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Post by Almost Like Flacco on Mar 15, 2006 19:25:21 GMT -5
Screen fades in from black and pans up the side of a building. It reaches the top, and there we see a man dressed in all black with black sunglasses. He looks up and begins to speak.
Tonight, history will be made. Tonight marks the beginning of a new era in the world of professional wrestling. Tonight, Christian Shields makes his debut. I have been waiting for this moment for years and I'm sure you all have as well. The greatest wrestler in the history of this business is about to make his mark.
Gets a sly smirk on his face
My first opponent goes by the name of GaZ, not sure if any of you have heard of him. I guarantee you, he has never.....NEVER faced an opponent as good as me! My greatness knows no bounds.
Looks over the top of his sunglasses and over the edge of the roof.
Long fall isn't it? One would surely die upon impact. This reminds me of the fall that GaZ is going to take off his perch when he becomes just another formality on my rise to the top.
Turns around and walks away as screen fades to black.
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Post by Arsenal on Mar 20, 2006 16:53:06 GMT -5
ok.. im no pro at this but ill give u the advice i got when i was new
decent rp but
u needa describe the setting more needa make it longer try not to use the word fade
and my WFWF name is GaZ not Arsenal, you should change that also mate.
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Post by Bartman on Mar 20, 2006 17:19:45 GMT -5
ok.. im no pro at this but ill give u the advice i got when i was new decent rp but u needa describe the setting more needa make it longer try not to use the word fade and my WFWF name is GaZ not Arsenal, you should change that also mate. I personally end my RP with "the scene fades away" so I don't see how that's a problem.
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Post by tobeornottobe on Mar 20, 2006 17:25:40 GMT -5
ok.. im no pro at this but ill give u the advice i got when i was new decent rp but u needa describe the setting more needa make it longer try not to use the word fade and my WFWF name is GaZ not Arsenal, you should change that also mate. I personally end my RP with "the scene fades away" so I don't see how that's a problem. same here, but some people find it..too sketchy...i dont know why, but they just do..
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Post by Arsenal on Mar 24, 2006 6:54:41 GMT -5
i said the advice I was given. not the advice i give.. lol
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