RIW Ep:1 War At Warzone

okey dokey my time to reply

nice little opening by perfect

is pac a real wrestler or customed anyway cool wrestler

lol woooooo

righto 6 way ladder match

i like the twisted shooting star press pose

whoa shelton gone flippy poor stevie

awesome spear pose crazy move

cool flip by pac im starting to get to like this wrestler

wow nasty spider german suplex that looks painful

everybody is on the ladders now

shelton and nunzio are off

so is stevie

and pac jups to the other ladder and wins wooo

noble didn't even have a chance lol


testey v noble

i hope test destroy's kidman

mean push by test the big bully lol

nasty closeline

HOLY S""T
wow poor kidman i think he is dead

wow he isn't dead he just flipped off on the stage he's got some balls lol

both men back in the ring

nice flying hurricana

now kidman getting ready for the moonsault

BUT NO test oved and kidman has felled face first to the ring

and ......... boot time SMACK

1 2 3 and testy wins im happy wooooo ;D


LOL at gay billy and rico and chavo

i actually like the rico fix up

lol young and hung

cool stable

righty tommy dreamer v rvd v billy gunn

i like that billy is wussing out and is just watching while rvd and dreamer are battling

cool back flip

loved the back flip / spear combination pose

RVD: You want some of this.....
Billy: STFU.....

i lold

like the flying closeline pose and when dreamer hit billy with a chair straight after

loved the body splash by billy poor billy got owned by the table that makes me lol

ANOTHER HOLY **** MOMENT

poor billy being thrown to the tables

cool vandaminator pose

fn hell epic tower of table's

rvd and dreamer on the ladder

lol at the boobs in the backround

HOLY ****

dreamer just gone throw all those tables




billy is the champ yay


cool backtage segment

poor um r guy got atacked is he a real person or just a custom guy i like the segments in your show lmb


main event time

christian cage v randy orton


cool lock up pose

woa arm drag by orton

cage with the irish whip

i liked the short and snappy elbow pose very nice

C: Cage with a Dirty Closeline on the outside.
RR: Yes more Dirty Action from Cage.
C: What did you just say?
RR: Dirty Action!

lolololololol ;D

oooow towel hit to orton's face

this **** just got personel

i like the chops and punches by christian to orton
go get him christian i wan't christian to win

super plex by cage BUT NO orton throws him off

flying rko good god that must hurt

1 2 no he breaks out

umpritter by cage wait where's he going

oh he's going to get a chair silly me

wtf helms just came in and did the Underhook pile driver on cage to a chair

bah gawd

also helms must of took steroids or somthing hahahaha

great show man loved it very ace can't wait for more

by by ;D

Ok. Just a general reply here. First off the matches were all pretty good. Lots of action in each. tHE 6 man action was pretty good. string poses were alright. Were those a set of boobs I saw in the background ..+1 for you if they were ;D. I see you're pushin a hardcore division? hmmm, we'll see where it goes. Chavo, kip, rico all need a cool group name. Wasnt too keen on orton and Cage. and i'd get a new Orton head if you can. Oh and who is pac? I thought you did a good overall job with the matches and segments but for a return there wasnt much in the way of getting fans cot up on the history of RIW. Maybe do a flashback show or something to get people more familiar with RIW. The arena isnt too bad of a set up(keep the boobs ;D) and commentary could use some work. Good stuff for your comeback with some room to improve. Keep it up

Right, as promised heres a reply. Firstly, pretty cool aren, looks nice and clean, and quite simple. Pac, i see you giving him a big push. Ladder match should be cool? Its already, k? Would of rather it been later on or something. Some cool spots. Urgh blood effects though. It was an alright match, some of the poses were good, although some were poor, also your editing was pretty bad. Would of been better if the next match was over the next page, and it was a pretty poor introduction as they just appeared. Test used the ropes after a big boot? Seems odd, its usually used when the heel has rolled them up or something, no when there basically out cold. Ha, cool backstage segment there. Another arena? Meh, pretty unprofessional half way through the show. That powerbomb pose was really nice. Cool match, some of the poses were a bit iffy though, not sure on what i think of gunn as champ though. Right, main event time. Is this a title match, was never really established. It was a good match, but i hated the screwy ending to be honest.

OK, it was a good show and i see a lot of potential here, i think you could have one of the best feds on the board if you keep working. Firstly, improve your commentary. It was pretty poor, and the grammar was bad as well. Also, try and make some of the stringless poses a bit better, and your camera work, as some pictures (mainly the ones with string) were a tad blurry. I also like to see like some introduction to the match, with some cool arena shots, or some shots of the announcers first, and then let them introduce the match.

Anyway, i look forward to episode 2.