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Post by jhr6 on Apr 7, 2006 1:56:43 GMT -5
...That can seriously be considered spam...i'll give you a review on your Impact! show though. I don't really want to read RAW again and forget abit...sorry. -Write your own shows in full with more detail and development of the storylines. My pet peeve with diaries is when they're copy and paste. I can not stand them. It shows that you arn't putting effort into the diary. Also it makes it hard to develope good storylines and get the read into it.-the War of the Worlds idea is really not good...as it would never happen and is unrealistic...I'll admit i've done lots of unrealistic stuff in my diaries, but thats really pushing it. If you were gonna do it I would have built it up over a period of time and had it be something major. So really if you wanna make this and your other diaries better...put some effort in. Write your own shows and develop your storylines better and add more detail. Once you do that I might be able to give you some positive feedback. Also...MOD mode...don't make so many posts asking for feedback and posts that are for something that could have easily been added into one of your PWInsider posts. I Copy & Paste From EWR and Edit Them
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MB35
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 31, 2001 23:41:56 GMT -5
Posts: 4,093
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Post by MB35 on Apr 7, 2006 2:01:59 GMT -5
Write them...yourself. Don't copy and paste even if theres abit of editing its hard to notice and it doesn't help the development of storylines and shows a lack of effort. I'm not trying to be a jerk...its just what I think and what most diary writers think.
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Post by Kemp2k on Apr 7, 2006 2:40:29 GMT -5
I have to agree with MB here,
just read his reports, even my style of writing..
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Post by Kemp2k on Apr 7, 2006 2:43:18 GMT -5
You know if you were at EWB, you'll be ripped apart..
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Post by waylon on Apr 7, 2006 17:10:11 GMT -5
You know if you were at EWB, you'll be ripped apart.. Yep. If you think people are criticizing you here, just post this over there. EWB can be really harsh sometimes, but a lot of the time, its true and needed.
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Post by jhr6 on Apr 8, 2006 17:52:14 GMT -5
SNME Will Be Up Soon
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Post by jhr6 on Apr 8, 2006 17:54:53 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]SATURDAY NIGHTS MAIN EVENT[/glow]
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Post by jhr6 on Apr 9, 2006 6:53:59 GMT -5
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Post by waylon on Apr 9, 2006 13:56:36 GMT -5
God this is horrible. between your terrible spelling and puctuation, and your complete lack of booking anything that makes sense, this has to be one of the worst diaries I have ever read.
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Post by jhr6 on Apr 9, 2006 23:31:13 GMT -5
Raw Will be Up On Tuesday
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Post by Kemp2k on Apr 9, 2006 23:38:44 GMT -5
I can't believe he isn't giving up.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Apr 10, 2006 14:26:24 GMT -5
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Post by westington on Apr 10, 2006 15:23:58 GMT -5
Not only is he not giving up, he's not taking ANY advice from ANYONE. Dude, seriously stop with this diary, it hurts to read.
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Post by jhr6 on Apr 11, 2006 1:22:43 GMT -5
i am delaying this for a week
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Post by waylon on Apr 11, 2006 2:37:23 GMT -5
i am delaying this for a week Who didnt know that.
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Post by Kemp2k on Apr 11, 2006 2:37:35 GMT -5
No Surprise eh?
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