Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on May 21, 2010 13:41:05 GMT -5
New: Not my best i don't think:  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Old: What do guys think any tips on how to make it better?  Just made a new style =] |
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Post by alexgg on May 21, 2010 13:55:33 GMT -5
Remove a few frames so its not so slow.
It looks good but stiff at parts, and try to do the spins a little more high up so theres enough room for a landing.
Reactions need a little bit more work though.
good work.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 21, 2010 13:55:49 GMT -5
It's pretty good, smooth.
A tiny bit too slow,
Rope bounce was good but needs work.
I like the style alot.
You should put like a logo in the top right corner for a cooler more professional look.
Reactions were somewhat okay I guess, Work on spacing a little bit more.
The flip was good, But like I said work on spacing a little bit more.
8.7/10
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Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on May 21, 2010 14:08:01 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys =]
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Post by alexgg on May 21, 2010 14:14:39 GMT -5
I dont think you need a name in the corner, i never have had one but its up to you.
I dont think it makes it look more professional.
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Post by xReyAlsanecx on May 21, 2010 14:14:37 GMT -5
Movements look nice but it is too slow,remove some frames and apply some spacing and its great.
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2010 6:59:55 GMT -5
You're quite good just you need to space out your animations, I've been meaning to make a tutorial on spacing for awhile now but at the moment you can read the first aid thread. The joints could of been bent a bit better, like it looks like you skipped moving them in some frames of the animation and the reaction was quite good just do a bit more with the attacking stick. The ramp thing looks quite cool by the way.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 22, 2010 10:04:25 GMT -5
I dont think you need a name in the corner, i never have had one but its up to you. I dont think it makes it look more professional. Grr! I agree its up to you Jesse. But IMO I think it has a professional look to it.  |
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2010 10:43:16 GMT -5
I dont think you need a name in the corner, i never have had one but its up to you. I dont think it makes it look more professional. Grr! I agree its up to you Jesse. But IMO I think it has a professional look to it. If you keep it small and simple, and it kinda goes with the background, then yes, it does have a sort of 'profesional' look to it. Looks alright, the movements are pretty good, and the reactions don't look half bad either. It's quite stiff in mid-air and it's a bit floaty. Good work. |
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Post by Jesseversion1 on May 22, 2010 15:07:45 GMT -5
*Updated*
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