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Post by That guy next door. on Sept 17, 2009 10:26:39 GMT -5
Well folks. I have worked long and hard to make this as good as possible with what i had at at the time. So............ go to: www.4riwunleashed3.webs.com |
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Post by That guy next door. on Sept 17, 2009 10:30:42 GMT -5
Announcements!
After an incident at the show, Edge and Curt Hawkins won't be able to wrestle on episode 4 but will be back for Rage in The Cage.
Also, can you comment on everything please, the arena, the poses, commentary etc. Just to help me get better.
Also, i leave tomorrow for England baby!
Australia vs England 50 over ODI live from the Riverside Cricket Ground, County Durham!
Unfortunately, the tickets state all fans with signs will be ejected :-(, and i'm forced to sit in the ENGLISH BARMY ARMY STAND!
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Post by shiftyeyes on Sept 17, 2009 10:42:38 GMT -5
First off, thank you for removing spoilers. Now to my review.
To start, The lighting and pic quality is a helluva lot better, and removing the wrestler's themes was a good move, but a negative is that your roster is still undecided seemingly, despite it being episode three.. Opening contest is short and
I will say now that I dislike the enforcer idea alot. Warrior's a tag champ, something I must have missed on the crapfest
that was episode two. Good idea there, should be interesting to see who accepts the challenge. Woah, 14 man tag match?! Sorry, thats too much. If you want to build feuds, use backstage segments. I had no idea who was in the match, as the heels got lost amongst the crowd. Ok, that was interesting, building up feuds nicely. I liked that little segment alot.. Good
to see Hawkins and Ryder as enemies rather than friends. Edge and Y2J.. nuff said really, should be good. Sorry, but I really, really don't like seeing Benoit in feds. Period. Its just wrong. Edge and Jericho are in the cruiserweight division?
-__- Lame. Benoit as world champ is bad to me, but thats personal opinion. The International Title match sounds good, as do Angle/Austin and Rey/Jeff. Wha? Why is Orton dressed like that?! W/e, anyway, its Orton/Hawkins/Ryder for the cruiserweight belt then? Thats interesting.
Ok, the picture quality is a helluva lot better, the themes being removed makes the show so much more enjoyable, and the site in general is set up so much better than it was previously. However, the negatives for me are Benoit as champ and
Benoit being in the fed in general, as well as the very short matches. But, in your favour, you've improved drastically,
something I honestly didn't expect. Props to ya for that man, pump 'em out like this, and I think you'll have a few fans. |
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Post by That guy next door. on Sept 17, 2009 11:22:06 GMT -5
Actually Shifty you got a lil confused. Orton faced Jericho, and now that Orton beat Jericho, it earned Edge a match against Jericho at RITC. So at RITC Edge will face Y2J, and the winner faces whoever is the cruiser champ at the next PPV.
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Post by Terrys Wrestling Figures on Sept 18, 2009 17:02:46 GMT -5
why, Shifty Eyed Hurricane >_>, do you have a problem with Beoit being in pic feds? I get what he did isn't something to go on about but at the end of the day what Laylael [& myself once i get my fed going] is using a plastic toy for entainment. If Laylael or overs were using his figure to recreate what he did or something similar then i wouldn't want it on there be hes not so get off your high horse.
Also to the comment on what Orton was wearing, Laylael might not have a street gear Orton & he only had that to use or he wanted to use the outfit full stop, its his fed like the overs who do pic feds, they can have whoever doing whatever wearing whatever they want.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Sept 19, 2009 6:02:00 GMT -5
why, Shifty Eyed Hurricane >_>, do you have a problem with Beoit being in pic feds? I get what he did isn't something to go on about but at the end of the day what Laylael [& myself once i get my fed going] is using a plastic toy for entainment. If Laylael or overs were using his figure to recreate what he did or something similar then i wouldn't want it on there be hes not so get off your high horse.Also to the comment on what Orton was wearing, Laylael might not have a street gear Orton & he only had that to use or he wanted to use the outfit full stop, its his fed like the overs who do pic feds, they can have whoever doing whatever wearing whatever they want. Why are you having a pop at me? Its my opinion on whether I like or even want Benoit in any feds. As for the Orton thing, I was only questioning why he was dressed like that. Opinions do differ, so deal with it. And really, the fact that you've wrote a response having a go at someone, rather than actually a review of the show, which I know Lay has worked hard on, is just a tad insulting for him isn't it? Thats all i'm gonna say, if you have an issue with me, PM me about it. |
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Post by deskjet on Sept 19, 2009 6:59:24 GMT -5
Well, I will say that this show is much much improved. Clearer pics, better transitions from one pic to the next. And better transsitions between segments. All the matches were solid except the Main event and i didnt quite get two tied up guys doin moves in the ring. Still work on some of your poses. Overal though, alot better and you are well on your way. I have alot of respect for you because with all the crap you take, you still remain positive, still contribute to the board, and still work at improving your craft. Keep up the good work:)
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Post by That guy next door. on Sept 19, 2009 7:12:56 GMT -5
Thanks DJ, your opinion matters alot because you are one of the best, if not the best fedder on this board. And you are one of the longest standing vets. Thankyou for your appreciation.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Sept 26, 2009 8:09:30 GMT -5
sorry it took me so long to reply to this. i have to say, you really have improved, but... you have a lot more work to do. first of all the layout is better, but the scrolling back to the top of every page is a pain in the ass. it is quite simple to use the link button on freewebs, but you continue to neglect our advice about that. when you read replies... follow them. the pictures are coming out a lot better, and your poses seem to be improving a lot. another thing that bugs me is... i have no idea what the hell is going on with your story lines. they don't seem to flow from show to show. now that you have improved a bit, i imagine that will change. just keep working your hardest and producing shows. hopefully, you will continue to improve. good luck =)
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Post by Titan Wrestling All-Stars on Oct 1, 2009 19:29:10 GMT -5
Pros: I like the way you've rearranged the arena setup, it looks tightened up in the sense that everything seems closer together so you get everything in one shot, crowd etc. Picture quality has greatly improved, I never really saw a shot that was blurry which is a definite plus. Adding some classic commercials wasn't a bad idea, haven't seen that done too often, makes it interesting. My favorite contest, albeit a short one, was the 6-Man between HF2.0 and Benoit/Tazz/Funk, I'm a big fan all around of any of the Hart family so it's nice to see them.
Cons: I don't know if this belonged in the cons, but, your poses seem to be improving, to be honest, there's still work to be done. I didn't care for the Warrior promo, you put him completely out of character and made him civilized to which his promos are the exact opposite. I was kinda upset with the Eddie/Kendrick match, both of them are great talents and you didn't seem to push the match to it's potential, getting Albano involved didn't help much either. The 14-Man tag was very confusing to me, too much going on I guess, weren't Show and Snitsky against each other on your 2nd ep., now they're teaming with no explanation.
First of all, I wish I could have gotten this in sooner, I've been tied up lately and right now I've got the flu so it's a double buzz-kill, you always reply to my shows and I definitely plan to return the favor even if it does come at a later time. My thoughts on the show overall is that it's vastly improving some stuff can be confusing at times but with each episode it's getting better. Can't wait for episode 4, I'm interested to see what's up with the Hardys and DX, plus, I'm intrigued with the shenanigans with the Hart Foundation.
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Post by That guy next door. on Oct 3, 2009 3:31:08 GMT -5
Hey guys, thanks for the replies, i appreciate it from guys like you, as you are vets, look for episode 4 teaser pics soon, to show i have mastered photoshop and nametags etc.
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