Ryan
Main Eventer
Joined on: Jan 28, 2009 7:25:10 GMT -5
Posts: 1,767
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Post by Ryan on Apr 7, 2009 10:57:39 GMT -5
150 frames and still as choppy as hell Well even though its not very good,her it is: when you comment on the ani (if you do) [glow=red,2,300]give me a mark out of 10 please!![/glow] thankyou -scooby239
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Post by alexgg on Apr 7, 2009 11:10:52 GMT -5
not your best i have to say. You need to work on the walking/runing as it seems he is sliding or shuffling along, the legs shouldnt land in the same place and should bend up more as well as the back curved forward slightly and the arms swaying back and fourth. They are also stiff as they dont move alot and stay with there arms in the same position or back straight, dont do this it dosnt matter how many frames you use it will improve much more by bending legs/arms and back joints. Reactions are bad and hardly there. It needs some sort of bounce when he hits the floor to show that its hard and it dosnt just stop there use different stick figures not deafult, deafult sticks are fine but using ones with more back joints will improve it alot. looking at the animation he does two kicks, i dont think that was planned, the first kick is what should of knocked him off like the second one did.both kicks . - 4/10
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Ryan
Main Eventer
Joined on: Jan 28, 2009 7:25:10 GMT -5
Posts: 1,767
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Post by Ryan on Apr 7, 2009 11:16:53 GMT -5
Thanks alex, and it was definatly not very good. ok,i will work on reactions and everything you have said and about the 2 kicks i made it some like somemone like undertaker,the first was a weak quick but the other knocked him out. and thanks for mark,it's appreciated.
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Post by Epic Z on Apr 8, 2009 16:18:40 GMT -5
You need to make the guy behind the ropes. You did it on "Shawn Micheals" but not on the guy who received the kick. No offense but this is not very good. Walking is bad it looks like he's running in place,I understand what you were going for with the double kick thing but he still should have had a reaction. Keep trying though! 4/10
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