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Post by redsword1 on Nov 25, 2008 18:54:53 GMT -5
I'm Bloodbath, And I'm Coming soon To WFWF And I'm Bring The Pain.I Will Destroy Opponents and Leave Them Beaten And Battered In The Ring. Don't Expect Me To Be Nice Or Friendly, I Am The Meanest Wrestler On Planet Earth And I'm Not Coming Alone either I'm bringing some of my favorite hardcore weapons such as the bardwire bat, the trash can, the chairs, even some light tubes. Im Bringing The Attitude To The WFWF so You Better be ready for a BLOODBATH.
tell me how i did i think i did ok i guess
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Post by redsword1 on Nov 25, 2008 19:39:48 GMT -5
so tell me what you think
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Thunder
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Post by Thunder on Nov 25, 2008 19:47:12 GMT -5
Like I already told you, I suggest reading around to get some examples. Right here all you've got is a promo that's a paragraph long that doesn't tell much about your character. We need some background, information, and all that. You also need a setting and description and really, a lot more than what you have here in the case of dialogue. You need to get started with introducing yourself to what some of the basic elements of RPing are, which reading some should hopefully do. Check out this thread too: wfigs.proboards48.com/index.cgi?board=houseshows&action=display&thread=102736 |
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