Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 22, 2010 12:32:40 GMT -5
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Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 22, 2010 13:16:44 GMT -5
To many frames, you need to space, the jump was ok,quite floaty.
Spacing is very important. 6/10
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 23, 2010 15:47:28 GMT -5
Updated with a slow ani.
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Post by alexgg on Jan 24, 2010 5:17:44 GMT -5
Yeah it looks like a gut wrench powerbomb to me, good job. The legs are quite fidgety though, and the backs are quite stiff. Try to arch the back slightly and move it each frame. and I think when he does that move his legs stay on the floor and he kinda falls. The reactions where smooth but I didnt like how he 'backflips'.
The 2nd one down he quite choppy and the spacing needs work, you bent the legs back instead of down so the jump looks awkward. He should move faster whilst air-bourne move him further away from his last frame when falling. The reactions from the black stick where really great though, its just reds that wasnt very good.
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 24, 2010 14:18:59 GMT -5
BUMP
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 24, 2010 15:29:13 GMT -5
I loked this ani but it was slow and I didnt like the bounce reaction at the end, It would have looked better without it, the spacingg was good but the jump needed more work.his arms should have come back more.
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Post by pitlord on Jan 26, 2010 15:49:42 GMT -5
speed it upto 17 and use spacing. reactions are wayy too stiff aswell.
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 26, 2010 15:52:14 GMT -5
speed it upto 17 and use spacing. reactions are wayy too stiff aswell. the speed was something like 23 or 24 but it just came out slow.
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