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Post by thetruthrtruth on Feb 21, 2009 21:37:29 GMT -5
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Feb 21, 2009 21:41:48 GMT -5
Thats a moonsault, not a shooting star. But overall, its pretty good, its a bit stiff and the reaction is way to over blown. But its pretty good. Keep working at it.
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Feb 21, 2009 23:31:29 GMT -5
Start moving your joints, coz that was a pretty bad reaction.
Really stiff and its not a ssp.
Bit too fast but its probably one of your best so well done
Work at it and ulll get better
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Post by underdark78 on Feb 22, 2009 2:53:16 GMT -5
You REALLY need to use more frame's if you actually want to get anywhere as an animator.
There are some other flaw's in this animation but you should try to make your animation's smooth before I mention them.
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