atm.
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Post by atm. on Oct 21, 2008 12:28:50 GMT -5
Well here it is, finally. I've had so much stuff going on I really never got around to posting it, until now. So let's get some back round shall we? In the last few weeks, a feud has been brewing between "The Prince of Punk" Shannon Moore and "The 10th Wonder of the World" Charlie Haas. During Shannon's promo, Charlie butted in causing Shannon to snap, pounding down on Charlie. But then Charlie got the upper hand, nearly breaking a few of Shannon's ribs, causing Chris Masters to break it up. Who will win the main event? Not to mention, now in NBW we have a tournament going on and whoever wins will be crowned first NBW Champion. Many of our superstars include indy guys, so I hope all of you enjoy, and please remember to leave feedback, also excuse arena and costume changes as I want votes on what looks better. Thanks!
Also I will get to all of your feds, if you remind me. Shoot me and PM, and as soon as I have time all of you will receive comments. Thanks!
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Oct 21, 2008 13:45:12 GMT -5
Yes, first to reply Well Well Well its about time you posted up your second show and boy did it not disappoint The Austin Aries custom is ace I hate Spirit Squad Kenny OOHH this is a real good opener Kenny does'nt get the win with the leg drop, how else is he gonna win this thing Aries with a Brainbuster for the win, ace match, Ive see you've been studying Aries moveset abit nice Delirious vs Punk was also good. Im kinda jealous that you have all these customs in your fed  . I love IT This to me was def match of the night. Punk tried everything to win this thing but he just could'nt. Good Heel tactics by Punk Now here is Josh Abercrombie wow another Indie guy. At first I hated Abercrombie because he just looks goofy but after seeing that vid I might have to warm up to him I guess. Quick squash match, Man your poses are pretty much great, although I wish the pics were just a little bit bigger. Is that Brian Danielson I see. I hope The Main Event was good, except for the fact that I kinda dont like Haas or Moore although it was good to see The Brian Kendrick their. Good show 9/10 Lets hope you can keep it up!!! |
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Oct 21, 2008 16:06:19 GMT -5
Yes, first to reply Well Well Well its about time you posted up your second show and boy did it not disappoint The Austin Aries custom is ace I hate Spirit Squad Kenny OOHH this is a real good opener Kenny does'nt get the win with the leg drop, how else is he gonna win this thing Aries with a Brainbuster for the win, ace match, Ive see you've been studying Aries moveset abit nice Delirious vs Punk was also good. Im kinda jealous that you have all these customs in your fed . I love IT This to me was def match of the night. Punk tried everything to win this thing but he just could'nt. Good Heel tactics by Punk Now here is Josh Abercrombie wow another Indie guy. At first I hated Abercrombie because he just looks goofy but after seeing that vid I might have to warm up to him I guess. Quick squash match, Man your poses are pretty much great, although I wish the pics were just a little bit bigger. Is that Brian Danielson I see. I hope The Main Event was good, except for the fact that I kinda dont like Haas or Moore although it was good to see The Brian Kendrick their. Good show 9/10 Lets hope you can keep it up!!! Thanks ease, I try to do my best on this stuff lol. I love your show, and can't wait until no strings attached. Not to mention, Im in If you ever wanna do a joint ppv or somethin, just hit me up |
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Post by unionjack on Oct 22, 2008 6:00:11 GMT -5
righto cool tournament. like the sponsor idea kenny/aries great poses love the pose on when aries powerbombed kenny on the steel steps i really like your commentery it's more like there are talking to eachother enstead of them saying the moves and stuff. also ace austin aries fig i really wish i had that talent making them. homicide/mabel LOL censored words cool team are you gonna add hernendez delerious/cm punk cool efects how did you make them ace custom great poses love the poses when delerious jumped on punk.yayyy deelerious won but noooooo boooooo bad punkey hit him with a table dammit . ;D new guy i really don't know who he is but nonetheless sounds a good wrestler. ambercrombie/kidman cool match glad kidman got his ass kicked all over the place . colt cabana promo ohh no super dragon poor colt hass/moore cool poses i think charlie looks better in the blue attire i really like how charlie can just throw him a round great pose when hass reversed the flying kick by moore hass got the pin but no moore kicked out and moore ready for another slam but no moore counterer and roll up 12 3 he wins . tbk is here ace pose on the kendrick really liked it hope he wins . cool dinalson coming to new breed wrestling . overall this show was more better than the last one . 10/10  |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Oct 22, 2008 21:10:25 GMT -5
ok man this show was pretty good. there are a few things that bother me about it though. and i think you know what i am going to say. what was up with the arena change? and what the hell was up with the attire change? you probably should have done that whole attire thing before the show started or something idk. that was the only thing though. everything else was pretty solid. i really enjoyed watching this show and i think you are getting better and better.
if you ever need help with anything let me know. sorry for the short reply i will try and edit later if you want me to.
but overall everything was pretty good. nice job =) OK im going to keep going on what i thought was good. i thought the pics were pretty good, but eh... im not sure about the arena. i just dont like it that much. just keep changing it around and see what works for you. oh and charlie's 2nd attire looked better to me And please dont do anything like that again... please. ok i thought the story lines are beginning to unfold very nicely. keep doing what you are doing and just try to improve. good luck |
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Oct 22, 2008 21:38:28 GMT -5
Good show guy. IMO starting here, your fed is starting to really identify itself. Other than the obvious arena/attire changes, everything flowed pretty well. BTW the arena looked so much better the second half of the show with the black canvas. I was really suprised by your ring choice, but you did very well of making it work with good poses and smart camera angles, big points for that. Commentary was alright, only thing was some places between the pics/ poses and commentary, there were parts missing? Like didnt help explain what was going on. Hope that makes sence. Good job though, cant wait to see your next show. Thanks for posting.
Oh my only major complaint is that each link opens a new window. Dont know if you can do anything about it, but just to put it out there. ;D
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Oct 28, 2008 20:27:24 GMT -5
Thanks guys! Any other replys?
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Post by deskjet on Oct 31, 2008 15:45:15 GMT -5
Not a huge fan of indy feds but this was really well done. Customs are pretty good, especially Aries. Punk/ delirious was really good match. Solid show all the way through with backstage segments. The commentators are pretty good as well. Interested ti see whe THE BK goes...put him on as world champ! Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Nov 9, 2008 19:29:06 GMT -5
What You Liked- Good Commentating
What you didnt like- When i clicked on part 2 and so on a new window popped up.
Favorite Match- Delirious vs. CM Punk
Favorite Sgment- Homicide and Mabel Promo
Favorite part of the show- Tyger introducing himself to Shane
Rating - 6/10
Also, I loved the arena change it looks better with the canvas black and also Charlie Haas's 2nd attire is better
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The Warsman
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Post by The Warsman on Nov 10, 2008 0:26:14 GMT -5
LOL, Batista head referee That ring looks tiny! Cool Aries custom... Yikes! N*** gets used a lot by Homicide and... Mabel?!? Cool Delirious intro... Solid match between Punk and Delirious LOL, another Abercrombie custom Wow, he squashed poor lil Billy... Man, Shannon Moore is one ugly freaky little guy... Great match with Moore and Haas Whoa! Haas changes outfits more than Diana Ross at the Grammys!  Batista sucks as a ref, LOL Thanks for the show! Wars |
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Post by redsword1 on Nov 15, 2008 4:42:57 GMT -5
really good show 9/10
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Post by spawnsyxx9 on Dec 14, 2008 16:18:17 GMT -5
Pretty good stuff man. Prolly will put up more thoughts later but what was with the 817 ref?
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Dec 14, 2008 16:20:34 GMT -5
Pretty good stuff man. Prolly will put up more thoughts later but what was with the 817 ref? Idk, I thought i was a Homicide area code. Please put up the rest of your thoughts tho. Please anymore replys, thankyou. |
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