JedsWorld
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Post by JedsWorld on Feb 28, 2009 10:50:49 GMT -5
I'm Just playing around with string a little more and trying to get used to animating again, Still a little rusty but Im happy with how this turned out, It's a warm up for my Tag title match at the Animania PPV, Here Goes.....  EDIT: Here is the photobucket video version (faster) s471.photobucket.com/albums/rr79/JedsWorld_WF/?action=view¤t=PoetryinMotionBotch.flvLet me know what you think, Rate, Hate, Just reply I will make a PPV Warm up for my 'Break the Glass' match latter so keep a look out, Also I may update this thread with a better sized gif. But if this ones ok then I will keep it as it is. |
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Ross
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Post by Ross on Feb 28, 2009 10:57:59 GMT -5
it looks great the only thing is when jeff was in the air he looked slightly stiff u shouldnt make gifs because they slow it down
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Feb 28, 2009 11:22:01 GMT -5
it was stiff and slow. you have to work on your stiffness. especially on the jump to matts back matt didn't move at all.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2009 11:45:36 GMT -5
Its for some reason slow , but it looks to be a good animation
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Post by laddershardyboyz on Feb 28, 2009 12:14:34 GMT -5
If you sped it up that has the quality to be a great animation, but what i rather would've seen is a bigger reaction from Jeff, like him falling over the turnbuckle, then over the side of the Ring and onto the floor. But nevertheless that is a decent stop-motion.
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Jack.
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Post by Jack. on Feb 28, 2009 12:32:02 GMT -5
ive already done my break the glass lol
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JedsWorld
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Post by JedsWorld on Feb 28, 2009 13:49:07 GMT -5
it was stiff and slow. you have to work on your stiffness. especially on the jump to matts back matt didn't move at all. Thanks I guess, I expected a better detailed reply from you of all people seems you usually look for users to leave you full detailed replies, I know it was slow but it was fine when I played in on my computer - I think that when I uploaded it to photobucket it messed with the speed, Anyone know a better site I can upload it too that won't edit the speed of the animation ?? |
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Post by laddershardyboyz on Feb 28, 2009 13:51:08 GMT -5
it was stiff and slow. you have to work on your stiffness. especially on the jump to matts back matt didn't move at all. Thanks I guess, I expected a better detailed reply from you of all people seems you usually look for users to leave you full detailed replies, I know it was slow but it was fine when I played in on my computer - I think that when I uploaded it to photobucket it messed with the speed, Anyone know a better site I can upload it too that won't edit the speed of the animation ?? There are a few, i think ther is one called angelfire, correct me if i'm wrong |
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Ross
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Post by Ross on Feb 28, 2009 13:56:23 GMT -5
Thanks I guess, I expected a better detailed reply from you of all people seems you usually look for users to leave you full detailed replies, I know it was slow but it was fine when I played in on my computer - I think that when I uploaded it to photobucket it messed with the speed, Anyone know a better site I can upload it too that won't edit the speed of the animation ?? There are a few, i think ther is one called angelfire, correct me if i'm wrong angelfire or imageshack i think |
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Feb 28, 2009 14:19:12 GMT -5
it was stiff and slow. you have to work on your stiffness. especially on the jump to matts back matt didn't move at all. Thanks I guess, I expected a better detailed reply from you of all people seems you usually look for users to leave you full detailed replies, I know it was slow but it was fine when I played in on my computer - I think that when I uploaded it to photobucket it messed with the speed, Anyone know a better site I can upload it too that won't edit the speed of the animation ?? i'm tired so i might edit it later |
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Post by axelwarjp on Feb 28, 2009 16:43:48 GMT -5
Nice animation,
it was a bit slow as many of the other people are saying.
I liked the chair shot but Jeff was too stiff (walking and mid air).
Jeff should have had more of a reaction insted of just sitting there but I liked how Morrison kicked Matt at the end.
Overall: 6/10
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wwestevo07
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Post by wwestevo07 on Feb 28, 2009 17:14:42 GMT -5
jed that ani was a good warm up ani, its not one of your best, i liked the chair shot at the start, i like that u made the chair shot like he hits him with the chair to the side if u know what i mean and not just hold that chair above his head and hit him straight down on his head,and it was good to add this rather that start straight into the move, yeah the running wasnt the best but im still trying to get beter at running, and jeff did seem a little stiff on the jump, cud of made matt go down a bit when jeff jumped off his back, overall:7/10 hardly anybody gives marks anymore
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EMINЭMツ
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Post by EMINЭMツ on Feb 28, 2009 17:23:34 GMT -5
Not to bad here some things to improve on.
-When Jeff jumped on Matts back Matt should of been pushed down a but.
-It could just be me but the running looked a little weird.
- Jeff should have gotten more air and Morroson should have moved a little more.
-Like everyone said its pritty slow.
6/10 from me.
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911999wohwoh
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Post by 911999wohwoh on Feb 28, 2009 17:59:10 GMT -5
jeds its good but not one of your best, the reason being the figures were very stiff and it looked like jeff hardy was walking,also you could see most of the string and matt hardy didnt have much of a reaction when jeff jumped on him,so it didnt really work for me overall 5/10
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Post by Ryan on Mar 1, 2009 3:36:40 GMT -5
Wow,normally jed you have some great ani's.I found to slow like everyone else did and i found it stiff but i did like the chair shot at the start.Overall 6/10,wasnt your best work.  |
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JedsWorld
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Post by JedsWorld on Mar 1, 2009 9:37:36 GMT -5
[green]EDIT:[/green] Updated with the direct Photobucket video Link - Faster.
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Post by bencw on Mar 1, 2009 9:43:14 GMT -5
i think its realy good jed. nice idea. i watched the fast 'version' and it looks much better. i think the chair shot is great. but i think there could of been more reaction from matt/morrison generally. 7.5/10
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Mar 1, 2009 10:24:46 GMT -5
oh yea, put a pause at the end. seems like somebody didn't read their own guidelines
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Post by axelwarjp on Mar 1, 2009 12:43:59 GMT -5
I like the faster virsion better, still the stiff point as I mentioned in the earlyer reply.
7/10
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Post by Ross on Mar 1, 2009 12:46:01 GMT -5
the faster 1 is better now but as i said before its stiff
8/10
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