Sabin
Main Eventer
Joined on: Apr 1, 2009 16:07:43 GMT -5
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Post by Sabin on Apr 17, 2010 20:43:36 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2010 0:54:14 GMT -5
The jump was okay just didn't really look spaced, you did bend the joints well though just in a frame or two it looked like you didn't. There wasn't a lift off so it looked like it just floated of the buckle, next time make sure that you extend the legs fully before going into the move. The air tome was okay - un-spaced and the spins were pretty odd as they stayed at the same speed throughout when the spin should get faster as the stick figure is in the crouched position. The reaction was there but he bounced looked good but at least you did a reaction. Overall pretty good just space it out.
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Post by alexgg on Apr 18, 2010 3:15:57 GMT -5
This looks great, very smooth just needs work on spacing.
The leg looks stiff so I think it whould extend out again after the jump.
I hate the 2nd twist as I find them making it look unrealistic and floaty, a few frames should be edited and delted imo.
Reactions are good, red should have more of one though.
Good job.
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