Ian
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Post by Ian on May 29, 2010 13:27:59 GMT -5
 i dunno what this is i made it up as i went along cred rain and smash |
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trøy
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Post by trøy on May 29, 2010 13:35:41 GMT -5
Not too bad, I'm not even sure what happened, but it is smooth and the spacing is pretty nice. The reactions are meh, but I won't hold that against you. Good work.
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Ian
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Post by Ian on May 29, 2010 13:38:11 GMT -5
thank you
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 29, 2010 14:08:12 GMT -5
The starting pose was very weird IMO.
The way green lifted teal was good but stiff.
When teal was thrown out of the ring green's leg got really fidgety and choppy. No reaction WSE, And I really hate how you put your logo randomly at the ends of your animations IMO.
Your style is very good, and nice arena but just work on reactions, spacing & watching your movements as you go along.
Not your best IMO.
Btw, Change your name to "Ian" Simply Phenomenal is too long and AJ Styles has a girl voice and he sucks now IMO.
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Ian
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Post by Ian on May 29, 2010 22:00:29 GMT -5
1. its not my style
2. no im not gonna stop putting my logo at the end
and 3. you change your name
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Post by astrofan on May 29, 2010 22:54:10 GMT -5
1. its not my style 2. no im not gonna stop putting my logo at the end and 3. you change your name Alright Hitler, he isn't allowed an opinion? |
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Post by alexgg on May 30, 2010 4:59:35 GMT -5
1. its not my style 2. no im not gonna stop putting my logo at the end and 3. you change your name 1. Tru Dat 2. I aggree with Ka$, becuase imo it slows the animation down and makes the last frame stick around too long. 3. Change your name... Now that thats done with... Its a good animation but you dont bend the joints enough leaving it really stiff.
Blue seems to keep a straight back nearly throughout the entire animation, and green seems to do as well.
The reactions are okay but blue should haves his legs force down on the impacts and then bounce of the apron to the floor.
Also green looks a little fidgety and choppy towards the end, like you missed a frame or something then went back but messed up. idk
Looks good but looks weird.  |
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