Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Feb 26, 2009 0:50:48 GMT -5
Your a ing fast improver . Your getting there but theres a few downers Pros: That jump was nice not the best but it was good Moon Sault is pretty good - ish ani Reaction is nice Cons: Rope bounce is un relistic bounce of to the moonsault wasnt the best Reds reaction sucked Ather than that its awesome
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Post by underdark78 on Feb 26, 2009 2:33:30 GMT -5
Pile driver through table: The move seemed a bit choppy throughout and could of used a few more frame's here and there, the table break was good but the bounce could of used some work, both stick's back's were really stiff - you really need to move joint's other then the bottom one.
3/10
Shooing star press: The jump wasn't that good and just looked bad in general - you should go find some tutorial's on how to do them better, the mid - air bit was the best part of this animation it had the right amount of frame's - but you should have a go at spacing it out - It should have big movement's at the start then at the peak (how high he is going to go) it should have smaller movement's - Then on the way down the movement's should gradually get bigger. So it would be like this:
|----------|-------|-----|---|-|---|-------|----------| | = Frame - = how much you move the stick.
The reaction and impact could of used a few more frame's.
5/10
Power bomb back cracker (?) During the springboard the hand's should of stayed on the same part of the rope/pole and it could of used a few more frame's, again the back joint's were not as bent as they should of been, the speed during the spin was bad - It should of been faster and the animation was kind of smooth throughout.
4/10
Combination - to be written later.
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Post by kayos on Feb 27, 2009 11:50:10 GMT -5
The Ode to the Bulldogs move, I find that the reaction from the blue stick happened before he hit, unless you meant him to try to start to block it. Otherwise it was good. (although the head bounce thing looks so weird, but if you insist, it is a real move.)
Piledriver from Scaffold: Love the mid-air switch, but at the end it got all choppy and slow. I think it's really good and I see great improvement from your beginnings.
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Feb 27, 2009 18:44:13 GMT -5
Thanks for the replys, they mean a lot.
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Feb 27, 2009 20:59:05 GMT -5
Pretty cool but its stiff in places I might make a ani later today
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Post by trøy on Feb 28, 2009 0:36:13 GMT -5
Just updated with botched shooting star press. I think this may be one of my best.
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Post by r44gz96 on Feb 28, 2009 1:28:01 GMT -5
ing hell man thats awesome a little choppy at points but absolutley awesome 10/10
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Post by Diet echo on Feb 28, 2009 4:28:11 GMT -5
the ssp itself is really good, however I'm not overly keen on the landing, cant put my finger on it but i dont like the way he bounces. Good animation
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Post by kayos on Feb 28, 2009 8:26:45 GMT -5
The initial dodge could've gone over better, and so should the landing, but I think the ssp itself is awesome. The animation is really smooth too.
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Post by xReyAlsanecx on Feb 28, 2009 9:17:20 GMT -5
Work on stiffness and reactions,cos your movements are good,not bad anis.
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Post by pjrr on Feb 28, 2009 11:04:13 GMT -5
You rock! 10/10! but I temporarily hate you, out of envy, and for the fact that your one of my Stickamania opponents :/
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Post by trøy on Mar 1, 2009 2:48:28 GMT -5
did a new ani for a tag team SFBL, tell me what ya think.
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Mar 1, 2009 2:58:01 GMT -5
pretty cool but not your best I dont like how they just stop then jump but the rest is pretty cool
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Post by Diet echo on Mar 1, 2009 4:00:56 GMT -5
On your newest one troy I felt that the running and jumping could be improved but the move itself was great. So just try and fix up the running abit, make it alittle less stiff.
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Post by pjrr on Mar 1, 2009 15:05:28 GMT -5
Pretty good animation like the reaction just a little bit of work on the running and you'll bbe great. when are we going to start our Pro+jobber tagteam match animation?
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Post by Epic Z on Mar 1, 2009 16:11:02 GMT -5
Can I have the link to that ring?
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Post by trøy on Mar 1, 2009 16:19:37 GMT -5
Pretty good animation like the reaction just a little bit of work on the running and you'll bbe great. when are we going to start our Pro+jobber tagteam match animation? I was gonna use that one but if you want me to make another I will. I don't give out rings man, sorry, not trying to be a dick, just like to keep it a 'troy type of thing.
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Post by trøy on Mar 1, 2009 21:02:50 GMT -5
updated with non-wrestling animation.
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Post by trøy on Mar 3, 2009 1:02:40 GMT -5
updated, may use for my ppv ani.
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Post by Epic Z on Mar 3, 2009 2:54:00 GMT -5
Wow that's great. Only problem is it's floaty when he's jumping off the ladder onto the other one. But the move was nice. Add a little more reaction IMO, but the bounce was good.
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