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Post by trøy on Feb 21, 2009 1:19:31 GMT -5
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Post by revolution on Feb 21, 2009 1:22:11 GMT -5
I shall edit.
Okay here's my thoughts. The Orton/Tornado match was pretty good, apart from Tornado getting kicked in the head twice, and getting up straight away. I like Orton winning in a heel way, so good job on that.
I loled when Orton said he needed a drink. Kennedy!
Helms and Burke was very good. Poses improved, and I liked the commentary during the match. I liked the match, and the ending was nice.
Punk/RVD was great, and Punk's a heel? Nice. Poses were good, and loved the ending. Good job on whole show. Keep it up.
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Post by deskjet on Feb 21, 2009 6:08:31 GMT -5
First off. great logo:) Ok, first match. spme poses were stiff and i wasnt feelin the real Randy orton with some of his comments. As the match progressed the poses got better. Helms/burke had improved poses. Match of the nite was by far punk vs RVD...lots of action from start to finsih, great back and forth with a variety of poses. I really got into that match!
Overall I'd say a good start. lots of ptential pose and storyline wise jst based off of how you booked tha last match. some minor suggestion... hide the rope ties behind the turnbuckle, better commentating with more fluidity. You need more backstage segments and better transition between matches. Other than that, yea, a good effort, just keep goin and makin some adjustments:)
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Feb 21, 2009 8:15:10 GMT -5
alright. i will edit this in like 30 minutes =)
EDIT
OK man. I have watched the show and here is what i thought. I am glad that you are back but it would have been better if u picked up where you left off with your old fed. I don't mean in terms of story lines, feuds, and rosters. I mean quality. When u left u had great picture quality, your poses were improving, and decent customs. Now I am not too fond of your roster because the customs are really bad. If u had some decent customs then my opinion would change, but right now it seems too... idk... childish. The arena setup was waaaaaay too casual as well, and what is wrong with your ring? It's dirty and old and the ropes are all weird. i think u need to go back to the drawing board. I know that seems harsh but i am being honest.
Now that I got all the stuff that I didn't like out of the way, I can go on to talk about the stuff that i really enjoyed. OK i like the match and show length. it wasn't too long and it wasn't too short, so i stayed interested the whole time and didn't get bored with useless segments. All of the segments were relevant to the show and acted as introductions to the next match, which was great. good job with that man. While I would have liked to see SOME string poses, i was still pleased with most of the posing. like a lot of people you still need to work on your "ground poses" I think the camera angle is also a turn off as well. But that didn't seem to take away from the matches. You have great creativity, some of the moves were really interesting in the Human Tornado v Orton match. Good job and keep on improving. take care =)
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Post by -LMB- on Feb 21, 2009 9:26:48 GMT -5
will edit this after watching the show.  First off Simple set up, easy to remember you should maybe clean up your ring  Orton Vs HTThis was a very good match liked the pace and some of the poses in there were good,Orton winning with a sneeky Rko was a Nice. Nice Kennedy Seg there . EB Vs G.HelmsNice Start Helms Taunting Burke and then Burke flipping over him not bad , Backdrop to the ringskirt is a nice pose reminds me something that Mallet did awhile back, Ooooo  What was that move from the top rope Very nice sort of like a double underhook from the turnbuckle  , Never Helms with a chair to Burke Helms being to cocky now, Role up 3 count Burke wins Great match. RVD Vs Van D... *Cough* i mean Cm punk What the hell RVD was attack form behind by Cm punk. I like how your giving Punk a hell gimmick works very well. RVD with the frogsplash looking good wait Punk GTS ICW! ICW! ICW! Punk wins great finish Overall i enjoyed the show more than i exspected, Even tho the poses didnt have any string in them   iam not sure if you were going for that type of effect but it was ok, Even if it is a Indy Fed id like to see some more Backstage segments there would have be nice to build something from backstage . Well done on your first Show 7/10 keep it up buddy |
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Post by trøy on Feb 21, 2009 13:41:40 GMT -5
First of all, thank you for all the great replys. I promise you that, I already have filmed the second show and the arena looks a bit different and my poses are a lot better. All of the replys make me want to keep pic-fedding. Gonna try and get another show up soon. It will take me from like 3:00-7:30 to actually finish the second show, but I will try and do it.
Deskjet, thank you for the great reply, I was focusing more on storylines than I guess poses.
wwefan617, also, thanks for the tips and everything, and I am getting rid of some of the bad customs and replacing them with Kennedy, Banks, etc. My ring was supposed to be dirty and oldish to go with the entire indy thing. I am hoping to get an RSR but I can't find one cheap enough. Even though your first part was 'harsh'. It was true, and I will improve with my next show and try to get more segments backstage. Thanks for the part about the show length. I was afraid it would be to short. But obviously not.
LMB, Thanks for the great reply, Thanks on all of the good comments and critism, also, the RVD vs. Van Dam...CM Punk thing made me laugh my ass off.
Thanks guys and I hope you will all reply to my next show. Wheither it be up tonight or tomorrow or sometime next week.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2009 15:46:27 GMT -5
Harley Race the owner, nice. And he's commentating too. Nice Orton entrance. Two insane kicks to the head in a row and everytime Tornado recovers immediately. o_Ô Human Tornado seems very athletic. Too bad he left the company.  Harley restarting the match?  Ah, forget about it. Definitely not a bad episode. I will tune in again. |
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Post by -LMB- on Feb 21, 2009 17:19:51 GMT -5
First of all, thank you for all the great replys. I promise you that, I already have filmed the second show and the arena looks a bit different and my poses are a lot better. All of the replys make me want to keep pic-fedding. Gonna try and get another show up soon. It will take me from like 3:00-7:30 to actually finish the second show, but I will try and do it.
Deskjet, thank you for the great reply, I was focusing more on storylines than I guess poses.
wwefan617, also, thanks for the tips and everything, and I am getting rid of some of the bad customs and replacing them with Kennedy, Banks, etc. My ring was supposed to be dirty and oldish to go with the entire indy thing. I am hoping to get an RSR but I can't find one cheap enough. Even though your first part was 'harsh'. It was true, and I will improve with my next show and try to get more segments backstage. Thanks for the part about the show length. I was afraid it would be to short. But obviously not.
LMB, Thanks for the great reply, Thanks on all of the good comments and critism, also, the RVD vs. Van Dam...CM Punk thing made me laugh my ass off.
Thanks guys and I hope you will all reply to my next show. Wheither it be up tonight or tomorrow or sometime next week. Ahaha yer was a good Giggle but props to you man great show. |
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Post by unionjack on Feb 23, 2009 18:42:39 GMT -5
okay my time to reply i like the arena not bad i keep thiking the commentator is ncro lol  the introduction was good orton v tornado i like the efects on orton's entrance right i like the match the poses need more working but im no expert lol i like the pose of orton rko'ing tornado while he jump off the top rope. i liked the orton promo good match coool mr. kennedy pic can't wait for his debut burke v helms i like the begining og burke flipping over helms i like the commentary i liked the samoan drop pose liked it when burke jumped to get helms but helms moved so he just falls to the floor lol booooooo helms with a chair dammit i liked this match  yay race restarted it burke with the roll up 1 2 3 he wins yesss great match i really hope burke is the champ rvd v cm punk cm punk from behind lol i like the pose of rvd being shoved to the steel fence awesome electric chair pose onto the stage lol rvd's rolling down the arena loved the diving lariat to rvd's head must of hurt lol really liked the springboard forearm. pose cm punk going for a ddt BUT NO rvd with throw punk out side rvd with the awesome crossbody pose both back in the ring rvd going for the dropkick but he crashes and burned poor van dam  lol  nice fisherman suplex pose cm with the cover BUT NO rvd with the Hiptoss CD: RVD is grabbing him by the hair, arent you gonna do something? HR: No, I think I will pass. CD: You bastard! lmao nice piledriver pose rvd going up rvd with the frogsplash no cm punk got him and GO TO SLEEP !!!!! cm with the pin 1 2 3 yayyyyyyyyyyyy he wins awesome match loved it all great show i enjoyed it my fave match was rvd v cm punk great match can't wait for your next show and the last of the first round matches. i liked the commentary chase daniels is awesome lol bye |
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Post by Deep Shadows on Feb 23, 2009 20:20:10 GMT -5
OK, so here we go... OK, I can already tell that the lighting is going to be an issue. I like that you're already showing originality with Chase Daniels. I'm not sure how I feel about Race as the owner, but could be good. I don't think that's been done before. I dislike that you have him coming down at the beginning of the first show to introduce the titles and matches...that's been done so many times. It's almost become a staple for new feds. Haha, the animation on the Orton entrance pic is good. Maybe next time you could resize the pic after you do that so that you don't have the Blingee logo. Haha @ Chase Daniels' comment to HR. But isn't that kind of dumb considering he's the boss? Nice HT custom...it's simple but gets the job done. I'm not a fan of the ring. You could've put a bit of work into it and fixed it up. Some nice poses in the Orton/Tornado match thus far. Oh, nice move by HT there!  The comments just keep coming from Daniels, lol. The moves just keep coming from Human Tornado! OOOHHHH!!! WHAT A SICK BOOT FROM ORTON! This pic says it all. ![]() i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt106/superdragon81/IMG_6320_450x338.jpg[/img]Man, I can't believe T wasn't knocked out by that! WOAH! Nice recover by Orton to pick up the victory. "FTdub, FTdub. For the win!" Hahaha. Haha, as big as he talks he can't deny that Human Tornado gave him a run for his money. Nice head switch with Burke. OOOHHH!! All that show-boating came back to bite Burke in the a$$! HOLY SH*T!!!! HELMS SHOULD BE OUT!! Awesome spot! Argh! The fluctuating of the light is bothering me. The few with Helms and Burke at the announce table were good...did you have the flash on? Oh, Helms you dummy...use an illegal object with the owner sitting right there at ringside! Pretty good match...I dislike Burke in real life so I don't like that he won, lol. Oh, Punk just hates RVD! OH, DAMN!!! Into that steel fencing and then an Electric Chair onto the stage... Oh, man...some nice poses in this match... Damn, RVD taking some sick bumps in this match...especially onto his head! OOOHHH PUNK COUNTERS THE FIVE-STAR...GO TO SLEEEEEEP!!! Oh, wow...that's it? Well, I have to say that I enjoyed what I've seen so far. I'll be tuning in next time. There's much room for improvement so study other feds on the boards and get tips. |
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Post by Cottage Cheese on Feb 24, 2009 21:19:13 GMT -5
I am gonna go ahead and give a reply (sorry about it being so short)
I don't really like your arena because of the carpet. Commentary seems to be good
All of your string poses(If you used string) ARe really close I hate that
Your poses look good but the image quality deosn't look to good
Some of the string poses would have looked good if it wasn't so close up, The ground poses do look good though
You also need some backstage segements
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