Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 20, 2010 17:14:26 GMT -5
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Post by dbwwwyki on Jan 20, 2010 18:37:54 GMT -5
It was pretty decent for a relatively new beginner like yourself. The Jump was a little weird, and it was floaty. Reactons were allright, if you want a more detailed reply just send me a pm as I am willing to help you and others.
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At the start I like how you tried to keep the sticks feet in the same place, but it looked a little fidgety. The bend was a bit unrealistic because it was real fast and his arms were straight and stayed at his sides. Next time make his arms more free flowing like in marcs anis as he has the smoothest and most free flowing anis out there, Like have the arms go up and bend. The jump and airtime was weird because he spun down really fast and didn't go up at all, The spin was very fast and it was stiff throughout. The reaction was slow, choppy, and floaty. You need to work on it, If I find a tutorial on it I will show you.
Better than your other anis 6.5/10
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Post by alexgg on Jan 21, 2010 13:16:28 GMT -5
Good job on them, they do look very fidgety though.
Its starts off great as Jake said, at least the legs are together. I think you should try and keep them together like that through out so they are not waving around.
I didnt like the first one due to landing on the feet, it was really unrealistic and he would pretty much collapse to the floor.
The second one is better, has a good landing but needs better reactions. The air time was good but spacing needs work on.
Also select the ring and click "Front" so the sticks dont appear outside on the apron.
Good job.
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 22, 2010 16:07:08 GMT -5
I really dont like this one. I'm sorry but its too fast, the jump looks weird, the impact is weird how he just rolls. I see how you've spaced it but i still dont think you've used enough frames. But still, keep up these "daily animations" and you'll improve  |
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Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 22, 2010 16:34:25 GMT -5
The swanton is fidgity, the spacing looked good to me, pretty smooth.
Reply to mine?
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Post by dbwwwyki on Jan 22, 2010 17:06:52 GMT -5
You need to fix the jump, his arms need to go infront.
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 22, 2010 17:13:04 GMT -5
umm this is gonna sound stupid but how do you open up an animation because I didnt save it as a piv file?
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Post by dbwwwyki on Jan 22, 2010 17:24:50 GMT -5
umm this is gonna sound stupid but how do you open up an animation because I didnt save it as a piv file? Unless you saved it as a .piv you cant open it up. |
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Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 23, 2010 4:42:09 GMT -5
Frog Splash: This is only a little flaw but put everything behind the ropes. I think you need to do more frames, I can see you tried to space, Purple needs a reaction.
7.5/10
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Post by dbwwwyki on Jan 23, 2010 8:55:15 GMT -5
Frog Splash: This is only a little flaw but put everything behind the ropes. I think you need to do more frames, I can see you tried to space, Purple needs a reaction. 7.5/10 4. Unless you space don't tell other people to space :/ Right type of jump, but the movements are choppy. I'm going to upload one of my anis from august to show you reactions and spacing. |
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Post by dbwwwyki on Jan 23, 2010 10:17:55 GMT -5
4. Unless you space don't tell other people to space :/ Right type of jump, but the movements are choppy. I'm going to upload one of my anis from august to show you reactions and spacing. IF you could thatd be great I was good Oh it's true It's true |
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Brockinton10
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Post by Brockinton10 on Jan 23, 2010 21:23:00 GMT -5
Pretty good and smooth for a newer guy. Nice setup I used to have one like that but I lost it.  It was prretty smooth kinda fast on the back cracker. |
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Ryan
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Post by Ryan on Jan 24, 2010 15:00:22 GMT -5
The latest one is funny but choppy & what the hell did that blue stick do when he went back lmao!.I liked the back cracker,didnt seem choppy and i liked the reaction,keep it up.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2010 17:29:18 GMT -5
needs more frames,its stiff,little fidgety at the start and there was no impact,little choppy to.work on getting it a bit smoother.
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 26, 2010 12:53:21 GMT -5
To be honest, i dont really like this one. the jump kinda sucks as there wasnt enough frames, he was at the same angle in the air and it was just weird, there wasnt enough in-air frames, however the reaction was smooth and the chair break was cool and smooth.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2010 19:37:03 GMT -5
its more of a senton.
stiff throughout,choppy, and there is pretty much no impact,the reactions were half decent.
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Feb 6, 2010 12:01:36 GMT -5
new ani up.
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Post by alexgg on Feb 7, 2010 13:18:07 GMT -5
Why do you remove all the other animations? makes all the replys look random.
The jump is good but the spin is stiff, it also looks like he sticks in the air after the jump.
Cant really comment on reactions as they arent visible.
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Feb 7, 2010 13:27:06 GMT -5
sorry Alex, ill edit that now.
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