RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on May 1, 2009 12:40:26 GMT -5
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Jacob
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Post by Jacob on May 1, 2009 14:06:19 GMT -5
Okay, I'm finally starting to see some improvements in your fed, which is great. Hebner has started to move around the ring, at last! Poses are getting better, still need a little work, though.
I enjoyed this show, though. Just work on your commentary now, try some grammar ect and think about tidying up your arena a little. I've got to give it to you though, the shows are consistant, which is what I'm looking for at the minute. Keep up the good work.
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RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on May 1, 2009 14:12:17 GMT -5
thanks man for the comment, and i did take your comments on board about the show as in better poses, and look to keep a consistent show up, there will be no bailing out.  |
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Jacob
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Post by Jacob on May 1, 2009 14:26:07 GMT -5
thanks man for the comment, and i did take your comments on board about the show as in better poses, and look to keep a consistent show up, there will be no bailing out. Also, you need to edit the wire out of some of your ariel shots. |
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-LMB-
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Post by -LMB- on May 2, 2009 14:04:30 GMT -5
Iam still having trouble with your shows as allways  they just dont seem to work for me. i seen a few pics like the cmpunk pic and jeff hardy but thats it. |
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Post by Elliot on May 2, 2009 14:18:40 GMT -5
I believe that this is definitely improving. You are moving the joints of the figures more and as Slash said, you are moving Hebner around which is good. I think you backstage segments are mostly well written.
Onto the actual matches... during the first match, the picture where Jesse suplexes Miz is very stiff. Jesse looks like Superman, lifting him up with one arm. I liked the poses where both men got the tag, I thought that was well done. You seem to like your interferences as I have seen a lot. Khali destroying Jesse and Festus, and teaming with Miz and Morrison is weird.
A Steel Chair match? Is that like a weapon on a pole match but with steel chairs?
RVD versus Edge was cool and RVD winning was good with him being the MITB holder. lmao, something about that Shane McMahon figure just annoys the heel out of me, xD. Vince McMahon refereeing the next match was good to stir things with Jericho, obviously favouring Umaga.
I liked the Main Event and the appearance of Ric Flair was good.
Overall, a good show. A few grammatical errors and stiff shots, but it's definitely an improvement from previous weeks. If you keep improving at the rate you are doing, you'll be taking better shots in no time. Good luck as always and I look forward to seeing the next show.
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