Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Dec 5, 2008 6:09:02 GMT -5
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Villa
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Post by Villa on Dec 5, 2008 7:36:27 GMT -5
Ok. I'm liking the arena. Your matches are far too short. Kendrick was trying to hit his finisher in the first few pictures of the match  . JR kept saying "He nails it" or "____ can't belive it" which got a it annoying. You could improve on your poses aswell. I was hoping for more than 2 matches  A decent show. Not the best you could produce, but not terrible. 6/10 |
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Dec 5, 2008 11:46:30 GMT -5
Ok. I'm liking the arena. Your matches are far too short. Kendrick was trying to hit his finisher in the first few pictures of the match . JR kept saying "He nails it" or "____ can't belive it" which got a it annoying. You could improve on your poses aswell. I was hoping for more than 2 matches A decent show. Not the best you could produce, but not terrible. 6/10 Kendrick was trying to hit his finisher quick because Morrison has the title match at figamania :-\. I know the commentary is bad it is something I need to work on. As are the poses. Don't worry I have a show with more than 2 matches coming soon  |
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Post by takerfandan on Dec 5, 2008 14:35:15 GMT -5
okay. let's see. you got this up quick, hope it's not rushed. right, straight into the first match, mehh. would of been nice to see a segment saying how good it is to be back etc. im not a fan of the high flying objects or that awful kendrick figure. ;[ poses were not that good really & your camera angles are really weird aswel. the segment with regal was okay i guess. pretty bland though. then the attack was a good hype promo. awesome sting custom, jpilko by any chance? well this match was much better than the first but still wasn't anything to be wowed about. the ended was super shit, a backdrop for the finish. i mean srsly? it was good that you got a show up & i can tell that you tried. tips for next time is make your commentry more exciting. camera angles need to be improved. try doing shots from the canvas looking through the ropes more. also, maybe a better format. i felt really lost with just going straight on to the next thing. maybe put something like; ----------------------------------to show that it's a next segment. but yeah ill give you a 6/10 for trying and getting a show up. fast.  |
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Post by tnafan4life on Dec 5, 2008 15:21:40 GMT -5
The main thing I saw is that your poses need to be better. Now, mine in no way shape or form are better but you do say a shoulder block and the next minute he's up on their shoulders (just an example). You need to saw how that happended (ala pulling him up by his hair, the other guy getting up and charging, etc). Plus, your show needs to be more oranized. When you finish a match skip down to the next reply and do the next segm. there and so on. Your commentary needs work. Just fix those minor things (nothing major.. just minor  ) and you'll be set imo. |
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tirva
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Post by tirva on Dec 5, 2008 15:45:07 GMT -5
- False tag was good but why was Kendrick down for so long after only getting hit with a clothesline. That match was way too short and the poses could use some work.
- RG's promo should have been much longer than two sentences. You didn't tell us who it's better and what type of match, etc.
- Backstage segment was alright.
- If Michaels hits the Sweet Chin Music, his foot should be on Sting's face. RG could say more than one sentence. Ending was alright but why would Sting turn his back on his opponent, that doesn't make sense when he almost beat him with the deathlock. I did love that HBK did his backdrop, so awesome!
The good: Choice of figures and the arena.
The bad: Some poses, short promos, short matches.
Overall, it wasn't that bad, i'm just being picky, it can only make you better. Hope your Figamania match is good dude! Take your time with things...Hope you don't take my comments the wrong way.
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Dec 5, 2008 16:32:04 GMT -5
Reece:Yeah I didn't think of that idea :\ The Kendrick is temporary until I find a fig with black trunks and a cw torso :-\ I am gonna work on poses and angles It's not Regal lol. Its the owner  The Sting Custom was done by the magnificent Pilkster as were the Neidhart/Jack/Raven & Bulldog customs which shall feature at a later date. The backdrop was HBK old finisher I am working on the commentary and I hope to get help with it from some people. I will be asking around soon Will work on angles I am thinking of putting each segment as a reply. SG:Poses are being worked on I will explain the match more in future. Tirva:Kendrick was down for so long so Morrison could distract the ref. Promo was short I will admit that. HBK couldn't connect with Sting's face he was too small  I'm Glad you liked the arena Don't expect miracles from the Figamania match it was filmed before this but on the whole I am much happier with Mania's match than I am with this. I know you are just being constructive and that is what I like to have. I would rather you helped me build than didn't reply.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 5, 2008 16:44:58 GMT -5
reply coming soon man. i will try my best to reply to this tonight. if not tonight than definitely tomorrow. you have my word =)
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Post by unionjack on Dec 5, 2008 19:17:13 GMT -5
righty my time to reply rey and hardy vtbk and morrison the poses are not bad hell there better than mine i actually like the brian kendrick fig like the the team of mysterio and hardy again looking farward to figimania especially your match no hardy's atacked dam morrison and tbk ;D woops forgot about hart foundation customs look great from were i can see hbk v stingey for the big gold belt clever idea i really like the big gold division idea love that sting custom very good match alot of good poses here i like the bit when they had to have the rematch i smell a fued here i like how it ended . very great show also alot of efort in this well done abd i can't wait to see more of apw  tom, |
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Post by Red Dragon on Dec 6, 2008 7:23:28 GMT -5
Cool Show, great Kendrick custom and nice pose at the enterance, a good opener, basic comentary but good storytelling, would rather more than just one pic of the Hart Foundation the figures and the lighting look awsome too bad for the backdrop try putting black card behind the figures during promos, Ginger regal lol, random Hardy attack with no explination, cool sting custom and awsome HBK its a great match, sad there's only 2 matches but I understand, the final shot is soo cool HBK look great with the belt. Keep this up I enjoyed this.
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Post by deskjet on Dec 6, 2008 15:34:38 GMT -5
Opening match was really really good. Lots of action and some good poses. Little more depth in the commentary. sweet sting custom..Michaels vs Sting...very nice to see this. really good match here. All in all a very good comeback. Work on your backgrounds . Get some cardboard or printouts to make it look more professional. prehaps a bit more hype for Figamania . Other than that a very good retrun |
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Post by downsyndrome on Dec 6, 2008 16:42:48 GMT -5
Iam going to give a honest review here. Not a fan of the Kendrick custom TBH Along with the teaming of Rey and Matt Some of the poses are stiff as hell and this show looked a tad rushed, more indepth commentarty would be nice and the random Hardy attack didnt make sense. Back stage segments help. You impressed me last time, this time. I am a little disapointed. Sting and HBK Ending with a back drop.. Really?! That Super kick pose was awful as well. You did try I can see that, it just seems like you rushed for Figamanina, which you should not have done TBH Look at older feds such as PWF to get an example of what you want... or new feds Such has Genext, TWA, or colts fed..even though we cut him slack because he has a nice set up Just dont look at Alexs fed, as the best thing about it is the Kurt Angle fix up |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 6, 2008 17:15:08 GMT -5
OK man here is what i thought of the show. much like Johnny Franchise, I am going to be honest... I reall could not get into this show. The pictures were not that great and the angles were not very good at all either. i think your roster is great, but you just need to work on the quality of your show. the show seemed really rushed. you just need to take your time. its not about releasing a show fast... its about making a good show. i think you have a good camera, but you just dont know how to use it. i hope your next show is better. i hope i dont sound too harsh, im just trying to let you know some things that need work. take care man
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Dec 6, 2008 17:55:56 GMT -5
Tomoblivion:
Glad you liked the show. Glad you liked the team of Rey & Matt as do I. TBK is just temporary as I have stated before. Filming my Figamania match just now ;D Hart Foundation will have a match on Action Zone 1 Glad you liked the main event. It was fun to film and is a match I would love to see. Thanks for the reply
Redrag:I filmed the promos in my kitchen The random Hardy attack will be explained I love the Sting custom and the HBK is one of my favourite figures The final shot is probably my favourite of the show. Because it was the last lol. Thanks for the reply DJGlad you liked the show, one of the few who did. I am working on commentary and poses New background after Xmas but money is tight just now. Thanks for the reply
JdashOnce again TBK is only temporary I have already explained most of this stuff to you on AIM I plan on staying up all night watching some stuff to get my poses and angles better Thanks for the reply again wwefanWorking on pics and angles. I also understand now about releasing a show that is high quality. I am trying to adjust to the new camera as I had my old one for 3 years and they are so different I am having a hard time adjusting. Thanks for the honest reply. No Offence to anyone else but replies from you and DJ mean more to me than replies from anyone else. |
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