Ian
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Post by Ian on Apr 5, 2010 12:58:24 GMT -5
Ian vs Tylor Hardcore Match: Ian: Tylor First to 3 wins
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2010 4:51:05 GMT -5
I don't really know who you are but you seem to know what you're doing which is good. First off the jump into the filp was pretty good until the transition into the flip which then looked awkward. It was like choppy and not very well spaced. The short walk was pretty good just bend the joints a little more, mainly the arms. The climb was pretty good but it seemed although you forgot about the arms or couldn't be bothered doing them. the next jump was pretty bad as the curve was way off and the fall looked odd. You did have a decent show of the impact but the reactions lacked. All in all just spend more time on the animation and make sure it's done as well as possible before posting.
While I'm here I may as well reply to the other animation though I don't really get this. You need to go to the guide thread and look for the 'spacing' part as that will help you greatly and with a few tests and such you should be able to start incorporating it into your animations. You do an okay job of moving the joints but there is room for improvement so try to move every joint in every frame so the animation doesn't look stiff and put more effort in the reaction otherwise it just looks although the move didn't hurt at all. All in all though a nice start you just need to put some more time into it. If this is a match by the way my vote goes to the top animation.
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Apr 7, 2010 12:09:19 GMT -5
anymore 1-0 to me
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Post by alexgg on Apr 7, 2010 12:14:05 GMT -5
Yeah my vote is going to Ian, it is longer and more crative than just the swing of a bat. Its also got better motion and is smoother. 2-0
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Apr 7, 2010 12:19:33 GMT -5
thank you alex
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NAЯDO
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Post by NAЯDO on Apr 8, 2010 4:53:26 GMT -5
my vote goes to Ian, 3-0, it's over!!
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