Liam
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Post by Liam on Jun 24, 2009 6:01:22 GMT -5
rofl fast...  Epic Fail  uhh credit Rain for hardy stick credit go to -Ali-G- for laying down sticks and ring sprite.. -1888Matt- for teh background |
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Liam
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Joined on: Apr 22, 2009 23:07:24 GMT -5
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Post by Liam on Jun 25, 2009 0:45:39 GMT -5
omfg.. comments? tips how to improve?
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Post by wolfe7187 on Jun 25, 2009 7:25:38 GMT -5
Rain made the Hardy stick.
You are improving, but you need to work on some things. Like always try to add a jump prep. Look at some tuts for that. Also add more frames for most of the parts in the animations. The more frames you have, a smoother animation. But don't put to many frames in it, or it will be slow. Work on your reactions as well. There are tuts out there that could really help you. Now to comment.
#1- This is ok. It's pretty choppy though, and the reactions aren't good. Remember to add a jump prep too.
#2-I like the impact you used in this. But remeber to add a jump prep. Also, I couldn't notice the turn. While in the air, the "Hardy" becomes pretty floaty, delete some frames in the air. The powerbomb was ok. but the reactions were bad.
Well I hope I helped. Comment on mine?
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Post by bac5220 on Jun 25, 2009 10:24:25 GMT -5
Your best IMO. Yes, Rain made "Hardy" AND "Homicide. What wolfe said. lol You have the idea of what to do, (movements, etc.) but work on spacng: l-l---l-----l------------l-----l---l-l l=Stick -=movement of the stick. So yeah work on that and use more frames(not too much), and a jump preperation.  |
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Liam
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Joined on: Apr 22, 2009 23:07:24 GMT -5
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Post by Liam on Jun 26, 2009 4:47:14 GMT -5
thanks guys ill comment on yours pengi
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