Sabin
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Post by Sabin on May 22, 2010 19:39:46 GMT -5
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on May 22, 2010 21:18:44 GMT -5
It needs spacing.
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on May 22, 2010 22:05:44 GMT -5
If you don't space don't tell others to space - will
I did tey to space but I'm afraid if I take too many off it will look choppy
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DB
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Post by DB on May 22, 2010 22:40:52 GMT -5
If you don't space don't tell others to space - will I did tey to space but I'm afraid if I take too many off it will look choppy You can always fix it. and trust me it would look better if you took out the unneeded frames. it would look a lot better. |
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trøy
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Post by trøy on May 22, 2010 23:16:05 GMT -5
If you don't space don't tell others to space - will I did tey to space but I'm afraid if I take too many off it will look choppy You can always fix it. and trust me it would look better if you took out the unneeded frames. it would look a lot better. Couldn't have said it better myself, and yeah, tylortylor, STFU. |
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Post by alexgg on May 24, 2010 13:22:49 GMT -5
Would look better if you got rid of some frames and edited the ones around them.
The movements are good, the stick needs to bend a little more though and the fall needs to be faster.
Also I think the back needs to arch more whilst airbourne, other-wise its looking good man might be your best.
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