Cam V1
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Xbox Live GT: camchief
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Jan 13, 2010 13:53:29 GMT -5
Post by Cam V1 on Jan 13, 2010 13:53:29 GMT -5
IMO its not so good, still trying to get rif of rust.  Sorry about my hand and the string, I was watching RAW on my T.V downstairs so I didnt have a solid background to edit. |
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jwsowner
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"The King Of String"
Joined on: Nov 21, 2009 14:41:05 GMT -5
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Jan 13, 2010 14:00:27 GMT -5
Post by jwsowner on Jan 13, 2010 14:00:27 GMT -5
Pretty good, but the biggest problem is your arm being in the animation. Also the shaky camera, but it was smooth for the most part. Saw string, kinda stiff, and when Randy Orton was walking towards The Brian Kendrick he kinda slid, the reaction was decent, but this is an ok animation. Nice job.
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Jan 13, 2010 16:46:14 GMT -5
Post by jonirocks on Jan 13, 2010 16:46:14 GMT -5
i fell asleep watching that raw
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Sabin
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Jan 13, 2010 17:01:45 GMT -5
Post by Sabin on Jan 13, 2010 17:01:45 GMT -5
No one gives a poop, comment on the animation for once, this isnt a chat room.
You need to tighten your tripod up because the camera moves to much. I think that it should have started out with a taunt. you need to bend the knees more and take more pics for the running and move the arms aswell. the jump was decent, needed 2-3 more frames with more bending of the knees. I think he should have gotten more air time aswell, he barely got off the ground. there were enough pics in the air and the reaction was ok, needed a litlle more work. it was stiff and slow. generally they land more toward the head of the person so the legs will jolt up instead of TBK sitting up. 3.2/10
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Cam V1
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Jan 14, 2010 8:36:09 GMT -5
Post by Cam V1 on Jan 14, 2010 8:36:09 GMT -5
No one gives a poop, comment on the animation for once, this isnt a chat room. You need to tighten your tripod up because the camera moves to much. I think that it should have started out with a taunt. you need to bend the knees more and take more pics for the running and move the arms aswell. the jump was decent, needed 2-3 more frames with more bending of the knees. I think he should have gotten more air time aswell, he barely got off the ground. there were enough pics in the air and the reaction was ok, needed a litlle more work. it was stiff and slow. generally they land more toward the head of the person so the legs will jolt up instead of TBK sitting up. 3.2/10 Thanks for your long and detailed reply! i fell asleep watching that raw TBH I dont care, comment on the animation! |
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wwestevo07
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4 Time WF Ani World Champion
Joined on: Oct 17, 2006 14:15:28 GMT -5
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Jan 14, 2010 14:02:46 GMT -5
Post by wwestevo07 on Jan 14, 2010 14:02:46 GMT -5
not bad, the camera quality is good lighting pretty good too, just neede a few more pics for the jump and a bit higher, it was good the way u bent ortons arms back but they still seem a bit stiff, reaction was alright but it wud of looked better if u made orton land on kendricks chest. just try get the tripod or sumthin soeted out so it dosnt move 3.5/10
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