Ian
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Post by Ian on Apr 9, 2010 13:27:31 GMT -5
 Creds To Sero I think |
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Post by alexgg on Apr 9, 2010 13:33:22 GMT -5
Yeah this is pretty sweet, but kinda plain.
The movements are nice and smooth but they are quite stiff.
Yellows back should arch more on the way down, and blue should have hes knees go straight>bent (no homo, matt)
Looks great though, your improving.
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Post by brigsdoom on Apr 9, 2010 13:54:32 GMT -5
Good ani but the yellow's leg should sling out a little bit and blues should bend a tincy wency bit. God i've been animating for maybe a year and suck still  |
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Apr 11, 2010 8:34:32 GMT -5
anymore replys ?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2010 8:52:55 GMT -5
Very stiff. Next time add some more movement to make it look realistic. Sort of looks like the blue stick dies and falls down :X but keep it up.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2010 22:58:17 GMT -5
Okay so like the yellow was damn solid during the lift up, the spacing was pretty good just it got a bit too fast in places but the joints were very well bent. But my main problem with this part and nearly the whole animation was the blue stick. It was extremely stiff and ruined the whole animation for me and the same can be said for the yellow stick. You did get the animation to look really smooth but it looks like you were more focused on that as apposed to making sure the joints were well bent. The reaction was okay though just a bit too simple.
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