 9:37:43 GMT -5
It's Violent Beling, what did you expect!?
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 3, 2006 11:40:35 GMT -5
It's Violent Beling, what did you expect!? I'm sorry, did you have something better? |
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 3, 2006 11:52:14 GMT -5
The first match First Video... Ok, I liked all the double stomps, and the one on the tramp was nice, the Driver was sick but that's because he didnt protect his head...at all...lol Lots of right sided stuff headlocks, armbar, suplexes are what come to mind, so keep working on that, and keep working on selling moves. Match 2 Video 1 Working the right side still  I didn't like how he was selling his right arm and then he lariated you.. Worst sell on the backdrop EH...make sure when you forearm him you connect, your forearm to the side of there head, under there ear Liked the dropkick, and the flatliner Don't chain at the end of the match. Dudebro Dudebro Dudebro...when he has you set up for the alabama slam, if he's just going to do Dupree's finisher and sitout with it, make sure you wrap your arms around him tight and tuck your chin, your going to hurt your neck, be careful |
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 3, 2006 16:12:55 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies guys, and yeah the Chaining at the end of my match with Gage...I accidentally spliced that part into the middle for some reason. I edited it at literly 3am.
Yeah, I'm not sure why we worked the right a few times, it was Corey Crimsons first match also.
You guys should watch the Main Event, much better than the 1st 2 matches. Probably the best match I've ever had.
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Post by honeymustard on Dec 3, 2006 16:32:59 GMT -5
It's Violent Beling, what did you expect!? I'm sorry, did you have something better? Nah, I'm not a yardtard like this WWE shooting imbecile. |
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 3, 2006 16:52:32 GMT -5
Then stay the  out of the BYW Section you prick. |
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Post by Kingpin288 on Dec 3, 2006 17:02:53 GMT -5
ok so i watched the second video..it was worst than the first man...im sorry but if that was your best match than i dont want to know how bad the other ones are..im not trying to be like mean or an bunghole but im just saying its really sloppy and needs alot of practice...work on your moves, selling, move the ring away a little bit from the trampoline, and dont talk to people when your doing a match as they tell you what to do next...you make it so obvious..just practice and study other peoples work
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 3, 2006 19:01:51 GMT -5
I'm sorry, did you have something better? Nah, I'm not a yardtard like this WWE shooting imbecile. If your not a "yardtard" don't post on a "yardtard" board. K Thx. |
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Post by Timothy Theory on Dec 4, 2006 18:29:46 GMT -5
The Red Head Kids Weren't Too Good Man..... I Didn't Really Feel Like Watching The Rest, Cause These Guys Are Saying It's Not That Good, But I Don't Know....
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 4, 2006 20:31:29 GMT -5
It was the "red head" kids first match..and he didn't do that bad. Could work on the speed of his chaining.
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Post by Timothy Theory on Dec 4, 2006 23:49:02 GMT -5
Yeah, That Was Pretty Much It.... Our New Video Was Pretty Good, I Was Just Watching It.... Idk When I'll Have It Up, Cause My Computer's Not Cooperating With Me, But I'm Gonna Put Up The Whole Matches... My Friend Mike, In His Match, Hung From A Rope In A Tree For His Ladder Match, And Fell, That Was Crazy.... Where I'm Going With This, Is I Think You'd Like It Better Than Our First One....
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 4, 2006 23:58:23 GMT -5
Yeah, That Was Pretty Much It.... Our New Video Was Pretty Good, I Was Just Watching It.... Idk When I'll Have It Up, Cause My Computer's Not Cooperating With Me, But I'm Gonna Put Up The Whole Matches... My Friend Mike, In His Match, Hung From A Rope In A Tree For His Ladder Match, And Fell, That Was Crazy.... Where I'm Going With This, Is I Think You'd Like It Better Than Our First One.... Up IT  |
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 5, 2006 0:09:57 GMT -5
Yeah, That Was Pretty Much It.... Our New Video Was Pretty Good, I Was Just Watching It.... Idk When I'll Have It Up, Cause My Computer's Not Cooperating With Me, But I'm Gonna Put Up The Whole Matches... My Friend Mike, In His Match, Hung From A Rope In A Tree For His Ladder Match, And Fell, That Was Crazy.... Where I'm Going With This, Is I Think You'd Like It Better Than Our First One.... How is falling off a rope "crazy"? |
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 5, 2006 0:12:46 GMT -5
Its H4RDK0R3
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Post by The One Who Drives the Taco on Dec 5, 2006 13:17:18 GMT -5
I'll discuss the vids with you on aim... some things i saw that could use some definate improvement but wouldn't be hard to improve... u da man and i still love u like a sister... ttu on aim sometimes later bro...
Manic Drive Rocks.
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Post by wes on Dec 6, 2006 19:53:35 GMT -5
WARNING: I inadvertently wrote a novel. Oh well.1. Corey Crimson vs. Ace Nice forearms by Ace, he's still one of the best you have. Lots of slow holds, which isn't always a bad thing. Seems like Corey Crimson kept that headlock on for a really long time, though. Nice sell by him on the armwrench takeover, though. Ace should've viced his legs on that armbar, would've made it look better. That driver was sick, but did Corey not protect his face on purpose, or was it a rookie mistake? The way they just stood there at 1:30 was kind of lame. Side slam off the trampoline was cool. Nice airplane spin/slam combo. Sick double stomp to finish it off. Try to have someone else make the count in each match. Work on selling submissions a bit better. 2. Shawn Williams vs. Gage Some nice forearms and kicks. Okay, a bit too many kicks. Good clothesline by Gage, nice selling for it. Sick backdrop--the way you sold it sort of messed it up though. Then again, a lot of stuff in wrestling is exaggerated. Sick german suplex, work on the sell for it. The double stomp/double knee combo was cool. Nice suplex reversal. Work on the chops, they look pretty bad. Loved the dropkick to the back and the sell for it. The chaining near the end of the match, while not bad technically-speaking, doesn't work for an ending. Armdrag could've been better, and doesn't work for near the end of a match. Loved the series of reversals around 4:50 to 5:00. Sick DVD into a Falcon Arrow, but that's because you landed kinf of gnarly. DDT at 5:11 looked sort of sloppy. Nice sit-out pedigree. Another bad backdrop sell. Gage doing a Rolling Thunder splash off the trampoline looked funny--was it supposed to look so sloppy? Should've had someone else make the count. 3. Shawn Williams vs. Ace You need more varied ways to start matches than lock-up/arm wrench/forearm. A lot of your matches start out that way. A lot of chaining on the right, you know better. Would've looked better if you had gone over for the snapmare the first time instead of waiting for his third attempt. Good sit-out hip toss. Nice nip-ups. The hip toss at 1:52 would've looked better if it had synced up better. Double dropkick spot looking sort of botched, but that's a hard spot to pull off right. Sloppy piledriver by Ace at 2:26. The kicks at 2:40 looked pretty bad and went on for too long. The kick at 2:57 was sick as hell, though. You waited too long for him to do the move at 3:05-3:10. Ace should sit down with both legs sticking out when he does a Fameasser, otherwise there's a good chance he could break his leg. Nice reverse hurricanrana, good sell for it. I think that curb stomp was supposed to appear missed, but it looked bad. Nice moonsaults, but work on form a bit more. The finish is hard to see, but the vertebreaker through the "table" looked like it was sick. You guys are always improving. Your pure wrestling is much better than the garbage you and that Jason Anarchy kid used to do--glad you got rid of him, by the way; he sucked. I need to debut for you guys soon. Then I can see how ****ty I've become after not wrestling for over a year. 
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Post by Timothy Theory on Dec 9, 2006 14:03:36 GMT -5
Yeah, That Was Pretty Much It.... Our New Video Was Pretty Good, I Was Just Watching It.... Idk When I'll Have It Up, Cause My Computer's Not Cooperating With Me, But I'm Gonna Put Up The Whole Matches... My Friend Mike, In His Match, Hung From A Rope In A Tree For His Ladder Match, And Fell, That Was Crazy.... Where I'm Going With This, Is I Think You'd Like It Better Than Our First One.... How is falling off a rope "crazy"? Because He Was Up Pretty High In The Tree That Had The Rope The Belt Hung From, And We Didn't Think He Was Going To Fall..... |
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Post by Focalin on Dec 9, 2006 14:57:55 GMT -5
It was the "red head" kids first match..and he didn't do that bad. Could work on the speed of his chaining. Why do you insist on asking for our critique, than go against what we say? |
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