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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 7, 2006 14:50:48 GMT -5
Red embers erupt from the ground...the once bright San Diego sun has now reared a milky white moon and stars into the black abyss, which is know to us in the daytime, as the windows of heaven....The strong rays of the sun left behind, hot sand in it trail and now, it cools from the lowered temperatures that the night has brought to the beach...below the lunar sphere, the fiery red sizzles among rocks and logs on the sandy plain...the wind blows smoothly leaving a cool breeze to decrease the heat...the ocean slaps itself against the huge boulders among the shoreline and both the west and east boardwalks, leaving a fishy smell into the air....The white seagulls flying around and perching themselves occasionally on either the far ends of the boardwalks or on the sand right by a Miguel Sanchez who sits by the fire with his knees up and his arms around them...even his skin looks crimson by how close he is to the flames.....He sits telling himself a story around the only source of light (besides the moon).....almost looking like a "nut" of some sort, he sits speaking to himself about a new adversary that stands in his way... Miguel: It’s sad that WFWF management continues to put me in low profile matches…..Lets see….. I’m on a 3 and 0 wining streak with 1 loss….They still continue to put me against jobbers….Joe Kessen got taken out…Insane skirt bitch got served and I pinned the current National Champ!....Now I have to face another “Loved Fan Favorite”….When will they all just freakin realize that I am and forever will be the top young gun this damn business has to offer…..Now, Johnny Apple seed thinks that he has what it takes to face “THE LATINO PRODIGY”!...I am continuously getting screwed out of high profile matches and the main event spots which I so truly belong in…..Johnny Red, I’m sorry pal, but your just going to be another weak ass wall I’m going to bust through…Your not even in the same ball game as me, hell, your not even in the same damn dictionary as me, so if by some magical way you can hear my voice, here’s some little “new comer advice yours truly is gonna give to ya…… Unpack your bags and stay home…It’s that simple….If you value your life you will know not to step into the ring with me… Listen…. Your young, and your talented, so if you want your career to even come close to how big mine is going to be, take my advice because the way I see it is…”YOU HAVE NO CHANCE ON GOD’S GREEN EARTH TO EVEN LAST 2 DAMN MINUTES WITH ME”!.... The wood crackles and pops like popcorn on the stove...Miguel still sits on the sand gazing at the flames, until somthing popped up out of the fire and hits Miguel in the face Miguel: OWW MY FORHEAD!...FOR  'S SAKE!! AHH..Miguel falls on his back onto the warm sand while clamping his hands onto his forheard...Sand flies everywere while Miguel kicks his feet about....Miguel: !!!________________________________________________________________________________________ fin |
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Post by mpa821 on Mar 7, 2006 15:13:19 GMT -5
man, even flies hate Miguel......
Good Rp though! Its going to be hard to defeat at our fatal four way!
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 7, 2006 15:54:26 GMT -5
man, even flies hate Miguel...... Good Rp though! Its going to be hard to defeat at our fatal four way! this isnt for teh 4 way...this was for my singlez match againstt johnny red but eh...thanks for teh reply |
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Post by mpa821 on Mar 7, 2006 16:04:08 GMT -5
man, even flies hate Miguel...... Good Rp though! Its going to be hard to defeat at our fatal four way! this isnt for teh 4 way...this was for my singlez match againstt johnny red but eh...thanks for teh reply Yeah i know that! I was just saying that it will be a challenge to beat you at the Fatal Fourway. I know that this is for Red's match. BTW could you please take a look at mine? |
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Post by Kyzer on Mar 7, 2006 16:13:28 GMT -5
Was there a word limit on this?
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Post by duan on Mar 7, 2006 16:23:45 GMT -5
Nice RP Bro. Should be a good match.
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Post by immune360 on Mar 7, 2006 16:31:55 GMT -5
Was there a word limit on this? I hope so...  sorry miguel I liked it, just seemed toooooo short... Immune |
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 7, 2006 17:07:07 GMT -5
I just aint feel like typing so much because I hurt my wrist yesterday
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Post by Kyzer on Mar 7, 2006 17:20:38 GMT -5
Then don't put out something. It is all about quality, which this lacked. It could have been something good but you left too much out for this to be good in the slightest sense.
This is why you are a newbie.
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 7, 2006 17:53:44 GMT -5
atleast i didnt no show
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Post by mpa821 on Mar 7, 2006 17:59:57 GMT -5
Then don't put out something. It is all about quality, which this lacked. It could have been something good but you left too much out for this to be good in the slightest sense. This is why you are a newbie. Well I think you are being a littloe to harsh the guy! I mean this is just a House Show and Miguel's RP wan't that bad. He has also come a very long way. He want from producing small 3 lined Rps to stuff like this. So I wouldn't go to hard on him, but that is just my oppinion  |
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Post by Kyzer on Mar 7, 2006 18:11:20 GMT -5
Then don't put out something. It is all about quality, which this lacked. It could have been something good but you left too much out for this to be good in the slightest sense. This is why you are a newbie. Well I think you are being a littloe to harsh the guy! I mean this is just a House Show and Miguel's RP wan't that bad. He has also come a very long way. He want from producing small 3 lined Rps to stuff like this. So I wouldn't go to hard on him, but that is just my oppinion He wants to be not considered a newbie, then he needs to act like one who isn't. This rp is not good. His rps for the ppv were better, this was a step down. You are new also. You weren't here when he showed up the first time. I saw what he put out then. Granted it is better, but not much. I don't see the point of putting up an rp if you are not going to put effort into it, period. It is a waste of time for people to click the link and read it. You will never see me put out a half ass rp like this, you will never see TZ do it, you will see ZM do it, you won't Drakz it and you won't see Flaps do it. You want to get anywhere in any e-fed, show some effort and strive to improve. Don't settle for just showing up. |
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Post by flaps2 on Mar 7, 2006 18:30:01 GMT -5
Then don't put out something. It is all about quality, which this lacked. It could have been something good but you left too much out for this to be good in the slightest sense. This is why you are a newbie. Well I think you are being a littloe to harsh the guy! I mean this is just a House Show and Miguel's RP wan't that bad. He has also come a very long way. He want from producing small 3 lined Rps to stuff like this. So I wouldn't go to hard on him, but that is just my oppinion So your the second character of who? It was back in around June when Miguel did the three liners so a new comer knowing that.......seems like a case for Scooby and the gang. |
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Post by Kyzer on Mar 7, 2006 18:30:47 GMT -5
Well I think you are being a littloe to harsh the guy! I mean this is just a House Show and Miguel's RP wan't that bad. He has also come a very long way. He want from producing small 3 lined Rps to stuff like this. So I wouldn't go to hard on him, but that is just my oppinion So your the second character of who? It was back in around June when Miguel did the three liners so a new comer knowing that.......seems like a case for Scooby and the gang. With the way he spams and acts like a intellectually- disabled kid, I would say Miguel. |
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 7, 2006 19:23:21 GMT -5
whoa whoa..calm down calm down...if kyzer feels that way than whatever...let him say what he wants
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Post by Kyzer on Mar 7, 2006 19:38:44 GMT -5
whoa whoa..calm down calm down...if kyzer feels that way than whatever...let him say what he wants Anything I say is based completely off the way you act and the way he acts. You both act like morons. |
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 7, 2006 20:05:57 GMT -5
well kyzer i ed up my wrist yesterday and the way i see it is, is that I can rp or not rp at all, so if you dont like it whatever....everybody has an oppinion |
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Post by mpa821 on Mar 7, 2006 20:56:32 GMT -5
Well I think you are being a littloe to harsh the guy! I mean this is just a House Show and Miguel's RP wan't that bad. He has also come a very long way. He want from producing small 3 lined Rps to stuff like this. So I wouldn't go to hard on him, but that is just my oppinion So your the second character of who? It was back in around June when Miguel did the three liners so a new comer knowing that.......seems like a case for Scooby and the gang. I'm not a second character I just have been looking back at Miguel's past RPs since I am scheduled to have a fatal fourway with him and I just started clicking on random threads and reda some previous Code Reds. it only took a good half an hour to look at Miguel's previous work. Besides you meddling kids will never catch me MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!  *calls the red bearen for evil plotting* |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 9, 2006 6:44:02 GMT -5
So your the second character of who? It was back in around June when Miguel did the three liners so a new comer knowing that.......seems like a case for Scooby and the gang. I'm not a second character I just have been looking back at Miguel's past RPs since I am scheduled to have a fatal fourway with him and I just started clicking on random threads and reda some previous Code Reds. it only took a good half an hour to look at Miguel's previous work. Besides you meddling kids will never catch me MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *calls the red bearen for evil plotting* I REALLY don't mean to sounds rude, obnoxious, or like a jackass, but... You and Miguel really piss me off... You guys are just so annoying, and Kyzer's right, you guys act like newbies... Actually... No, you ACT like your not "newbish", but it comes out even "newbish" then ever! And you guys have no right to go around telling people about RPing ability/quality of an RP, ESPECIALLY, one Michael Kyzer. He is of the greatest on here. And Miguel.... You had the nerve to tell Immune that his RP lacked detail.... Just take a look at all of yours I mean, i shouldn't be saying any of this stuff, cuz i'm just a measly National Title contender...So i'm staying in line (sept this post, but it has to be said) My dearest apologies...  EDIT: Oh, and also, don't make excuses... Even if it IS true, it makes you sound like ur lying... My apologies...Again... |
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 9, 2006 16:52:06 GMT -5
the bashing me around here as been normal but just keep it to a minimum....btw jaysin, i was implying that immune's rp had good detail but not like kyzer status detail...it was a very enjoyable rp to say the least.....and oh yeah I dont appriciate everybody coming on here and putting me under fire..das' not cool...i have been trying to keep my cool and ignore the bashing but still, if I piss anybody off for whatever reason, why get mad at somebody you havnt even seen in your life?
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