AFW Episode #1 + Backstage seegment 5/8/09

Well, let's see...your poses are stiff as hell. Thanks for showing everyone how sloppy your room is. Ahhh yes, and the gratuitous leg shots...very sexy. Nice big ole pile of figures in the background to distract from what's goin on in the ring, oh that's right, nothing's going on cuz they're just standing there STIFF AS A BOARD! I dont know who the hell that goldust character is other than goldust since it's on the back of his shirt. Hey watch out for the figure orgy! Oh man now BenoitDust is bleeding...purple...or is that supposed to be jelly...I cant tell. This segment brought to you by Duck Airways. They must have flown Hamish up to the top there becasue one pic he's on the floor and the next pic he's on top. IT's Superman! YEAHHH!
Looks like ya gota nice DVD collection there. Let's see ya got Daddy day care, Happy feet...oh that's a good one, cheaper by the dozen...oh that's right, you got a pic fed goin here...ok back to the action...Well, it looks like Triple H enjoyed that Jelly sandwich a little too much. How bout ya wash your socks next time is they're keep making cameos. Ok, and the winner is Grizzly adams or watever the hell his name is.

Overall, it had originality and was very entertaining. However, i'll admit I kept going back and touching the maryse picture in your sig. I cant wait for the next show. Really, I can't wait.

Edit:

Ok, i couldnt help it. You have original charater but everything i mentioned in a joking or sarcastic way needs improvement from the arena all the way down to the jelly blood. even the commentary. the only good thing was the original characters but even some of the names are bland. take a look at some other pics on the board with the exception of the one with the humping dinosaurs in the background

Bend them. Igor Jr for world champion.

DJ really summed this up the best. The originality is great, However Im really surprised theres not more Arab people in it....ya know?

About stiff poses. when punching someone I think it was Igor had that "straight on redneck punch look going" Try twisting his waist and putting one leg in front of another and bending their knees slightly.

Also, defiantly do something with the background. Even if its just a sheet hanging or an empty spot on the wall. Too much clutter in the background distracts you from whats going on. The whoel time I kept looking at the Orgy DJ was talking about in the background.

Overall its got good potential just a lil work on the little things and you should be alright

What the hell is this?

number 1 you don't tell me what to do

Number 2 you are the newbie, great poses BTW

the best part of the show is when it ended.

I didn't like it. The originality was okay but it seemed very sarcastic, and knowing that it was actually serious makes it that much worse. The figures have joints for a reason, use them man. Bend their legs and turn their torsos. I don't mind the fact that you didn't use an actual arena because alot of us started off this way, but the presentation was very, very poor. You have the general concept of a federation down, but you need to step up your ideas, poses, and overall presentation if you hope to garner any respect on this board.

I did like "The Don" however. That was pretty funny.

I'll give you a 5/10 for effort. Keep at it, it can't get any worse.

Thanks RH. How could we improve our presentation. And could you guys comment on comentry, ideas and how we could step them up as we want to find out all our flaws so we can improve them in the coming weeks. We are also considerind re-doing some of our customs to make them more presentable.

Sorry the Pope we shall be doing that. And may i just ask who has upset you today?

...and where is your show again?