Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Jan 15, 2010 16:17:10 GMT -5
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RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jan 15, 2010 16:27:37 GMT -5
Will edit....
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Post by kc on Jan 16, 2010 18:22:33 GMT -5
I didn't really care for this show. You've been pic fedding for a long time now, and I've seen little improvement since then. I just couldn't get into this show. I hated the fact that it's on proboards, and the dialog was a bit confusing at times. The storylines were decent. I like a heel John Morrison as the Million Dollar champion. I since a title unification match in the future between Jericho and Morrison. The match length was fine, but PLEASE work on your poses. I look forward to seeing episode 2, I'm hoping it's a step up from this.
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Ramos
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Joined on: Sept 19, 2007 13:58:31 GMT -5
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Post by Ramos on Jan 16, 2010 18:26:17 GMT -5
I didn't really care for this show. You've been pic fedding for a long time now, and I've seen little improvement since then. I just couldn't get into this show. I hated the fact that it's on proboards, and the dialog was a bit confusing at times. The storylines were decent. I like a heel John Morrison as the Million Dollar champion. I since a title unification match in the future between Jericho and Morrison. The match length was fine, but PLEASE work on your poses. I look forward to seeing episode 2, I'm hoping it's a step up from this. Thanks for the honest comment man. I am currently trying to get used to freewebs and hope to use that soon. I'll continue to work on poses as much as I can. I'll also hold my hands up and admit the commentary sucked. However...Episode 2 was filmed at the same time as this so the poses will be around the same. |
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Post by Byron F'N Saxton Fan on Jan 17, 2010 2:58:22 GMT -5
I'm inexperienced with Pic Fedding, but just some points:
Liked that you got the main storyline started immediately, but you seemed to pull out the Million Dollar Belt/Trashing the SPW Title a little early. Maybe do that after the Main Event like a 4-way with Kendrick, Punk, Jericho and JoMo. Still, the storyline looks good.
Patrick Whitnall has his moments, but he seems more like a heel just for the sake of being a heel most of the time. Maybe expand his verbiage, so he's able to explain more why he's sided with DiBiase.
The one thing about your Matches that bothered me was you seemed to skip a picture that was needed in the sequence. Like when Jericho goes for the Lion's salt, have a shot of Jericho in mid-air, and CM Punk lying in wait for Jericho. Just try and add a picture to your moves, and they would look pretty good.
Maybe turn the Ring Skirt and turnbuckle pads inside-out so they're just black without WWE logo's on them.
Overall: Your show shows promise, maybe add another Match so you have three Matches a week, unless you have a really big Main Event like a Title Match, but overall just simple things to fix from my point of view.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jan 22, 2010 7:59:21 GMT -5
this show could have been better, but I did enjoy a majority of what you are doing. the pics were the worst part of the show. the awkward resizing distorted the pictures. other than that the show was pretty good. the poses were nice for the most part, but utilizing the joints more would make those poses even better. I really like the idea of Kurt Angle as the owner. Your setup is clean and your story lines are moving smoothly. the only thing i would suggest (as i stated before) is to resize the pictures in a way that does not distort the image. Good luck man, and keep pic fedding =)
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