Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Apr 14, 2009 23:50:46 GMT -5
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Post by alexgg on Apr 15, 2009 7:47:29 GMT -5
Your improving, the jump is well done but a bit fidgety but is spaced out well. the reaction needs improvement as its quite fidgety also.
good job and good luck
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Apr 15, 2009 17:11:22 GMT -5
Bump before this goes to page 2. Comments plz  |
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Post by Epic Z on Apr 15, 2009 17:24:13 GMT -5
Looks really good you've gotten much better. Just work on a reaction!
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Apr 15, 2009 20:51:46 GMT -5
Yeah, you are improving, a ton. I really like the momentum going into it and the impact is well done, even though the reactions could be better, you deserve a 5/10.
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Post by underdark78 on Apr 15, 2009 21:58:31 GMT -5
1st one: The whole animation was way too fast and it was really hard to tell what was going on, so try to space it out to make it look better and use alot more frame's to smoothen it out the reaction's were ok though.
2nd one: Go find some tutorial's on how to do jump's because it's way too fast, un-spaced, choppy, ect.
The moonsault it-self was ok though - but you need to bend the joint's more and fix up the arch, the reaction was decent but lacked impact.
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Apr 16, 2009 1:20:04 GMT -5
1st one: The whole animation was way too fast and it was really hard to tell what was going on, so try to space it out to make it look better and use alot more frame's to smoothen it out the reaction's were ok though. 2nd one: Go find some tutorial's on how to do jump's because it's way too fast, un-spaced, choppy, ect. The moonsault it-self was ok though - but you need to bend the joint's more and fix up the arch, the reaction was decent but lacked impact. 1st one: The fastness wasnt me. I had my speed to 14 but jake changed it so sorry for that.  2nd one: The jump was off a tutorial. So  , you find me a good one. Thanks for the comment on all the stuff that was bad  |
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Post by underdark78 on Apr 16, 2009 1:37:03 GMT -5
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Apr 16, 2009 2:27:56 GMT -5
Kay had a few of em. Didnt like them but theres like 2 i liked. Also jake already gave me that spacing tut on msn, |
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