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Post by deskjet on Feb 10, 2010 10:40:52 GMT -5
The Pyro goes off as MWE Mayhem debuts! The night kicks off with the Head to Head qualifying tournament match between Johnny Stamboli and Ted Dibaise Jr. Stamboli goes for a big right and Dibiase blocks it. Stamboli attempts a takedown that Dibiase counters into a pinfall that Stamboli breaks up quickly. Dibiase levels Stamboli with a big clothesline and side slam. Ted Dibiase hits the ropes and Stamboli rolls out of the ring. Dibiase then jumps over the top rope and takes out The Bull. Dibiase rolls Stamboli back in, hooks the leg and Stamboli kicks out after two. Dibiase gets his opponent in a front choke sitting up on the top rope, but Stamboli pulls him off the top and Dibiase lands right on the back of his head coming down. Johnny The Bull picks up Dibiase and throws him into the corner. The Bull sends Dibiase into the ropes and hits a few forearm shots to the lower back. Dibiase catches Stamboli with an elbow, but Stamboli comes back getting an abdominal stretch applied. Stamboli hits Dibiase in the ribs as he keeps the abdominal stretch locked in. Dibiase attempts a counter, but Stamboli levels him with a big clothesline. A quick cover by Stamboli but Dibiase kicks out. Another cover and Dibiase again kicks out. Then, Stamboli gets a headlock applied, but Dibiase counters putting him on his shoulders and hitting an Electric Chair. Dibiase with a cover and Stamboli kicks out after two. Dibiase with right hands to Stamboli with a big right slap dropping Stamboli. Dibiase hits the ropes, drops his fist drop, and hooks the leg, but Johnny kicks out after two. Stamboli counters with a roll up from the corner that results in a two count. With Dibiase trying to make his way to his feet, Stamboli springboards off the ropes against the corner, attempts a body splash, but Dibiase gets his knees up. Dibiase catches Stamboli with a big kick to the face, hits a DDT and gets the pinfall. BACKSTAGE: Hogan is telling Kevin Nash that he's not happy about how things are working out for the JWO, but he's confident things are about to change!The night continues as Tomko and The Game, Triple H get set to do battle in this second qualifying match. The bell rings and here we go. The opponents lock up and Tomko pushes HHH to the corner. Another lock up, knee by Tomko and a few right hands in the corner. The Game lands a few rights of his own followed by a whip off the ropes into a spinebuster. Cover by HHH and Tomko quickly kicks out. Big right hand by HHH on Tomko. But, Tomko launches HHH into the ropes and follows that up with a huge boot to the head. Cover and The Game kicks out after two. Tomko with a few shots to the back of the head and then applies a modified camel clutch. The Game fights back with a few elbows. Tomko with a knee to the gut. HHH counters with right and left hand uppercuts. Tomko misses a clothesline in the corner and HHH connects with a few closed fists to the chin and a big flying knee to the head. A dazed Tomko makes his way to his feet only to be met with a kick to the midsection by the rejuvinated Triple H. As The Game sets up for the pedigree, Hogan comes to the ring and distracts the referee. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Snitsky comes into the ring and blindsides The Game with a boot to the side of the head. Snitsky rolls out of the ring and Tomko quickly makes the cover for the 1...2...3 and the win. Hogan, Tomko, and Snitsky both walk to the back with arms raised as the referee attends to HHH. **Commercial Break**Rey Mysterio comes to the ring to thanks all the fans for their support and says how honored he is to be the MWE's first ever World champion. Mid-promo, Hogan comes out and challenges Rey to a World title match right here and now! Rey says he's a fighting champion and agrees. A referre makes his way to the ring and this impromptu match is underway! Hogan tries to lock up but Rey ducks under and kicks Hogan in the side of the knee. The champion bounces off the rope and attempts a knee lift to the head, but hogan moves out of the way and hits Mysterio with a vicious clothesline. Hogan goes for the pin but only gets a one count. Hogan lifts the champ up from the mat and Mysterio counters with a standing dropkick to Hogans' midsection propelling him into the corner. Rey takes a running start and hits a corner splash sending Hogan to the mat. Hogan crawls his way to the ropes as Mysterio is poised to hit the 619. Just then, Kevin Nash, Tomko, and Snitsky surround the ring. Rey turns and looks around the ring for a moment before executing the 619 on Hogan. The move spurred Nash, Snitsky, and Tomko to enter the ring and put the beatdown on Mysterio. The referee quickly called for the bell, ruling the match a disqualification. Then, HHH made his way to the ring weilding a sledgehammer. The Game got a shot in on Tomko and Snitsky before Nash and Hogan ducked under the ropes. The show came to a close with HHH and Rey standing in the ring as members of the JWO made their way back up the ramp! END SHOW
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Post by downsyndrome on Feb 10, 2010 11:12:52 GMT -5
Great show pal, pretty good detail in the write ups and good pics as always. I really like the parody and how Hogan is "making things better"
Keep up the good work.
P.S the finish to the last match was very nitoish lol
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Post by slappy on Feb 10, 2010 15:35:39 GMT -5
I liked that Dibiase won, but there were still too many pictures, seemed like a pic fed match.
Good match, I just wish HHH would have gotten the win.
I do enjoy when someone gets the upperhand on Hogan, so this was a plus for me.
Still think there are too many pictures. Maybe try to limit yourself to two pictures a match and a picture for a segment but only if something interesting happens.
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Feb 10, 2010 15:40:00 GMT -5
Short and sweet, I liked it. I still think it's a few too many pics for a text fed, but the detail is good as well. Love the parody that is Hulk Hogan "making things better."
While I think this fed could be a bit better if it had a match or two more per show and a little more emphasis on text, I like where it's going. Keep it up.
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Post by deskjet on Feb 10, 2010 15:53:55 GMT -5
I liked that Dibiase won, but there were still too many pictures, seemed like a pic fed match. Good match, I just wish HHH would have gotten the win. I do enjoy when someone gets the upperhand on Hogan, so this was a plus for me. Still think there are too many pictures. Maybe try to limit yourself to two pictures a match and a picture for a segment but only if something interesting happens. Thanks for the advice. Yeah I figured it mite be too much. I'll try 2 pictures a match for next time. thanks again for the support.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Feb 10, 2010 17:17:30 GMT -5
This looks like a pic fed to me. Too many pics. They're should be no more than two pics a match, IMO. Check out Snurf's show for an example of a text fed with figures.
I like this show. Short enough to reply to & very entertaining. This show has potential. The one main problem is that this looks more like a pic fed than a text fed. I'm looking forward to reading this.
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Post by deskjet on Feb 10, 2010 17:45:24 GMT -5
This looks like a pic fed to me. Too many pics. They're should be no more than two pics a match, IMO. Check out Snurf's show for an example of a text fed with figures. I like this show. Short enough to reply to & very entertaining. This show has potential. The one main problem is that this looks more like a pic fed than a text fed. I'm looking forward to reading this. Yep. i felt the same way after I posted it so I made a modification...slappy and smurf approved,lol The Pyro goes off as MWE Mayhem debuts! The night kicks off with the Head to Head qualifying tournament match between Johnny Stamboli and Ted Dibaise Jr. Stamboli goes for a big right and Dibiase blocks it. Stamboli attempts a takedown that Dibiase counters into a pinfall that Stamboli breaks up quickly. Dibiase levels Stamboli with a big clothesline and side slam. Ted Dibiase hits the ropes and Stamboli rolls out of the ring. Dibiase then jumps over the top rope and takes out The Bull. Dibiase rolls Stamboli back in, hooks the leg and Stamboli kicks out after two. Dibiase gets his opponent in a front choke sitting up on the top rope, but Stamboli pulls him off the top and Dibiase lands right on the back of his head coming down. Johnny The Bull picks up Dibiase and throws him into the corner. The Bull sends Dibiase into the ropes and hits a few forearm shots to the lower back. Dibiase catches Stamboli with an elbow, but Stamboli comes back getting an abdominal stretch applied. Stamboli hits Dibiase in the ribs as he keeps the abdominal stretch locked in. Dibiase attempts a counter, but Stamboli levels him with a big clothesline. A quick cover by Stamboli but Dibiase kicks out. Another cover and Dibiase again kicks out. Then, Stamboli gets a headlock applied, but Dibiase counters putting him on his shoulders and hitting an Electric Chair. Dibiase with a cover and Stamboli kicks out after two. Dibiase with right hands to Stamboli with a big right slap dropping Stamboli. Dibiase hits the ropes, drops his fist drop, and hooks the leg, but Johnny kicks out after two. Stamboli counters with a roll up from the corner that results in a two count. With Dibiase trying to make his way to his feet, Stamboli springboards off the ropes against the corner, attempts a body splash, but Dibiase gets his knees up. Dibiase catches Stamboli with a big kick to the face, hits a DDT and gets the pinfall. BACKSTAGE: Hogan is telling Kevin Nash that he's not happy about how things are working out for the JWO, but he's confident things are about to change!The night continues as Tomko and The Game, Triple H get set to do battle in this second qualifying match. The bell rings and here we go. The opponents lock up and Tomko pushes HHH to the corner. Another lock up, knee by Tomko and a few right hands in the corner. The Game lands a few rights of his own followed by a whip off the ropes into a spinebuster. Cover by HHH and Tomko quickly kicks out. Big right hand by HHH on Tomko. But, Tomko launches HHH into the ropes and follows that up with a huge boot to the head. Cover and The Game kicks out after two. Tomko with a few shots to the back of the head and then applies a modified camel clutch. The Game fights back with a few elbows. Tomko with a knee to the gut. HHH counters with right and left hand uppercuts. Tomko misses a clothesline in the corner and HHH connects with a few closed fists to the chin and a big flying knee to the head. A dazed Tomko makes his way to his feet only to be met with a kick to the midsection by the rejuvinated Triple H. As The Game sets up for the pedigree, Hogan comes to the ring and distracts the referee. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Snitsky comes into the ring and blindsides The Game with a boot to the side of the head. Snitsky rolls out of the ring and Tomko quickly makes the cover for the 1...2...3 and the win. Hogan, Tomko, and Snitsky both walk to the back with arms raised as the referee attends to HHH. **Commercial Break**Rey Mysterio comes to the ring to thanks all the fans for their support and says how honored he is to be the MWE's first ever World champion. Mid-promo, Hogan comes out and challenges Rey to a World title match right here and now! Rey says he's a fighting champion and agrees. A referre makes his way to the ring and this impromptu match is underway! Hogan tries to lock up but Rey ducks under and kicks Hogan in the side of the knee. The champion bounces off the rope and attempts a knee lift to the head, but hogan moves out of the way and hits Mysterio with a vicious clothesline. Hogan goes for the pin but only gets a one count. Hogan lifts the champ up from the mat and Mysterio counters with a standing dropkick to Hogans' midsection propelling him into the corner. Rey takes a running start and hits a corner splash sending Hogan to the mat. Hogan crawls his way to the ropes as Mysterio is poised to hit the 619. Just then, Kevin Nash, Tomko, and Snitsky surround the ring. Rey turns and looks around the ring for a moment before executing the 619 on Hogan. The move spurred Nash, Snitsky, and Tomko to enter the ring and put the beatdown on Mysterio. The referee quickly called for the bell, ruling the match a disqualification. Then, HHH made his way to the ring weilding a sledgehammer. The Game got a shot in on Tomko and Snitsky before Nash and Hogan ducked under the ropes. The show came to a close with HHH and Rey standing in the ring as members of the JWO made their way back up the ramp! END SHOW[/quote]
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Feb 10, 2010 19:06:09 GMT -5
i think you should come back to the pic fed board, and do that
it was still awesome though
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Post by deskjet on Feb 10, 2010 20:09:21 GMT -5
i think you should come back to the pic fed board, and do that it was still awesome though Thank you for your support. greatly appreciated. Yea, pic fedding is just too time consuming
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Post by unionjack on Feb 10, 2010 20:20:52 GMT -5
Awesome dj i enjoyed this alot i really like the jwo v mattel figures fued keep up the good work , mate .
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Post by deskjet on Feb 10, 2010 20:26:49 GMT -5
Awesome dj i enjoyed this alot i really like the jwo v mattel figures fued keep up the good work , mate . Thank you for the support. Greatly appreciated
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Feb 10, 2010 21:53:47 GMT -5
i thought that this was really great man!
not a lot of text feds use pictures which is a bit of a shame because they really liven up the show and allow the reader to visual things that text cannot describe accurately at times.
let me start by saying that the first picture (with the explosives/pyro) was awesome!
i would suggest limiting the pictures to 3 for each segment that is described. you don't want to have too many pics. you want a good balance.
this show was well written as well. Everything flowed nicely. grammar and spelling were good (that's always a plus)
the JWO is such a great group. i like the fact that they know they are figures.
anyway this was a great show and i will definitely keep watching! can't wait to see your H2H match =)
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Feb 10, 2010 21:55:48 GMT -5
i thought that this was really great man! not a lot of text feds use pictures which is a bit of a shame because they really liven up the show and allow the reader to visual things that text cannot describe accurately at times. let me start by saying that the first picture (with the explosives/pyro) was awesome! i would suggest limiting the pictures to 3 for each segment that is described. you don't want to have too many pics. you want a good balance. this show was well written as well. Everything flowed nicely. grammar and spelling were good (that's always a plus) the JWO is such a great group. i like the fact that they know they are figures.anyway this was a great show and i will definitely keep watching! can't wait to see your H2H match =) reminds me of toy story
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Post by ricflair4ever on Feb 10, 2010 22:17:56 GMT -5
The fact that a bunch of figures KNOWING they are figures and doing the takeover type angle is MORE entertaining than Hogan himself is on TNA is absolutley priceless to me. Lol. But yeah this is a fun read that takes an interesting and fresh take on a fig fed and has roots in the real life Mattel vs Jakks "feud" here on the boards. On a personal note ,you get bonus points for using my favorite non rsr jakks ring. Long live the RAW red SAR!
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Post by deskjet on Feb 10, 2010 22:46:15 GMT -5
i thought that this was really great man! not a lot of text feds use pictures which is a bit of a shame because they really liven up the show and allow the reader to visual things that text cannot describe accurately at times. let me start by saying that the first picture (with the explosives/pyro) was awesome! i would suggest limiting the pictures to 3 for each segment that is described. you don't want to have too many pics. you want a good balance. this show was well written as well. Everything flowed nicely. grammar and spelling were good (that's always a plus) the JWO is such a great group. i like the fact that they know they are figures. anyway this was a great show and i will definitely keep watching! can't wait to see your H2H match =) Lol. Thanks, and I appreciate the support! The fact that a bunch of figures KNOWING they are figures and doing the takeover type angle is MORE entertaining than Hogan himself is on TNA is absolutley priceless to me. Lol. But yeah this is a fun read that takes an interesting and fresh take on a fig fed and has roots in the real life Mattel vs Jakks "feud" here on the boards. On a personal note ,you get bonus points for using my favorite non rsr jakks ring. Long live the RAW red SAR! Glad you see it that way That's kinda what I was gettin at Thanks for the support.
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Post by Byron F'N Saxton Fan on Feb 11, 2010 1:01:03 GMT -5
Pretty good show.
The amount of pics is a bit too much I'm guessing, but I like it. Like the idea of qualifying to participate in the H2H Match. Suprised Hogan wants to go right then and there. Liked the HHH save with the sledgehammer. Good show and great pics.
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Post by deskjet on Feb 11, 2010 7:17:09 GMT -5
Pretty good show. The amount of pics is a bit too much I'm guessing, but I like it. Like the idea of qualifying to participate in the H2H Match. Suprised Hogan wants to go right then and there. Liked the HHH save with the sledgehammer. Good show and great pics. Thank you. Yep I experimented a bit with the number of pics and they will be cut down to no more then 2 a sgement. One thing I didnt want to do is make my show into a watered down pic fed. The vets and this board and others have helped so...I'm learning. I appreciate the support.
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Post by RatedWWEF on Feb 11, 2010 10:59:02 GMT -5
Fantastic work DJ, love the idea of mixing Mattel with Jakks. Look forward to seeing more from you.
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Feb 11, 2010 17:01:05 GMT -5
*wonders why all these people can't reply to other people's shows on here ever*
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Post by slappy on Feb 11, 2010 17:56:16 GMT -5
*wonders why all these people can't reply to other people's shows on here ever* I was thinking the same thing.
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