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Post by Epic Z on Apr 18, 2009 14:19:03 GMT -5
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Apr 18, 2009 14:44:29 GMT -5
Alright, the first one, is just...random. Is he riding off on a capital n? Its also stiff and has little reaction. Also, why is his head a different colour than his body. Alright, the second one is scaring me. The kick is alright, but I cannot get over the fact that one of your sticks has horse's legs. And a different colored torso, and a different colored head and arms. Its stiff and need a reaction. The last animation, its the best out of the three. But, what the  is wrong with that stick. The table/trampoline reactions are ok, they need a reaction aswell. 1st-1.5/10 2nd-2.0/10 3rd-3.0/10 |
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Post by Epic Z on Apr 18, 2009 14:58:18 GMT -5
Alright, the first one, is just...random. Is he riding off on a capital n? Its also stiff and has little reaction. Also, why is his head a different colour than his body. Alright, the second one is scaring me. The kick is alright, but I cannot get over the fact that one of your sticks has horse's legs. And a different colored torso, and a different colored head and arms. Its stiff and need a reaction. The last animation, its the best out of the three. But, what the is wrong with that stick. The table/trampoline reactions are ok, they need a reaction aswell. 1st-1.5/10 2nd-2.0/10 3rd-3.0/10 Thanks for a good reply. He rides off on a Z lol. It's his shirt and pants not horse legs lmao. |
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Apr 18, 2009 15:10:42 GMT -5
Alright, the first one, is just...random. Is he riding off on a capital n? Its also stiff and has little reaction. Also, why is his head a different colour than his body. Alright, the second one is scaring me. The kick is alright, but I cannot get over the fact that one of your sticks has horse's legs. And a different colored torso, and a different colored head and arms. Its stiff and need a reaction. The last animation, its the best out of the three. But, what the is wrong with that stick. The table/trampoline reactions are ok, they need a reaction aswell. 1st-1.5/10 2nd-2.0/10 3rd-3.0/10 Thanks for a good reply. He rides off on a Z lol. It's his shirt and pants not horse legs lmao. *brushes sweat off forehead* THANK GOD! |
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xReyAlsanecx
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Post by xReyAlsanecx on Apr 18, 2009 18:22:00 GMT -5
First off,use the one stk.Dont use different stks as clothing,that takes alot of patience to do,you would need to be a pivot god or something to pull off a good ani with it.
Anway,work on basic stuff like stiffness mainly aswell as spacing.
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Post by Epic Z on Apr 18, 2009 20:26:38 GMT -5
First off,use the one stk.Dont use different stks as clothing,that takes alot of patience to do,you would need to be a pivot god or something to pull off a good ani with it. Anway,work on basic stuff like stiffness mainly aswell as spacing. thanks for the reply! The clothing doesnt move but I will take it into consideration. |
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Post by wolfe7187 on Apr 18, 2009 20:28:50 GMT -5
There ok, they need some more frames, and all, but they're pretty good. I like the creativeness of the "Z" thing he rides away on. Pretty funny. Keep trying!
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Post by Epic Z on Apr 18, 2009 21:11:25 GMT -5
How do you like my background and stuff?
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Post by wolfe7187 on Apr 18, 2009 21:16:33 GMT -5
How do you like my background and stuff? They're pretty good as a matter of fact.  |
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