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Post by hwa09 on May 5, 2009 13:58:38 GMT -5
I Know Its Choppy
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2009 14:40:43 GMT -5
its very good but like you said it is quite choppy in places and the glass took ages to break. you just need to hide the string better and it will be awesome
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on May 5, 2009 14:47:33 GMT -5
That wasnt that good. No reaction from jericho to the chair shot, after london threw the chair they froze, and as the chair was coming towards Jericho he shuld have put his hands up because in real life if a chair is flying at you what are you going to do? Also it is very stiif, I got some very good advice back when I started and it was to try and move the joints every single picture you take, and to this day that is what I try to do. So work on that and just keep at it. It is really annoying how people think just because an animation is not choppy it is good. Because that it bull. I hate watching animations that have alot of pics but are really, really stiff.
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Post by hwa09 on May 5, 2009 14:55:29 GMT -5
That wasnt that good. No reaction from jericho to the chair shot, after london threw the chair they froze, and as the chair was coming towards Jericho he shuld have put his hands up because in real life if a chair is flying at you what are you going to do? Also it is very stiif, I got some very good advice back when I started and it was to try and move the joints every single picture you take, and to this day that is what I try to do. So work on that and just keep at it. It is really annoying how people think just because an animation is not choppy it is good. Because that it bull. I hate watching animations that have alot of pics but are really, really stiff. Thanks For The Advice
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Post by jakeman14 on May 5, 2009 14:59:32 GMT -5
It wasn't the best... It was very stiff, and choppy in some places. There was no reaction whatsoever to the chair shot. After London threw the chair they both froze. You should try to move every joint every frame, if you can. There was not a jump by london, and the string was visible. You should try to move their feet up when they run/walk. It was very stiff in the air, and the glass took ages to break. Jericho's reaction needs worked on.
4/10
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Post by hwa09 on May 5, 2009 15:20:09 GMT -5
its very good but like you said it is quite choppy in places and the glass took ages to break. you just need to hide the string better and it will be awesome Im Supposingly Mini-Moding All I Am Asking Is Can You Give Me A Mark,And A Little More Description On What To Improve On
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Post by wwestevo07 on May 5, 2009 15:43:27 GMT -5
it was not the best, as already sad, there has be a reaction when jericho gets hit with the chair, and even a reaction before it hits him, i would of tried to make him run a bit more, the runing wasnt great but it is hard at first, u need to practice running, the flip was pretty good, but a liitle stiff and could be alot faster, when both figs are in the air they were pretty stiff, you should have mad jericho put his arms on londos legs and bent jerichos kness on the way down, and the breaking of the gass was a bit delayed, and the flash made the pics a little too bright twords the end but the picture quality was good, its not the worst ani keep it up,
overall 5/10
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Post by hwa09 on May 5, 2009 15:50:21 GMT -5
it was not the best, as already sad, there has be a reaction when jericho gets hit with the chair, and even a reaction before it hits him, i would of tried to make him run a bit more, the runing wasnt great but it is hard at first, u need to practice running, the flip was pretty good, but a liitle stiff and could be alot faster, when both figs are in the air they were pretty stiff, you should have mad jericho put his arms on londos legs and bent jerichos kness on the way down, and the breaking of the gass was a bit delayed, and the flash made the pics a little too bright twords the end but the picture quality was good, its not the worst ani keep it up, overall 5/10 Thanx Stevo,I Cant Reply To Good..LKS Warns Me For ''Mini-Moding''
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Post by axelwarjp on May 5, 2009 23:49:35 GMT -5
Great animation! Might be one of your best I can see string. It was choppy, the chair shoot was weird, would have been kool it you keep it on Y2J's head. Y2J really needed a reaction to the chair shoot. Also when London threw the chair he keep his arms up the whole time, you should have out his arms down at the same time the chair was in the air. The running was ok. The senton itself was good. I liked how you moved the camer as they fall. They were both stiff in mid air. The glass looked like it had reaction time before breaking when it should have broke once they hit it. Y2J''s reaction was really good. OVERALL: 6/10
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Post by Deep Shadows on May 6, 2009 3:01:11 GMT -5
It definitely needs to be sped up and the string needs edited. The string really hurts the ani.
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